Peninsula: The Twin Fish’s Vigil

This introduction reminds me of an urban novel from many years ago, The King of Fire

Rabbit teeth

Fishing God

I have read Chapter 55 so far. I originally read it based on the setting of the Twins, but it was a bit difficult to read. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. The first thing I saw in this chapter is that the author said that he wanted the male protagonist to have a growth process, but the early male protagonist was too unlikable. One was very impulsive. He started to be very hostile to the company and other people in TWICE, and he also had a physical conflict with Mina, which made the male protagonist seem a bit imbecile. Another thing is that there were too many words, such as "ridicule" and "annoyed", which made the male protagonist feel like Long Aotian was using too much force. Later, I can help the male protagonist cool down a little and calm down a little. Also, I said that this is a book written by fans, so I should have a better attitude towards the bunnies. Sometimes I see the male protagonist being aggressive and taunting, which makes me a little heartbroken😥. It doesn't feel like a teammate, but like a family. The other is that the female protagonists are too fragile, with red eyes and tears at every turn. It feels like all the female protagonists cried throughout the fifty chapters. It stands to reason that the timeline has been three years since their debut, and their mental endurance is at least relatively good, and they will not cry like Caiying when the male protagonist just says a word. It can be seen that the author put his heart into writing. Although the writing style of the new author is a bit immature, I really like the author's face when writing, so writing about Nayeon is the author's comfort zone.

In fact, labor service is not a bad person. You don't need to write labor service so bad.

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Chaeyoung

When will it be updated every day? It looks great. Thank you. Even if it collapses, I will write it. I want to see how it collapses. (Attached is a photo I took of Hong Kong 12.7Mina

Sue Yun

Congratulations on the launch of eight monthly passes