Soul-Hunting Journey of a Sickly JK

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Can the author turn off the anti-theft function? Want to see

Is this kind of writing really considered transformation writing? I remember that in the past, the selling point of this type of writing was the drama of male thoughts and female bodies. Regardless of the singles, lilies, marriages, or broken shoes, they were all written around the selling point of men wearing women. Now, starting from the transformation story, I feel that it is a light novel story written from a neutral perspective. No, there is no drama of male thoughts looking at the world with a female body. The protagonist is a woman who does not like men, and the rest is no different from women.

I think there are some points that confuse me. The first is the problem of combat missions. Based on the introduction and the current chapters I have seen, it is very likely to collapse. The integration of the world view is relatively rigid, too much and too complicated. Secondly, as for the protagonist's upgrade method, I feel that the description is not clear enough. It should be written that there is a fixed meditation practice every day to cultivate spiritual power, or to consciously find self-cultivation methods. If it is not corrected in time, , he will definitely become a eunuch later. Secondly: the relationship between the protagonist and Ji Lin, I don't want the protagonist and Ji Lin to continue to be entangled like this. After all, the real original owner has died long ago. If Ji Lin is a person with weak ties and indifferent feelings, I think it is okay, but now it appears that she loves and hates this niece. The way she handles it is like a child. The niece was bullied and was kicked out of Tsukimi Shrine. The original owner's things were taken away by others. She didn't know it and didn't investigate in depth. As a result, the original owner died and she didn't even know. The original owner was written like a tool, just to serve the current protagonist. Now Ji Lin has started to treat the protagonist in such a blunt manner. She has also become a tool, someone who gives the protagonist skills to help him deal with things. She also has strong problems with Ji Lin's character description. She is written like a capable strong woman, but some of her previous disguises, such as the artificial customer service, make me feel that it is not something that her character would do. She does not seem like someone with this kind of idea. If it is described as someone giving her such an idea, and the language in the communication with the customer service is more cold, I think it will not be too bad, but now I feel very disconnected. I hope that at this point, the protagonist should cut off Ji Lin quickly, and it is best to be able to I directly confess that I am not the original owner, otherwise, if I continue to be entangled like this, I think the writing is very confusing, and I even directly refer to the eunuch, and later said that she will also invite friends to her home for gatherings. I feel bad, and it is too cruel for the original owner, so from the beginning of the contact with the protagonist, I directly come to the door, explain my situation clearly to the protagonist, and directly analyze and explain all the situations to the protagonist. Just say I am your mother Sister, I'm sorry that I didn't come to you before, because I still couldn't accept your mother's death in my heart, nor could I accept your father's marriage to your mother, so I chose to close myself off and ignore any related matters. I thought my life was very dangerous, and I was not suitable to bring you here. Anyway, your uncles and aunts are many, and they will definitely take care of you, and you will definitely live a better life. And now I know, if you participate Entering into this kind of dangerous thing like slaying demons, I realized that you have such ability, or I think you have participated in such things, but it is impossible without the ability to protect yourself, so I came to the door and hoped that you can live with me from now on, or pursue the life you want. But since you have already participated in such things, I need to evaluate you. If you have such ability, you also want to be killed. To slay demons, then accept my training so that you have the ability to protect yourself. If you are incompetent and just accidentally participated in this kind of thing, then please let me compensate you and use my ability to find a good living environment for you. There is no problem with food and clothing for a lifetime. You can ask me anything you want. Why is her niece in such a living environment? Is she forced or by her own choice? If these have not been investigated, then it would be too funny. It is impossible for her to sit in such a position. The current description is more that she fights alone without a team. If she is only responsible for fighting, then it is okay to say that after all, there are others to collect and collect work-related matters. To do it, she just needs to fight. The author might as well just write it as a rich lady who doesn't know the world and doesn't know how to deal with it. She looks like an adult on the outside but is still a child at heart. Otherwise, it would be really poisonous The protagonist's daily life and task descriptions are also relatively disconnected and blunt, without purpose. She seems to follow the system completely, without her own ideas and no detailed settings. There will be a small task or something like this in three days, and you can live a normal life at other times, so it is best to overhaul the article now. As for the protagonist, the relationship between the original owner and Ji Lin, it is better to deal with it more clearly as soon as possible. For example, confess that you are not the original owner, or pretend that you are the original owner, and directly explain your needs to Ji Lin. Otherwise, it will be too passive. , Makes me feel like a child who has never felt love before, will be at a loss when faced with these kind intentions, and slowly accepts and finds a better way to get along with each other. Whether it is the reader or Ji Lin, it is actually relatively easy to accept. Otherwise, I would feel worthless for the original owner. I was bullied to death, and Ji Lin didn't even come to see me. Where is the so-called family affection, and where is her love? It really makes me feel speechless. I hope the author can change it. It really needs a big change. I think the writing is very confusing now. It will probably stop updating after 100 chapters. Another point is that Tsukimi Kiyokazu appeared in the article just now. The author also said that it is impossible for him to participate in such a thing at his level. So how did he participate? Yes, because of regional reasons, or because of the personnel, or the clues provided know more about this matter, or maybe she saw her niece, so strange, it doesn't look like she was consciously involved in it before, this is also a point, otherwise, I think it is just to create conflicts

Creation is loneliness Pretentious child's play Compared with beautiful dreams Reality overflowing with blood is undoubtedly a masterpiece Fairy tales are just deception Reality has long been smeared with desire If you can't look directly at reality Then let me dig out Those eyeballs that can only be used for decoration Unexpected stories Let me draw the curtain.

Have you ever been a JK? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

It's even, the writing is pretty good. However, there are some shortcomings. First of all, there are too many jokes, which affects the sense of substitution. It would be much better if there were fewer jokes. The second shortcoming is the plot setting. My aunt said that the Qiming Society is difficult to find and no clues can be found. As a result, the roadside monsters that the protagonist kills are all members of the Qiming Society. Although it can be explained by the special characteristics of the protagonist, it is still a bit flawed.

It seems like there are few people, but actually all the bs players are here.

Brother, don't run away. He's very good. He has the qualifications of a magical girl.

I hope there won't be any plot like "With great power comes great responsibility", it will be frustrating for others to work in vain 😅