Traveling Through the Entire Community, I Became the Property Manager

Is this a time travel survival story or a Machiavellian story? After reading Chapter 15, I feel that there is more content about fighting for power than about making a living through time travel.

I don't even understand the reason behind hiding in the city. As long as everyone knows the function of the system, some people will naturally be willing to take risks in order to survive. A few thousand people are much better than a small group.

In addition, I would like to recommend a game mercenary town to the author. You can actually develop it according to the model of that game. The community provides logistics, and the protagonist slowly advances in technology or transcendence. The property becomes a task release center in a different world. The owners complete tasks in exchange for survival points. The owners form their own teams and exchange survival points for daily necessities. The owners obtain materials and consume the survival point property to help process them into equipment or extraordinary materials or items.

The purpose of the system is to build a harmonious society. As a result, none of the people in it, including the protagonist, has that kind of good character. They are all thinking about how to gain power. They are all making various calculations. The protagonist is very hypocritical. If there is no system, this is a qualified dark apocalyptic novel. But since we need to add a system to maintain community development, at least it should be done to reduce community risks from the beginning. As a result, I only thought of making an announcement after chapter 30 or 40. Kill less people. After Zhou saw it, he directly killed people and showed a very retarded look. He also wore clothes. The protagonist himself had no intention of protecting his own community and wanted to develop it. When Su came, I thought it really brought a little positive energy. However, when he came, he said that the spare staff also solved the extreme selfishness, which made me confused. Is one of them a normal human being? They all look like gangsters. It feels more appropriate to write a gangster novel. Off topic, the protagonist can also appear in three smoking scenes in just five or six chapters. Maybe the author thinks it is handsome or it is a way to build a relationship, or in places where supplies cannot be replenished, luxuries like cigarettes are used to show status The heroine also suddenly went to bed for no reason.

The Lord of the End of the World article is written as a conspiracy. He was tricked into killing him.

After seeing the chapter where Zhou Hu breaks into the property and kills people, at the beginning of the next chapter, Zhou Hu is asked to do things through the computer (system) to maintain the stability of the community... Anyway, I can't accept this operation. There are basically no good people in the community... This is not a community time travel, but a prison time travel...

Even the rules of physics have changed after traveling through time? The electricity generated by the generator cannot be sent out, and we must rely on the power provided by the system. Does this mean that only the human body can conduct electricity among all objects?

Lin and Zheng can be set up as husband and wife or boyfriend and girlfriend... Set up as a renter and landlord...

I feel that the setting is good and the writing is okay, but there are too many tricks, which is also a small problem. Then I feel that there is something wrong with your protagonist's points. Do the points of other people in the community count as the protagonist's? Originally it was 4 points, but the protagonist set them to 5 points. But if they spend 5 points, does the protagonist really have to deduct 5 points? Of course, I may have missed something in my question, and I won't rule out this possibility.

The setting is very good, but it's a pity that the writing is not good. Try your best!

Readers who have read it don't need to go back and read it again. The direction of the plot has not been changed, but the wording has been modified to reduce the human emotions of the "property room".