City: Only When You Are 70 Do You Come to the Xiake System

Are you engaging in rejuvenation again?

At first glance, I thought it was hydrology, but now I see it is exquisite hydrology. Haha, come on, author

The sudden arrival of the eunuch, at least let's make an escape

Let's not talk about the quality of the novel, but some details of the plot are not very well expressed. To give a simple example, when you are seventy years old and attend the funeral of yourself in your thirties, your father calls you brother. Your description in a few paragraphs is not very accurate, and your protagonist behaves so calmly. The first reaction of normal people is unnatural and a bit embarrassing. Negative review, the seventy-year-old appearance writing is very prominent. I will write an article on the body to shape the appearance and temperament. I will give you a core concept. The older you get, the more you become more demonic. Older people are not the end point but the starting point. This kind of subject matter is still very good. In comparison, it has great prominence. It is very good to use the protagonist to solve many scandals in today's society. If you can use the core of getting older and becoming more demonic, your novel will not be bad. Come on, Saonian! ! !