
Football: Starting from the 19-Year-Old's Integration of Ronaldinho's Template
足球:从19岁融合小罗模板开始
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I really can't stand it anymore. Aren't you embarrassed to see it? Ronaldinho, who is half as powerful, can't score more than ten goals in a game in the Chinese League. What you wrote is so passionate and passionate. You think that the Chinese League is the Premier League. Have you been to watch the Chinese League live?
The writing is okay. You are really bad at the beginning of the Chinese League. Such a low-level league has no influence. Even if you pay people to see it, there are probably not many people who are willing to do it. You still write it, I really admire it!
How did you come up with such a ridiculous introduction?
The Chinese League One is so awesome, it's a bit difficult to play well.
I originally wanted to take a look at Ronaldinho's template, but the introduction blew me away 💀
What kind of thing is this woman? She appears in a dozen chapters. You are really planning to write the protagonist to go to the five major leagues to play with her. You are crazy to start writing from the Chinese League One with the Ronaldinho template. No editor from Qidian told you this. You are the core midfield forward of Barcelona, and the single-core leader led the team to win the La Liga championship and the Champions League championship. You started writing from the Chinese League One, and your writing is not very good. Playing in the Chinese League One with the Ronaldinho template is like playing in the Premier League. When you go to the Chinese Super League, you can't compete with Wu Lei. I think you are trying to make fun of Ronaldinho's skills.
After reading more than 200 chapters in the catalog, you still haven't made any move to study abroad? ? ? What's going on? ? ? Ready to localize? ? ?
I can write about it in the first grade, but I'm convinced that it's written in such detail.
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What a great talent, I thought it would be a king crushing bronze. I didn't expect it to be blended into bronze, nb!
Seeing now, there are too many descriptions of psychological activities on the court, and I don't feel the passion, only hypocrisy.
I wrote it so passionately that I thought playing in the five major leagues 😅 would be enough if I just passed through the Chinese League One. If you surpassed the following, you would directly play in the five major leagues? I feel like Ronaldinho's ability is really poorly written by you.
The author's writing is okay, but the plot is a bit intellectually depressing and a bit self-indulgent. Even Evergrande at its peak can play in the second division. The historical Ronaldinho's 6 successes are absolutely inferior to playing in the second division, let alone the Chinese Super League and the Chinese First Division. There are also some fouls on the court. Unless it is a direct foul, high-level players will rarely be afraid of ordinary fouls by low-level players. The level is not at the same level. Unless you are in a professional game, and there is no serious conflict of interest, few players will kill you if you perform well. Normal coaches don't like this kind of reckless guy. The interests of the coach and the team are to win. A reckless guy without a brain can't play football. What the coach likes is a tough guy, not a reckless guy without a brain who is easy to get slapped with. Please don't write some witty jokes.
Have you used the same routine in recent chapters? It is repeated over and over again, without even a gap, that is, someone is watching for an excellent performance, being watched and fouled harshly, and then showing one's unyielding self, enduring the illness and injury and continuing to play, and the performance is even more amazing, and then the opponent pays more attention to it in the next game, and is watched again and again, and it repeats itself over and over again for several games! Vomit!
Writing about China is fine, but if you write about China without writing some unspoken rules, or being overly angry, it will be boring. Also, there are less than 5 cards in the opening. There are two very unpleasant points, which are a bit disappointing. 1. The system designates a team, which is annoying. You can let the protagonist become a professional football player within a certain period of time. But you shouldn't use the threat of unbundling to make the protagonist a player for a designated team. What the hell, the team will give you sponsorship money. Whose system are you? Second, when the protagonist is maliciously fouled or hit in the ribs, the protagonist knows that it is normal, but other people are so far away, and how can other people see the forced labor activities of both parties? Did that person hit the protagonist? Two people saw it. Ridiculous. Do they think they are VR cameras?
It feels like I'm writing about Slam Dunk. Are there so many football masters in China? Where?
After taking a look, I found a lot of problems
The opponent didn't have to leave the game even after receiving two yellow cards. This is even worse than Lao Zhan. After the protagonist's two assists, it was said that the protagonist passed and shot. Did the author forget the previous chapter after one chapter?
I really don't think it's fast enough, and I dare to touch any subject.
The writing is good, but I really don't recommend writing too much.
First of all, I must confirm your book, Pigeon Braised. But from a reader's point of view, the start of the Chinese League One is quite novel, but if you write too much about it, it will make people sick. Of course, if you write a book without considering your achievements and just want to enjoy yourself, then just pretend that I didn't say that.
It's been more than 50 chapters and I'm still playing in the First Division. I feel like Ronaldinho's talent is almost being assimilated.
I thought China was just overdoing it. Chapter 120 is still writing Chinese A, which is quite weird.
It's okay to write about China, but it's too long. It's about 40 chapters at most. I mainly watch football, but I've never watched the Chinese League One.
I'm really not interested in seeing the dozens of recent photos, should I wait until he goes abroad? 😥
The name of the male protagonist is very interesting. When I saw the name, I was not interested in clicking on it.
About the start of China League One
About the start of China League One The investment in China League One in 2015 and 2016 was not low. In the winter window of 2015, it ranked 17th in the world, surpassing J1, K1 and other leagues. That year, the Chinese Super League's investment ranked second in the world, second only to the Premier League. I originally planned to finish the domestic part within 100,000 words. Go to Europe as soon as possible. I found that I couldn't stop writing about China. The more I write, the better I get. As of now, I still haven't finished winning the first prize. Maybe it's because people in China are familiar with it. After all, I watched all the sixteen home games that year (there was also a FA Cup match against Jiangsu Sainty). The protagonist must go to Europe.
The only one who writes about the Chinese Super League 👍
Many people read the table of contents when reading sports novels. You have nearly 300 chapters and you are still in the top two! Will it take four to five hundred chapters to finish playing in the Chinese Super League?
I feel no love after seeing the domestic start.
Is it interesting for you to get Ronaldinho's talent to fry the fish pond?
Chinese Super League? What's so interesting about wallowing in a muddy pond?