Let the Anger Fly for a While

But this thing involves the country, and few authors can handle it well.

The first thing is to contact the official, and basically the general direction of subsequent development has been locked. In the current environment, it is impossible to build an amphibious dojo in the small circle drawn. On the contrary, the more words and ink is spent, the less satisfying it is. Everyone knows the ending. The longer this paragraph is, the more watery and wasteful it feels. Especially the upright character of the protagonist The second is the shift in focus. What I wrote above is actually a small thing. The description of the protagonist and the plot are all point-to-point, which is what the author is good at. But if it is related to the country, the plot will easily expand uncontrollably.

The comment section is full of verification, this book takes jujube pills

What is Jianghu? I don't know What is Jianghu? Jianghu is about human nature and sophistication

If you don't know how to write about your relationship with the country, try not to write about it, otherwise it will be too embarrassing if you don't handle it well. Although it is generally considered positive, the ruling class of a country is composed of many individuals. To put it bluntly, you cannot stop any one of those big shots from having bad thoughts about you.

I get annoyed when I see Wing Chun, but I can't beat a guy who brags about it every day. If he really fights, he'll turn into a bastard boxer.

The beginning is amazing. The third golden chapter is really golden. It's hard to say what happens next.

Even if there are guns in the normal world, why do you insist on having guns in this world? , Why do you mix guns and give the protagonist martial arts? Let the protagonist be a martial arts loser and just use a gun to attack. Really boring

No one writes about modern domestic extraordinary people. Those who write about parallel worlds are either Blue Stars or other names. Writing about modern domestic extraordinary people is like walking a tightrope, and it is easy to be cheated.

The writing style is okay, but I don't like novels with this kind of subject matter. If the writing is not good, it is shit. If the writing is good, it will be banned directly. After seeing dozens of pictures, what should I say after seeing them? It smells like the dragon group and the dragon king, which is a bit awkward for me.

It's a pity that the official was involved, otherwise it could have become a high-quality product.

I belittled it, but I still have my own way. Could it be that the follow-up is that I hand over the world of Xianxia to Guo Jia?

It would be nice to just write about martial arts honestly, but I want to mix guns into the mix.

If Zhenqi becomes official, wouldn't it mean that the protagonist will change his profession to a Celestial Dragon?

Out of 10 points, I give you an 8.4 Because you have 1.6 The memes are dense and interesting. But I am more worried about whether the settings behind the Not Alone Method will collapse after expansion.

Tell me your feelings after seeing the paid chapters. First of all, the author's writing style is indeed humorous. Most of the plots are natural and smooth, and some jokes are well played. In addition, the writing style is quite delicate, and the plot development method and foreshadowing are also very designed. Overall, the author really put a lot of thought into creating a book. It is a novel novel with good reading experience. I will subscribe for about fifteen chapters to try it out. If the level of the plot remains the same, I will continue to read it. Next, I will discuss what I think are the shortcomings of this book. In my opinion, there is a possible lightning point in this book. A poisonous point that has emerged is that the book has a strong connection with the country too early. I can see that the author should have a complete outline, and the logical chain of the subsequent plot should also have been conceived. However, in my opinion, while this design advances the plot, it is also premature. The development direction of the plot is restricted. The advantage of this book in the early stage is that the writing style is relaxed and humorous, rather than the author's laborious plot design. After the strong connection with the country, although the author is also trying to maintain a humorous writing style, the feeling of freedom is no longer there, which is still a bit regretful. The poisonous point I think is mainly concentrated in the author's attempt to lay out some plots about the social conditions of ancient society to contrast with modern society (I guess this may involve some plots of modern society transforming other worlds), but the shaping of the characters has not kept up, mainly focusing on the characters of Teacher Qin and Sap. On the other hand, Teacher Qin's flaw is that he is too impatient and does not fit the image of a high-ranking National Security official. Sap's flaw is mainly reflected in his low understanding of the social status of the feudal monarchy in the process of suppressing bandits. In addition, the character creation is too out-of-touch and frivolous in order to create obstacles, which does not fit the image of a professionally trained National Security agent. And as a 12-year-old amateur reader who loves politics and history, when reading some of the author's descriptions of social systems, I always have an awkward feeling that it is not in place. In fact, it may lead to a possibility that those who like to read urban fantasy feel that the pace is slow, and those who like to read history and politics feel that it is not in place, thus forming a situation that is not flattering to both sides. I hope the author will pay attention to it. Overall, this book is worth recommending and worth reading.

Nowadays, the starting point is corrupt and the author is being insulted everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then those who insult the author will feel guilty and retreat, and moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun! I have heard that calves born in sheep pens do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? The reason why Qidian is strong is that we have inherited the etiquette and skills of our ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can earn tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! But Pujie cannot get royalties, and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who updated less, delayed, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it.

Is he actually a eunuch? I read the comment section and give some suggestions for future books. Don't authenticate, don't authenticate, don't authenticate! It's not to avoid platform bans, but because there are too many ghosts on the part of the authenticators, and the comment area is smoky. Readers who don't testify will run away after reading it. This is one, and the other is the same sentence. There are too many ghosts on the witnesses, and writing too much can easily turn you into a ghost. A friend of mine is like this.

RT, after reading the first tens of thousands of words, I got busy and stopped chasing. I was planning to continue chasing, but I saw something was wrong in the comment area...

Can the protagonist's strength be improved a little? It's a bit weak. After reading dozens of chapters, the performance is about explosive. He can't even explode a building. If he walks sideways in the real world, he will at least explode a continent.

Not enough. It's very lighthearted and funny, and the protagonist is also a man who is not a supervisor.

It was a lot of fun. I thought traveling back in time would be a failure, but it was actually quite fun.

It's very well written, I hope the author will start a new book

I feel like there is something wrong with the rhythm and plot behind the 25w words, so I have no idea of ​​following up.

I'm going crazy. I need to be banned. My nephew is still a bit too much.

Why is it written like this? It's completely broken, right? Where's the foreshadowing you mentioned earlier?

Do you have a fan base? Author{"NickName":"Mr. Mao","UserId":314313358}