The Spell Returns: I Don't Lack Anything Now!

It is better to read the original work. The protagonist's appearance is of no use. You say he saves people, but the plot has not changed at all. You say the protagonist is strong, but he has no record or assists. Summarizing is a waste of time.

12 Spells. You have limits. Readers say that it is too strong and easy to collapse if you press it without any restrictions. So my evaluation of this is

I'm halfway through watching it now, and there are no major changes in the plot direction. It's just that I saved a few more passers-by and a few supporting characters. I don't see the protagonist, a time-traveler, having any affection for people or places, and I don't have any sense of reality when writing about saving people. The only character who has a lot of description, Zenwon Mayi, doesn't seem to have a close relationship with the protagonist. She is said to be a tsundere, but she is just arrogant without writing it out. It can only be seen that the author is very greedy for Zhenyi's legs, and he has to mention it every time

Why not just draw by lottery, or choose by yourself? If the hours are divided into 12 hours, how to use the protagonists in the evening? Or stay up late every day without sleeping? 😴

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It's really good at suppressing combat power. I don't see the main character's use at the moment. He can't compete with Su Nuo in physical skills. It's really funny. Cows and sheep can't match Su Nuo's speed. Sheep can't defeat Su Nuo's soul. Tigers can't use all the spells. Even if you only use six, you can defeat Su Nuo casually. If there is a mechanism, the only way to lose is numerical value.

There is no change at all whether there is a pig's foot or not. It is hard to imagine that a time traveler who has twelve talismans and knows the detailed plot does not play any role. . .

I think you might as well just let the protagonist have a more powerful technique.

The protagonist saved a mechanical pill and did nothing else. The other contents are the same as in the original work.

No fun, unclear purpose, very boring

Shit, how is this different from the original?

I don't understand whether it's writing a fanfic or writing a spell to return to the battle and plug-in. The twelve talismans can be written like this. The best way to start the Huaiyu chapter is to not write the early stages of the Zero Sum main line, not to interact with popular characters, not to participate in important plots, so you have to go to Kyoto to start, and the direct exchange meeting with TM has started and ended. The whole person has to fast forward and skip the exchange meeting just like Ichijo. The most annoying thing is that you start like this and write that the male protagonist hates dogs and is called a loser by the whole school every day. Go to work, kids, and stop writing novels.

The protagonist can exchange the effect of using 12 spells at the same time today at the expense of using only one hour of spells today. Everyone understands the value of "I don't lack anything"

What should I do if I haven't seen Spell Return to Battle? I don't understand the plot at all, what is it all about? Did you write the book specifically for people who have read Spell Return to War?

Pure romance, everything has been done but the plot has not changed at all.

After reading Chapter 9, my personal impressions are as follows: It feels very urgent and compact, but I don't know what I am anxious about. It makes me a little confused, and I have to watch Spell Return to know the plot to feel more comfortable.

What did the protagonist do? It seems to be quite strong, but in fact, if Mao has any, it is not even as good as the high blood pressure garbage sub-plot in The End. You can go directly to the original novel. After all, this novel just adds a low-level character to the original novel.

The combat power of spells has been updated. Japanese knotweed has now become the new ceiling. The power of a small skill is the same as that of Wusu's big skill.

The author's writing is too rough and rushed. In fact, the idea and setting are quite good and can be polished slowly.

If you want to cheat, just open it as hard as you can, anyway, you can beat the aliens in Spellcraft Gaiden. That street, that warlock can create anything as long as he has enough magic power, just like the damn God of Creation. It seems that in the latest movie, people got the power storage battery left by the Jews, so when the energy is enough, he starts to be no different from Kami.

The protagonist is a trash, the Twelve Talisman is obviously a strong group, but the author just turned him into a trash golden finger, which is both unpleasant and not interesting enough.

The protagonist only has 2 hours of invincibility to fight the boss, and then switches halfway through the fight. I don't quite understand why the protagonist has the courage to challenge a real person. Did Liang Jingru give you the courage? Once you switch to other spells, you will no longer be G.

When writing a fanfic, there are several important points. First, change the direction of the plot and save the tragic characters. Second, have a high degree of interaction and communication with many characters. Third, there must be a sense of purpose.

I would like to ask, the author signed the contract a few days after sending the direct message. How was collecting and reading at that time? I am also writing a fanfic and would like to refer to it. Thank you.