Ice Lord: Starting from the Intelligence Refresh

How to put it this way, the most fearful thing about a post-apocalyptic survival story is the female protagonist, the collapse of prices, the Holy Mother, and the team, especially the team aspect. Many authors write that the team collapses all of a sudden and they want to write about everything. As a result, they fail to write well in any aspect, and everything is messed up. If the writing is not enough, it is better to just keep developing as a lone wolf. Occasionally, you can chat with other people to understand the information, which is equivalent to NOC, and you can also use the information from others to advance the plot.

It's a very good book, but it's written in a hurry, so the sense of immersion is not very strong. There are many places that can be written in more detail. For example, when you get first-level food to improve your abilities, you should introduce the abilities and how to improve them. You can also add some information on the training system, how to use information to get treasures, and how to use this treasure. , This is quite cool, it feels a bit pity to mention it in one stroke. Another suggestion is that the names of manufacturing inventions should not be foreign names. Now I feel a little uncomfortable when I see that the invention has a foreign name. The overall book is really good. I feel that the popularity should not be so low. Is it because of the Chinese New Year?

No update, do you want a eunuch?

I feel that the writing is incomprehensible. Many things that can be explained are not explained and I skip it directly. It is very fragmented.

Was it the inspiration for the Moving City book?

I recommended this book every day. When I saw that there were only 6 book friends, I felt a little sad for some reason. Come on, author.