Douluo Dalu: Who Says Double Pupils Must Be Control-Type?

The setting is rubbish, the plot is rubbish, and the imagination is rubbish. It's too early to put it on the shelves.

Why do you feel that the protagonist's soul skills are so good? Isn't something like mental shock capable of being used if you have high mental power and a little use of mental power? Dou San has already been used to a fault, and the protagonist doesn't know Dou San? Moreover, the protagonist is at level 20. How can he reach level 21 when he only absorbs one soul ring? Just abandon the Douluo setting and create your own system?

The signatures of 11 are Double Eyes, Qilin Steps, and Heaven-Mending Technique. If you add them all in, you will be able to directly open the world with Double Eyes at the same level in the future, use Kirin Steps on Foot that is lower than yourself, and use the Heaven-Mending Technique after minor injuries 🙂

The pace is too fast, Q reading style. There are too many hooks, the setting is too high, and there is no good plot foreshadowing. The fun is not simply achieved by setting it high.

I have written 13 books with 3.64 Million words. Each book has an average of several hundred thousand words. How did you become a level 5 author?

Quickly show off in front of Shrek

The setting was so outrageous that he died of poisonous poison.

Since I dared to seize the opportunity of Huo, why bother to write that I didn't seize it? Not to mention that the protagonist's operation was so sweet. In the end, it was just God's will and it was gone. I wanted to intercept Hu Tianmeng a month in advance, but ended up going to Xingdou to find it for a month. If I were to look for him for at most half a month, if I didn't find him, I would go directly to the east gate of Shrek City and squat down at Beibei Tangya. If I followed these two, I would find Huo, and if I followed Huo, I would meet Tian Meng. There is also the Soul-Eating Ferocious Sword. I didn't cut off the beard in advance. I waited until the game and heard about the auction. I remembered that I spent 160 million gold soul coins in vain. Then at the same auction house (too lazy to post, the original work is divided into two parts), I didn't buy the Snow Emperor embryo. I planned to go to Mingde Hall to grab it when the time comes. There are so many slots that I don't know where to start. 1: I spent 160 million unjustly to buy a knife, but I can't bear to keep the 200 million Snow Emperor in peace. 2: Even if I don't want to spend it, I can just let Du Bushui grab it. Anyway, Sun and Moon only have one Contra to lead the team. 3: Going to Mingde Hall is really not afraid of the butterfly effect. The last thing is the opportunity to cut Huo. Since we are planning to prevent Huo from having any good things, we just ask Du Busui to take him to the far north in advance to trade the lollipops from Longmen. They can be traded as bodyguards, but Huo can't let Huo get these two soul rings anyway. I thought that it would not be a loss if I was not afraid of the fall of the Three Gods. Two more thugs could directly take over the mandarin duck pot. (If you are afraid of the fall of the Three Gods, you can let a 100,000 year person try the water first. Anyway, there is a trial and error cost.) As a result, the protagonist has no prophetic advantage at all. He is really a human-machine. I simply set it as someone who has never read Douluo. Anyway, the author is not very proficient in the original Douluo.

At first glance, it looks like a small lump, but upon closer inspection, it falls into a pit.

Author, no, no, no, you are not worthy, hello writer, you know nothing about the double pupil and Douluo system!!! What you can still see away after seeing the level 21 content is the poisonous body of evil!