Water Margin: The Demon-Slaying Chronicle

To write a book, the hero must be a man? Do you know how to write a book?

Sorted according to the order of the characters I will update it wherever I think of it, and everyone is welcome to add more.

The writing style is good, the characters are much more delicate than the novels, and the logical thinking of the actions is quite reasonable. A brief introduction to the current plot line for book friends who have passed by: Tang Bin, who was originally the "mountain warrior" in the original work, was destroyed by the cooperation between the salt lord and the county magistrate. After killing the salt lord, he wanted to continue to kill the county magistrate but was killed in reverse. After the protagonist came back from time travel and was resurrected, he wanted to follow the original plot and go up the mountain to wait for an opportunity for Kou Tao to hide his power. As a result, in this high-magic world, he met the "Cloud Dragon" Gongsun Shenglai to investigate the magic changes on the mountain. After some subsequent events, he became sworn brothers and founded a business on the mountain after the dungeon ended. The protagonist now plans to go with Gongsun Sheng to meet his teacher Luo Zhenren. While practicing on the way to improve his strength, he will travel around the world and make friends with other heroes in the original work to defeat Zhao Sui on behalf of Tian Xingdao. A suggestion to the author: You can read and refer to the old books on dynasty hegemony written by the leader "Jing Keshou". Some of the power-training settings in them are somewhat similar to your book and can be integrated into them. Then there is the "Infinite Brilliance Picture Scroll", which is also a dungeon world of Water Margin of Gods and Demons. The plot setting and the boss's imagination behind the scenes can be said to be the best in Water Margin. The Dragon and Tiger Qi you mentioned in your book is contaminated by some kind of chaos. I don't know if you are following the Cthulhu-contaminated approach, but there are several Western books that have been sewn from the starting point. I think they are quite boring, and the results are just average. The above is my personal opinion. I hope the author can update more in the future. Now I can finish the exam in less than ten minutes by taking one picture every day.

If Lin Chong had the protagonist's decision to kill, Gao Yanei would have died on the spot.

Why is this protagonist so stupid? Hundreds of Luoluo want to attack the city for revenge. Doesn't the author suffer from stupidity?

A bunch of people are talking about uniting the bottom in a world where personal power belongs to themselves. What is the bottom layer used for? Can millions of farmers kill a warrior god? I'm afraid that thousands of people will be killed by the God of War, and they will all kneel and kowtow.

I feel that Gongsun Sheng's setting is a bit weak, and the expressiveness is not as strong as the original. Although there is a reason in the original book that he has learned the Five Laws, but he feels that it is difficult for him to defeat Wang Ying now, and he feels that he should strengthen Gongsun Sheng's strength.

After seeing the latest chapter, you said that the protagonist is a pure native with a bit of luck. There is no problem. After fighting against the monk and the tree demon, the protagonist was crushed, and the protagonist had a slight scratch and was defeated. Based on your description of the villain, I don't know how the protagonist can win with his current strength. It seems that the villain is two fantasy characters. You have a martial arts character who is a bit aggressive and a little trick. With two teammates who have no fighting ability, could Taoist Luo come in person 🙂

When can I describe the current situation in the Song, Liao and Jin Dynasties? It feels like to really write Water Margin, it is best to write it under the big historical changes. Looking forward to the final battle between the heroes of the Water Margin and the founding team of the Kingdom of Jin.

Xia Ke Xing