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I will be here to help with the new Game of Thrones book

I thought about it for a while😁

Don't include the annotation serial number in the main text, as it will not make you feel immersive. And there is absolutely no need to do this in the main text. The plot and story writing are the most attractive part of the book. Don't put your thoughts in the wrong place 🤫

I found another good book The author has a deep understanding of the Game of Thrones, which allows people who have never read the original book or TV series to be immersed in the book. The local customs are also well described, allowing people to be immersed in the situation, and the protagonist is well portrayed, making people feel that this is what an excellent king is like. Summary: This is an excellent work. The author did not follow the rules of the original work, nor did he follow suit. Instead, he kept the original framework and filled it with his own ideas. This idea makes the content of the book colorful and addictive. Wait for Sanjiang.  Finally seek refinement!

It is possible to develop in a low-key manner, and you can see the bright future of the protagonist. The problem is that it is not enough for readers. You can't kill people, you can't fight, and you can't make money. Why don't you try some flirting?

The writing is so good, I feel that it has a Game of Thrones flavor that most Game of Thrones fan fiction does not have. Although there are still contents about opening an orphanage or making soap to emphasize the protagonist's identity as a time traveler, the depth and knowledge of the text make these plots perfectly integrated into a Game of Thrones story. This is reflected in the author's ability to clearly and logically memorize, utilize and integrate the complex and interrelated aristocratic history and relationship network in Game of Thrones, both large and small, while at the same time Various text descriptions do not appear dry and tasteless due to this complicated relationship, especially those that are very close to Martin's dietary descriptions in the original work, which are eye-catching. Details that few people pay attention to, such as hollowing out black bread to make a bowl of meat porridge, can be written vividly The current plot gives me as much surprise and sense of substitution as when playing Kingdom Come I hope you will not be ignorant because I stayed up most of the night to brag about your awesomeness, and update as soon as possible.

I hope the author can consider the butterfly effect, and the story line and plot direction can be reasonably changed in the follow-up, instead of carrying the camera around the original work.

The main character's operation in Chapter 6 is a bit confusing. Why is it written like this?

Such a good book, it is not out of the circle simply because it is updated too slowly.

It's the most critical time for it to be updated when it first comes out. Yours is the most interesting new Game of Thrones book recently. If you write more and write more, the results will definitely be better.

After watching Game of Thrones, the Yu family is really stupid. Nothing good was gained by following Jon and Robert in their rebellion. I don't even know where my own legal theory of Duke of the Riverlands comes from. The Fish family was a small family in the Riverlands before Aegon conquered the Seven Kingdoms. Aegon conquered the Riverlands and served as the guide, and was helped by Aegon to become the Duke of the Riverlands. , At least two-thirds of the nobles below were dissatisfied with the Yu family. They relied on the pressure of the Long family to become the Duke of the River Land. During the Usurper War, half of the nobles in the River Land were fishermen with the Long family. The Yu family was not very smart. The inflatable fish of the Rose family is also a first-rate idiot. If there wasn't an old woman above who understood where the Rose family's legal principles came from, I guess the dissatisfied nobles of the Rose family below would also rebel.

This is the first time I've seen someone write about Edmure. So far, it seems to be pretty good. There's nothing weird about it, and the writing style also has the flavor of the original.

Brother, you are writing too slowly, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

I feel very comfortable reading the more than 70 chapters so far. The writing is excellent and the story skeleton is very good. In fact, it is mainly composed of two road stories so far. One is about gathering future vassals to go on a tour in the north, and the other is about heading south through the High Garden to welcome back the bones of the Tower of Bliss (and also participating in the martial arts tournament). The former shows his identity and writes the communication between nobles very well. The latter is a hidden identity, and the story of the wandering knight's life is also very exciting. The current plot has just arrived at the mission to Casterly Rock, and the scene with the old lion is also very exciting. The future context that can be seen in the future is: go to the Iron Islands rebellion to make a fortune in military industry, and conquer the Frey family. It's also very exciting. Finally, there is a icing on the cake suggestion. Game of Thrones itself can surpass many good novels and become a masterpiece because of accidents, accidents that are unexpected and reasonable. Robert died on the boar's tooth, Stark missed the pardon, the lion died on the toilet, and the Horse King died of infection. "Tomorrow or accidents, no one knows which one will happen first." The protagonist has planned everything with foresight, but it will definitely be more exciting if some accidents that the protagonist did not expect are added.

There are almost no shortcomings except that the number of words in each chapter is slightly less. The foundation is solid. Even if you have not read the original work, you can quickly understand and get involved in the plot.

More on the shelves is worse than not on the shelves.

Give our excrement-picking boy Suleiman Stinky Castle a lesson. After writing hundreds of chapters, his painting style suddenly changed and he turned into a human-machine. He overturned all the previous ones. In the end, he relied on tools to turn around and wrote in a daze. He couldn't even control the style that he had written hundreds of chapters. What others say is what it is, but it is disgusting. Teach the boy from Stinky Fort a lesson. I will give you two monthly tickets

First of all, I would like to apologize to everyone. I usually read less comments, so I will explain it to you now. Secondly, I admit that I did not lay out the plot well, so I will definitely modify and add some descriptions to make the story flow smoother, but the logic of the plot is smooth. I will share my understanding with you below. Finally, let me explain why I wrote that. The continent of Westeros in the original work is actually a very loose feudal country, which is not as strict as the classical Chinese system. Each prince practices an almost complete "castle law". In his own castle, he is the master, while others are "people under the eaves and have to bow their heads." In the original work, there will be Many plots will show this feature. For example, when a king or a vassal stays in the house of a certain vassal, the vassal will "lend" a bedroom or room to the superior princes. However, if the vassal is unwilling to let people in, there is actually nothing that can be done if the city is not destroyed immediately. The most classic one is the "Mad King"'s imprisonment in Dusk Valley Town.

Dude, I've been raising you for two months and you updated Chapter 17

Want a eunuch? It's a pity that such a thin book doesn't even last to the beginning of the plot.

It's really well written. I personally think this type of fantasy novel should be written this way, similar to writing a historical novel. Romantic and heavy at the same time. 👍👍👍

I've had it for almost a month and have updated 13 chapters. . . Dude, you really squeeze out the toothpaste 😅

Some readers have complained to me about the localized wording in this book, and I will explain it. I want to keep this book as authentic as possible to Qu Chang's translation of the original work. After all, what you are reading is fan fiction, and I hope you can have a sense of immersion. But what is the style of Qu Chang's translation of the original work? Let me take the famous Marquis Walder Frey's lines as an example. The following is an excerpt from the negotiation between him and Catelyn Tully: Marquis Walder snorted disdainfully. "Lord Tywin, he is a big man. He is both the Warden of the West and the Prime Minister of the King. Oh, how amazing. This is made of gold, and that is in the shape of a lion. He is very arrogant. I bet you that he eats too many beans and farts like me. But you don't want to hear him admit it, don't even think about it. What is he doing? He just has two sons, one of whom is a deformed little monster. I can trade him for one of my sons. One, after all of them are dead, I have nineteen and a half left!" He chuckled, "If Lord Tywin needs my help, he can just ask for it, right?" From the above, it can be seen that the dialogues in the original Qu Chang's translation also have some localized styles. In fact, the translation style in the 1980s and 1990s is not advisable, so this book also tries to avoid redundant and cumbersome translation styles to maintain a smooth and accurate reading experience. Thank you again for your support.

This book is probably the ending of The Eunuch, which is a pity

Don't give up, there will be results

This update speed is too slow. If you have an outline, you can use AI tools to assist in writing. Just pay attention to the review to avoid logical loopholes 🙂

We are still waiting for your update😌

The update of "Alive Again" is too slow... But compared to other books that start to flood the AI, you might as well slow down. Although I feel extremely uncomfortable chasing after reading, if you grind for a year or two and the number of words is enough, it will definitely be popular on the home page of the blog. But... Can you maintain the perfect attendance of 4,000 words a day? Qiuli Gao

49 Tickets, can you stop updating them every day? I can't sleep at night