The World of Mist: Start by Getting the Lockpicking Skill

The front part is quite interesting. After reading it all the way, I feel that it has the qualities of a high-quality product. However, when I open a copy, it is not very good and it falls into a cliché. If you write about survival in the fog honestly, maybe it will be more interesting. Bringing a copy is like getting out of the way and turning into a routine article. But you don't have the writing skills to get out of here, and the plug-in settings are not quite right... What everyone is watching is that you unlock the fog and survive, not that you play weird dungeons. This plug-in should not be set up when playing a copy... The selling point is not set up well, there is a problem with the outline, and in the end, a clever novel turns into a routine article... It would be great if you could write it for me with your inspiration... Hey...

After watching part of it, my evaluation: Tomato level, almost the same as the one on Tomato

I'll try some chocolate. Guys, wait for me.

I seem to have seen a top-level grudge

The protagonist's spiritual power cannot be restored on his own, and can only be restored by the rewards of clearing the dungeon. It is simply baffling. I don't know what the author is thinking.

The dungeon is written in a mess. There are several dungeons in one chapter, and the mutual influence is very messy. Women don't sleep with each other, they just know how to do it. You are someone else's hired gold, right? After saving the world, do you want to change to a more difficult task? Where are the people? There are no friends or feelings, and the copy is not scary, so what if you become stronger silently, and become the world's master? Can you give me some positive energy?

Destroying communities quietly... It's too exaggerated. At this rate, humanity will be extinct in a few days.

To make thermal weapons ineffective, unless there is no pressure in the atmosphere

It can be seen that there are not many poisonous spots. But it's too conventional, as if it was written from a template, and there's nothing new about it.

Nice writing, please keep updating

After reading it, I think it's okay. Let's take care of it first.

You can pass the time when you are bored without thinking too much.

Brother Hui is here for a visit