Survivor Manifesto

Niubi, the writing is very good. By the way, where does the author live? How old is he? I will ask. He will not call the police 🙂

1. Nie Wen collapsed too quickly. The rapid collapse from a cunning, lively girl to a mentally ill patient who relies on others is not very reasonable. The struggle process is too short, or almost non-existent. What about the relationship with God's choice? You decode it in depth! 2. The root of suffering is economic poverty, and the root of poverty is the social system. Cousin, Huanlele, father, Xiaobin and others all have family problems. Except for Huanlele, which is the cause of the real estate crash, the rest are all attributed to the conflicts between family members. Poverty is the root cause of the intensification of conflicts. Does it have anything to do with God's game of choice? 3. In the face of financial difficulties, some people struggle, some compromise, some fall, and some transfer the pressure to their families. Individuals have personal choices, and there are different results. Similarly, where is God's choice? 4. Under the economic crisis, the pressures of unemployment, job selection, spouse selection, job selection for higher income, schooling, mortgage and car loans are common problems that everyone faces. It is difficult to empathize with them because they are entangled in their own internal friction. 5. The plot seems to be getting further and further away from the game of God. I know you want to write about the different attitudes and choices between the bottom class and the elite, but it seems that God has become a protector of the elite? Playing with the bottom? What is the purpose of the Truth Organization? Why do they object? Are there any conflicts of interest? Looking back at what happened with Li Jianshe earlier, it seems irrelevant. 6. If you really want to write about suffering, the connotation expressed in Kollwitz's paintings can be used as a reference. 7. The most bitter people actually only need a little sweetness. Now the plot is almost all bitter, and everyone is speechless. After all, people have to look forward. It is so bitter and not sweet at all. How can we go down and look down? 8. Finally, the author, the past is in the past, there is no point in struggling. It has completed its historical mission. What is needed now is to look at the front and decide the next step based on the previous step taken in the past. Learn from past mistakes, and use the good things of the past to support the present and future.

This book is completely written in the traditional published novel style, which is very different from the current online novels, but it is also well written. I can only say that you, the author, are very brave.

Come on, come on, I haven't seen such a touching novel in a long time.

There are not many creative ideas. The author is still a newbie, right? I have a suggestion for the author. You don't need to write too long. Your writing style and content are only suitable for writing short and medium-sized novels, similar to those published by paper media such as "The Murderer in the White Night" and "Forensic Doctor Qin Ming". Since you have decided not to follow the same route as traditional online articles, then write the personalized content to the extreme. Seven or eight hundred thousand The length of the words is enough, and the essence is concentrated enough. Five or six hundred thousand is enough, and this is also suitable for a series of articles. As the protagonist of the novel, he can keenly detect the explosive points of any inconspicuous things, and dig deeper. There is still a lot of room for creativity in a series of articles.

I can give you a fairy tale for the story, the part about God fascinates me so much😋. But why do you keep writing emotional scenes with the heroine? Every now and then, a warm daily routine of the male and female protagonists is inserted🤗. This is not the point. The point is that I think the author is going in a somewhat orthodox direction of martial arts. Let's not mention that the heroine was raped by her best friend's father. Later, the male protagonist's brothers went to an underground nightclub. Why does the heroine keep being a concubine here? 😅

There is a sense of reality that is rare in online articles, and I am not averse to the first person. Maybe this novel is not the first choice for readers who only pursue emotional climax, but it is very suitable for me.

No one will read your first person statement. I thought it would start with a supporting character telling a story to introduce the setting, and then the protagonist would appear after a chapter or two. I didn't expect it to be purely a first-person pronoun. I can write up to 100 pictures, but the author has the perseverance.

My mental state is extremely poor and I have self-destructive tendencies. It's too depressing and I won't watch anymore.

The so-called agent of God blatantly incited public opinion but the country did not intervene? The author underestimates the state machinery! This kind of thinking can prevail in Europe and the United States, but not here. This involves the fundamental concept of founding a country and cannot be changed by a small group of people if they want to! If it is true that the state machine did not intervene in the book, then there is only one possibility, that is, the higher-ups are fighting for their wits. But this involves another problem. When the fundamentals have not changed, no fool at the top will do such a thing. Only when the general trend of society has changed or when the suppressed situation is about to explode, will there be either "speculation" or "innovation" figures. Also, does "god" revolve around the protagonist? Too thin, too many coincidences

Is the author actually too fat? Can I recommend myself?

Wonderful, really good. Everyone sees it from a different angle and feels differently. It is not easy to write realistic novels. It requires a deep understanding of life and concise writing, especially in the current environment where people avoid talking about reality and are particularly easy to be blocked. Most authors turn away from reality and pursue fast-paced and imaginative ideas. Today, there are more and more bad articles. Such profound online articles are rare. I think the author really wrote it carefully. I will continue to follow it until you lose your serious attitude or are forced to stop writing.

It's a very interesting novel. It has controversial male and female protagonists and a worldview structure similar to that of a pornographic novel. The author obviously has a certain writing ability and depicts the small characters quite delicately. Compared to the novel about fighting monsters and upgrading, it is simpler and more interesting. As other comments said, it is a pity to put this book in the online text, and is it really placed in the science fiction section instead of the suspense section? It's so funny. I browsed through the suspense section for a long time and found nothing interesting. Finally, I found a good suspense article in the science fiction section.

Try your best and squirt qwq

Rt, I feel like there are so few people here, why don't you guys take a chance? How come I've never seen the author speak before, and the full text is saved and posted on time?

Grass jelly, but more poisonous. See if you can accept it, first person, and crotch tragedy (the heroine was raped + suspected of selling herself). I like the first person very much. The tragedy of my crotch is that my poison resistance has been full for a long time. Looking at this thing is like eating and drinking without any fluctuation, so be careful with low poison resistance.

Very good, my personal profile: the author is Xiao Chunan who has been writing novels, but is a bit into the street.

I really like the author's writing, which is cold and restrained yet has strong emotional tension. It's like a lonely cash machine in the middle of the night with 110,000 yuan in it. My father also had a life full of holes due to insecurity and low self-esteem. The respected teacher denounced the protagonist's crime in a warm and calm tone. Every sad trivial matter is a detailed and plain narrative. In this indifferent atmosphere, the protagonist is as paranoid as a mental patient, chasing fragmented clues about 'god'. It's really romantic. I hope the author can give a discussion to the readers

I have basically ordered all of your book. Don't die 😭

The oracle that the protagonist first came into contact with was Li Jianshe The first person to encourage the protagonist to write a book was He Bi, who later promoted the development of the plot many times Personally, there are currently two main lines 1. Li Jianshe - Nie Wen - (murder case) - Xiao Dayong - (the earliest layout of God so far) - Qin Lang (the earliest oracle known to the protagonist so far) 2. Tu Qiang - Tu Mingzhi - Fraud network (Li Jianshe, etc.) - Yang Guang - Lawyer Liang - Sun Yu - Nie Wen Important roles The protagonist's cousin (oracle) and colleague Qin Lu (his personality has changed a lot), the latest news is known to be related to Xiao Dayong, and is suspected to be related to Qin Lang. He actively triggered the male protagonist Shura Field, which may be considered in addition to emotional factors Known God's ability Survival multiple-choice questions Instructions to people (not mandatory?) Give specific characters the ability to predict, at the cost of lifespan The ability to notify in advance through predictions 1 The sun disappears for a short period of time (does not affect gravity) 2 Individual life span limit 3 Fixed number of deaths Pits or foreshadowing The main activity location of the character is only Are there other maps that are close to the protagonist's life, such as Shenjing City and the protagonist's hometown? The sun's disappearance ability is too strong, which may conflict with God's "unfreedom", and too strong an ability can easily lead to boredom Both the protagonist and Nie Wen have mental illness, and any story told in the first person may be an illusion The introduction remarks may indicate that the story mainly focuses on the villain The struggle of things, rather than gods changing the social order, explains the silence of the official forces, but the scale of the confrontation with the Truth Organization is difficult to control I initially expected it to be a science fiction with a suspenseful beginning like the Three-Body Problem. The Truth Organization is a bit like the Adventists of Proton, but the style of the Three-Body Problem is relatively restrained. The first perspective of this book inevitably has a strong personal style Sometimes I feel that the author writes a book , just like the protagonist following God's oracle Worry, anxiety, doubt, fear, paranoia and madness Just like the cheap noodles hidden in the Western restaurant's steak knife, which makes the noodles taste like steak, The place where you are curious is too plain and makes you more curious, People who are undecided need to read with caution Uncertain information and memory, Unexpected events and emotional conflicts, frequent individual psychological monologues, fuzzy hints of dimensional walls, almost no regular divine intervention make the tone of this book relatively depressing, trivial and heavy, important information appears in flashbacks many times, even the duller plots are difficult to feel buffering, which makes it difficult for most readers to Maybe you can save it and read it to reduce the information load and emotional stimulation Ending guesses: Collective hallucination, time and space reset, memory cleaning, alien technology Suggestions The protagonist group seems to have a tendency to self-destruct, I hope the survivor's declaration will not become no one survives What is the first book you have read in which the protagonist group dies? I just remember the Dragon Clan

The truth is Sheda. I probably understand it a little bit. They still have to thank me if I kill Sheda 😁

I felt that the writing was too depressing. After reading the previous chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. Seeing the protagonist's failure was like looking in the mirror. No, the protagonist is much stronger than me. I was so anxious that I felt like I was going to have a mental problem if I continued reading.

Finish spreading flowers 🌸, open and close 😁

I feel like the author has written a little too much about the emotional drama, but I'm still looking forward to the decryption part about God.

The truth written here is so confusing. It feels like it is a satire. There is no story at all, and it has no purpose. God seems to be just a decoration. It is sarcastic after being divorced from the story. What else can I say?

The writing is good and the sense of immersion is okay, but the plot doesn't feel like there's much interesting in it and it's bland. The overall feeling is average, and some plots are inexplicable.

I'm very curious about the current data. I read it every day. Yu Xia, why don't you come out and reveal the truth? 🙂

151 And the poop-wiping part 666 This book also has a sense of life, and even has such realistic things 😭

Ending the show, the relationship between these people is so messy

I haven't watched it for a long time, and it's finally finished. Sprinkle flowers.