1991: From Sailor to King of the Seas

First, write the main plot first and push forward the progress of making money. Don't write other miscellaneous things about your family's shortcomings. Otherwise, if you have to wait for a day or two for the 4 chapters, most of them will have nothing to do with the main plot. Readers will just change books and find other books... If you can't attract readers in the early stage, no one will wait with you in the middle and later stages. Unless you are a great person with a guaranteed reputation, others will wait and slowly lay the groundwork.

Indeed, you are not happy, your journey has been relatively dull, and you have helped a child inexplicably. It is really hard to say that you have to spend money to help others when you have not made any progress yourself. Every time you go out, it's not just about how much money you make, but at least a story, such as other foreign wealth and so on. Ye Yaodong from a small fishing village is very attractive because he gets some windfall every time he goes out. You just collect money after each run, and then continue running. If there is nothing to write about, you can just pass it off in one go.

The angle of the story is good, but the description may have problems. The protagonist and supporting characters are not profound and leave no impression, and it feels like a running account.

As the title states, it's pretty good so far, no major flaws.

The treasury bills are old in 1988, so what will happen in 1991? It is better to wait for the 92 subscription certificate.

I think his main task is not clear. His main boundary task is to raise money for the development of Pudong, and then to make money. If this is the main task, then if he takes over the grain station business, he is purely making trouble for himself. If he invests the money from the grain station business in a place where the name on the subscription certificate can make money, even if the loan is obtained, he will make more money. It's not that tight at all after it comes out, maybe it's because I'm forcing it on the protagonist.

It's different from what I thought. There are a lot of messy things and they are messy. Write cool articles in the cool article market. As long as the logic is online, the actual score will be worse. What everyone wants to read is the story from a small broken ship to an ocean cruise ship, rather than being immersed in one place all the time.

Did you see it at night? I went to speculate on subscription certificates.

What does your father do? A boat racer Oh? !

I really hate the big-mouthed follower, but everything else is okay, but that's what persuaded me to quit.