The Ultimate Warrior in the World of Qin Dynasty

It is written that after being rescued by Han Fei, he can be his dog upright. From the current point of view, it is really similar to write the protagonist as Han Fei's slave. His words and deeds are really like a domestic slave.

The protagonist practices hard, climbs to the top, defeats powerful enemies, and finally gets his wish to become Han Fei's dog after becoming the first king 👍

Author, your writing is okay, but the novel does not have a main line. You have written so much to follow the plot. It feels like you are Han Fei's nanny. You don't know what the protagonist's needs are and what is the main line of the plot? You won't get any results if you keep doing this.

Give you the traffic that cigarette batches deserve. It seems small but actually the cigarette batches from the entire starting point are here 😂😂😂😂

Chapter 13 I can't stand it anymore. Why does the protagonist want others to pay for what he does? The doctor agrees and then he makes his own decision and involves others. It's a bit disgusting. And does the protagonist have to be around Han Fei? 🐶

It's boring. The plot is driven entirely by the original characters. The protagonist is just a dispensable accessory. The protagonist is bragging about how awesome he is, and then someone comes along who can compete with the protagonist.

Let me put it this way, the author, when the plot of the original work has no depth and the power system is not fancy, the only thing that attracts people is basically the body. Qin Shimingyue is basically dead like this, either to attract beautiful women or to seek the world... Everything else is a waste of time and a waste of the author's time. It's better to write other types of web articles

It's difficult to write with the protagonist if you want to be lazy, and most people won't buy it.

The current plot is too protracted, you are the protagonist, you are the protagonist It is too restrained

Talent Profile: The protagonist has reached the pinnacle of cultivation. Is it funny to snipe a person who is trying to break through to the pinnacle and get severely injured? You can tell the level of writing without even looking at the content.

Apart from adding the protagonist, what changes has the author made in the plot? If there is no innovative plot, it would be better to watch the anime again.

The main theme is aimless, stepping on the watermelon rind and slipping wherever you go! ! Life has no goal

The writing and sentences are all in the exaggerated, literary self-pleasure mode, including the dialogue. I really admire that some people can understand it 😒

It's just a tasteless nanny story, nothing special about it.

First, as an invincible novel (the protagonist is invincible by default at the beginning and end), it is not exciting at all. The plot is very bland and boring to watch. Second, you seem to have no main plot, and the protagonist seems to be drifting with the crowd. In fact, Yanyu has a lot of useful things that you haven't used. For example, as a game, the protagonist has a panel, attributes that can be added, innate talents and acquired entries, five secret skill slots, and a meridian system. Then there are the characteristics of Misty Rain, retracement and SL. You can take out these and design golden fingers for the protagonist.

This protagonist is like a tool man. I have never seen a person with a force ceiling look like a dog.

I have read Chapter 35 intermittently. This book is attractive, but I always feel that something is missing. I just thought about it and will tell you the problems I found: I feel that the setting of this book is that the protagonist is invincible, a game life + a story of being a nanny, actually There is nothing wrong with being invincible, there is nothing wrong with helping others, there is nothing wrong with solving the problems encountered, and there is nothing wrong with interacting with the characters. Then I think there are only two problems in it: 1. The protagonist helps others and takes care of others. There is no positive feedback. It's all Being altruistic means getting nothing but recognition from others. From the reader's perspective, it's always thankless and a bit boring 2. As a time traveler, the protagonist has invincible strength, but is always constrained by various rules and regulations. What he wants to do cannot be done, but what he can do It can't be done, all kinds of suppression, and ideas are not clear There is actually no problem in writing characters and plots in this way, but my positioning of this book is to be a refreshing article, with clear ideas, unrestrained, and positive feedback when doing things. These are very important. It is very important to make people enjoy reading it.

The timeline of Jing Salamander's appearance is several years earlier than the timeline of the opening of Tian Xing Jiu Ge. First of all, Zhang Liang is the third uncle of Confucianism, and his second senior brother Yan Lu is the child brought by Wu Ming, the target of Jing Salam's assassination. Yan Lu was only five or six years old at that time, and Zhang Liang of Tian Xing Jiu Ge is already a teenager. I thought he was older than the cartoon, but he is actually only ten years old.

Based on your introduction, I no longer have the desire to read any more.

Just write a reply and write a reply. If you don't have talent, don't write it.

To be honest, this subject matter still has potential, but it's not because of the update by the author. This novel has two pain points. One is that there is too much speculation nonsense, and Che Zhulun talks a lot and does not advance the plot. The nanny story is okay, after all, everything in Korea revolves around Han Fei. , The main reason is that you advance too slowly and become a nanny, and the second reason is that you have too few master dimensionality reduction strikes. To be honest, it seems that there are only four reductions to strikes in my image. You must know that you have updated so many chapters, and only the other party knows about this kind of pretense, which is completely unsatisfactory.

I feel that the problems of Qin Shi's fandoms are actually similar. The people and things in them can attract many of us readers who like Qin Shi, but the main plot is a bit difficult to deal with. The goal is too grand, either unfinished or a bit vain. The goal should be small. The plot of Qin Shi itself is too long. If the goal that is too easy to achieve is kept dragging on, it will appear to be weak. Anyway, in the end, we basically just see where the author can write. Anyway, Qin Shi itself is unfinished. It seems that there are so many unfinished fan stories about Qin Shi, which are quite different. 😒😒😒

Nanny Wen keeps helping others pee.