Becoming a Star God, Starting with the Song of the Moon

It's outrageous. If I didn't look carefully, I thought it was a new author. Star Iron is actually not very suitable for writing a simple infinite flow. The combat power setting in it is really outrageous. If you mainly focus on Star Iron, that's okay, but I think you should write about Star Iron and Genshin Impact in the early stage. There is no need to play in this aspect at all. Even if you want to participate in the plot a little in the early stage of Star Iron, if you don't have the ability to explode, it is really random. You can only rely on the power of destiny. Once you obtain the power of destiny, and you enter the original god, how many people can survive you?

What can I say, this author still likes to add some personal stuff of his own into everything he writes. This is true at best, the original work has its own interpretation, but at worst, it's just for fun. Author, you write stories, and you write stories for others to read. So before you publish the story you wrote, can you read it several times yourself? Furthermore, this author also writes a section about the wheel of a car from time to time. It's quite annoying to go over and over again for most of the chapter.

How can the star core be the foundation of the Star God? Another design is that Liuying needs the star core to explode with the original dream. Demiuge was exploded by a star core. He himself is special.

Genshin Impact and Star Railroad are quite difficult to write together. The main issue is combat power. Star Iron's combat power is expanding too fast. The first world is just about the survival of the planet, with enemies floating from the surface to the explosion star. The second world directly fights against the messenger, and the star explosion is stable. The third world directly confronts the half-step star god, super galaxy level. The fourth world directly fights against the Iron Curtain, a standard single target. As for the original god Under the condition of recognizing the text, the enemy outside the sky can blow out the stars and tear apart the galaxy, and he can give orders. Faness can also rely on the enemy outside the sky to wander at the star-galaxy level. Don't read the text, just look at the plot settings. One sword blasts the moon, and one hand throws the moon. I can only say that the star rating is stable. After talking about Fanes, let's talk about the top powerhouse. Currently, Star God is stable in super solo, while Genshin Impact is a standard monomer. The projection of Jet Black Projection is also a standard monomer. The only one in Genshin Impact that can be super solo is the Jet Black body. This is too far away from the stage in Teyvat.

If you write about Star Iron, these should be useful to the author

Since the author is writing about a fan of the Mi family, let's not care about things like OOC. The first thing is to ensure that at least the main direction of your comment area does not allow people who insult the characters to speak. Don't you care about this comment area?

What am I talking about in this latest chapter? You can't feel the blood, and you can't feel the hero. It just feels weak and watery It's not a nitpick, it's not a bad comment, it's a real feeling Before Belloberg, it was quite good, and it made people look forward to it. But here, Belloberg has a cliff-like crotch lift. From plot to combat description. For example, after opening the realm, the protagonist kills three monsters, and then what does he write in the description? The most terrifying assassin! I'm speechless and embarrassed. The next chapter is what I said at the beginning. I can feel that I want to write something passionate, but I just can't ignite it at all.

After reading about 70 chapters, I feel that the author is smarter than me 🤫

Half cloud and half AI level, especially Elio's words about the descendant🤣I won't talk about the combat power issue. At the beginning, the abnormal identity that can be observed is first thought about how not to be killed by Polka😅

What I want to say is that there are finally multiple female protagonists. Star Iron has so many characters, but many of them have only one female protagonist.