Pokémon Mistakenly Travels Through the Mythical Version of the Three Kingdoms

The story is good, and the fusion of Pokémon with the background of the gods is very interesting. But the writing skills are weak, many sentences are not fluent, and I feel a bit self-indulgent. First of all, the sentences should be spoken smoothly, and then the Pokémon should be better integrated. We have just seen Dong Zhuo return to Luoyang, but this part of Pokémon does not account for many. In itself, the combination of the three plus Pokémon should be 1 plus 1 > 2. You can't stack two together and it will become weaker. Writing is the foundation and can be improved slowly, but the logic must be straightened out and small errors reduced, otherwise it will affect the perception. The monthly pass is for you, keep up the good work🙂

Moreover, in the mythical version of the Three Kingdoms, I feel that the author has a completely elite view of history. Look down on the Yellow Turban Army, you know, this is a riot of one class against another class, forget it, let's not talk about it, what is the state of that novel now?

Why can't it be the mythical version of the New Three Kingdoms😠

Go to Sister Lily and ask for a recommendation

The subject matter is relatively new, but unfortunately the writing is not strong enough. There is a main line, but once the dialogue is designed, it is particularly dramatic. When it comes to exploring the world of Pokémon later, it feels even more awkward. The protagonist is like a confused college student, with no strong logical behavior and fixed character image. It's a pity that the new book issue is not good, and it will be difficult to achieve results in the future.

To be honest, Shen Sanyi was actually a very good novel at the beginning, but as it went on, it became more and more watery and watery for the sake of water. The combat power setting is also getting worse and worse. I went back to re-study twice but was persuaded to quit by Shui Wenshui.

Scented in advance. After all, you know.

Brother, you are not writing a novel, it feels more like an outline.

Generally speaking, the advantages of Pokémon and Goddess III are not outstanding in front of you. Let's not talk about your priority. Regarding Goddess III, the original plot is already very good. You can only fill in the gaps in the writing. I even feel that the protagonist is a bit redundant in this aspect. Wu, in terms of technology, he is also a weakling based on your settings. I don't understand Legion, but the technology is about the same. If it's not Pokémon, it's really superfluous. As for Pokémon, according to my personal preferences, 1 is the plot. If you set it in ancient times, just pretend it doesn't exist. 2 Is the interaction between people and Pokémon. 3. Pokémon's denial of another time. I didn't feel that it was written in front of me. After writing more than 100,000 words, I feel like there is still a lot of the plot of the original work. It's actually not that big of a deal. I just want to read it again. But your writing style... If I hadn't read the original work, I really wouldn't be able to stand it. Pokémon Goldfinger is a very good idea, but it's a pity

I feel like Pokémon is a bit weak in Shenzhou III.

When Liu Bei meets Zekrom, he might not immediately become an ideal hero.

It's too weird for your Pokémon to speak directly. Then why does the Psychic type need telepathy?

I stopped updating for seventeen days, writing a mythological version of the Three Kingdoms fanfic. Those who are still alive remember one copy

Come on, at least write more than one million. Of course, if it can be tens of millions, even better 😁😁😁

The idea is pretty good, but the writing style doesn't look like it was written by AI.

After reading three chapters, I found that I couldn't understand it. I had watched Pokemon and the mythical version of the Three Kingdoms, but I couldn't understand the first three chapters. I couldn't understand the characters' behavior and thinking patterns. I was defeated.

God III is not finished yet. I haven't read the rest since chapter 4000 and I don't know where I ended up writing it!

The strongest ones among Shenzhou III have almost reached the single-universe level in universe structure. After the patch of Arceus, the super-unit universe started, and the world view is larger than that of Shenzhou III.

The label says "Struggle for Hegemony". It doesn't mean "Struggle for Hegemony" and then help others conquer the world.

Pokémon planned an event at the Yasukuni Shrine, but everyone forgot?

"Ding-deng-deng-deng-deng! Ding-deng-deng-deng!" (Guan Yu's song sounded)

Is this the version of the mythical Three Kingdoms novel?

In fact, you may consider moving down the timeline, as the latest chapter coincides with the thundering of the Demon God Yunmengze. Just start from there and come up with another ending. I haven't read your novel yet. This is Yun's suggestion. Don't blame me.

Why are the visions related to the protagonist?