Becoming a Star God, Starting with the Song of the Moon

This is outrageous. If I hadn't looked closely, I would have thought it was a new author. Xing Tie isn't really suited to writing simple infinite flow stories; the power levels are just too absurd. If you were focusing on Xing Tie, it would be fine, but judging from the early parts, you seem to be writing about Xing Tie and Genshin Impact. There's no point in doing that.

Well, this author seems to like adding their own personal touches as they write. To put it nicely, this is correct; the original work has its own interpretation. To put it bluntly, it's just pure self-indulgence. Author, you write stories, and stories are written for others to read. So before you publish your story, can you read it a few times yourself?

What makes Star Core worthy of becoming the foundation of the Star God? And then there's the secondary interpretation: Firefly needed Star Core to explode with the Primal Dream, while Demuse was destroyed by a single Star Core. I am special by nature.

Writing about Genshin Impact and the Celestial Railway together is quite difficult. The main issue is combat capability. The Star Iron Forces expanded too rapidly; in the first world, it was merely a matter of planetary survival, with enemies on the surface ranging from exploding planets to floating enemies.

If writing about Star Iron, these points should be useful to the author.

Since the author is writing a fanfiction about the Mi family, putting aside issues like out-of-character (OOC), the first thing to do is ensure that your comment section, at least in the main direction, doesn't allow people who insult the character to speak. Aren't you going to manage your comment section?

What on earth is this latest chapter about? There's no sense of passion, no sense of heroism, just a feeling of weakness and incompetence. This isn't nitpicking, it's not a negative review, it's just my honest feeling. The story before Belloborg was pretty good, building anticipation, but Belloborg's work was a complete disaster. From the plot to the combat descriptions.

After reading about 70 chapters, I feel the author is even more clueless than I am 🤫

The half-AI, half-cloud-like level of gameplay, especially Eriol's line about being an "adventurer" 🤣, I won't even mention the combat power issue. At the start, with that observable anomaly, the only thing to worry about is how to avoid being killed by Polka 😅

What I want to say is that it's finally a multi-heroine game. I pulled so many characters in the Star Iron game, but many of them were listed as having only one heroine.