Peninsula: Starting from Shirley, the Cloud-Raised Girl Group

Choi Jinri

The author said in the group on May 25 that he had a car accident and suffered a landslide. The doctor diagnosed epidural hematoma and the prognosis was good. However, there has been no news since then and no messages have been answered in the group. Considering that the first two books were not good enough and they could be completed, it is really worrying about the author's current physical condition. Are there any medical experts among the book friends? Is epidural hematoma a serious injury?

The setting is quite fun, the timeline is too confusing, and the content after signing is too watery.

Xiao Ming

The content of this book after it was put on the shelves was all a mess, and Cherry was not surprised.

Originally two lines were fine, but now that it's been put on the shelves and another line has been added, it feels like it's going to collapse. Everything was fine before, now do this

Isn't there Big Tou, Yu, Lian, Lychee, Shin Yoona, Bae Suzy and all kinds of beautiful female devils?

There are too many timelines. I can't have a timeline for each character in the future. That would be too confusing.

To Chapter 72, the pace of the whole book is very comfortable. It combines the settings of the time and space gate in the ancient times, the simulation management of previous years, and the NPC-like operation game that became popular a few days ago. I have written a kind of hymn that is not only in line with the current public, but also has the flavor of ancient hymn and is worth reading. The game world in this article has taken on a special position very well. At present, the main plot has a slight redemptive tendency, that is, the current villain Shirley Tai Ruanruan should also have it in the future. At the same time, there are Xiaojuan who appears with the light writing style, and Dongdong who is newly introduced. Although they do not play a major role, under the multi-time setting, it is also a very interesting point to meet idols from different groups in different periods. At the same time, the complement of time and space also enriches the plot. For subsequent development, combined with the few books that have achieved success in recent years, I prefer a daily rhythm, focusing on the encounter between idols from different time and space in the game world and the encounter between the game world and reality. It is already very good to write these two major points. As for salvation and some heavy topics, yes, after all, hy itself is full of regrets, but saving and being saved are difficult to write about. It would be good if the game world makes up for some regrets for the little people. Therefore, the article mentioned that changing cognition at some point will resurrect Shirley in reality. I feel that this is not a good choice. It dilutes the effect of the brilliant setting. There is no need to rely too much on reality to expand the protagonist's ability. After all, the villain does not belong here, so I think it will be better to connect the villain's original world and choose a few branch lines. As for relationships, if the author would develop towards reality, multiple female protagonists would be acceptable, but since there is such a simulation game setting, it is like playing the daughter of a volcano. It is written as an old father trying to make his children better, and his emotions are understated. It is also a good choice to rely mainly on trust! Finally, I wish the author better and better writing! A big hit after being put on the shelves! I also hope that the villains in the book will become happier and happier, and find the emotions and direction they understand because of the game world.

I was chasing after the order, but you ended up cutting it?

Many ideas in Korean entertainment are amazing, but if the ideas are too big, it will easily break down 😒

Steal a ticket Thank you for reading my novel🥺

This kind of combination of time and space travel in the game is quite interesting, but the author's writing style is really not good. There are loopholes in the previous settings, and the language is the biggest one. Also, he likes to insert some bad jokes, which looks very embarrassing. After it is put on the shelf, it is very watery. There are not many chapters, and it is all water.

This book has not been cut. The author is recovering in the hospital.

I just read Chapter 60. The game plot is not interesting at all, boring, and there is no interaction with the protagonist. I came to watch daily Korean entertainment, not to watch the game simulator... If there are still too many game plots in the future, and the real-life plot is very good, then I can change the book and read it.

Calling for a miracle, come on, the author

Personally, I think this book ranks high among the latest Korean entertainment articles. The setting of the band's world hegemony is novel and the overall idea is good. After integrating the Japanese Warring States into it, it gets rid of the dilemma that many Korean entertainment articles have in the later stage of their career lines and have no choice but to turn into bulldozers.

This book is so good. . . The top three Korean entertainment articles currently serialized.

An unforgettable book. It's so imaginative that the author could be hospitalized. Even after being discharged from the hospital, I probably wouldn't be in the mood to write anymore. Pity

If you play a bad book, it doesn't matter if there is a real timeline. The past world line can also change the real line. My heart is as high as the sky, and my good ideas have been wasted. In the past, world lines could be counted as dungeons alone. This time the game was ruined. Fortunately, I felt something was wrong and jumped out of the car early 🙂

After being put on the shelves, a batch of watery contents

More than twenty, what kind of kidneys, this kind of thing is impossible to see. Imagine that China Entertainment has written about more than 20 female stars, and you can't even read it.

Why isn't it updated?

I haven't updated it for so long, so I'm sure it's gone. I'll give it a fragrance.

Why did you delete your comment before entering the palace?

The subject matter is very fresh, but there are too many bad jokes and the dialogue is inexplicable.