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It's the first time I've seen a short story recommended for a new book. It's strange.

I was a little confused about this book, but seeing that it was about realistic themes, everything clicked. This book is provocative. If you find it boring, then don't read it as soon as possible. I took a look at the short story in the first volume. It should be about food, but I can't understand the actual story at all. The writing logic is too fancy. I can only comment like this. Secondly, the problem of personal pronouns and paragraphing in the article is particularly serious. Man, boy, old man, woman, middle-aged man, middle-aged woman... Except for the protagonist's name in the first article, Wang Shuang, I looked through the other characters and only gave them identity pronouns and descriptions of their actions. Very few of them had their own names. There is almost no description of appearance and expression, and it is all supported by dialogue. The second is the segmentation situation. The reading experience is not good. Large paragraphs are stacked like pieces of meat, and reading difficulties rise sharply. That's it for now.

It should be "AI", it says "Al" in the introduction.

The author wants to write about love and death. I think the writing is good, but the details need to be polished and the logic needs to be tightened.