Longevity in Martial Arts: Start with Dedicated Practice

I think it's pretty good-looking. Master Liu San is finally dead, but I think the follow-up will definitely not be simple. Moreover, the latest chapter introduces monsters, and I don't know how the plot will develop... I feel that this is not the same system as the recently popular martial arts longevity novels I have read 😌. It is remarkable for innovation rather than plagiarism of routines.

The Holy Mother emerges from troubled times! It's a fucking troubled world, but the protagonist still has the heart of a bodhisattva! How fucking disgusting! Either don't write about how the world is so chaotic and miserable! Or don't always write protagonists with a Bodhisattva heart!

It's extremely toxic. This kind of writing will definitely end. In this kind of world, the protagonist uses kindness to fight against evil. How funny. He is weak and humble. He cuts his heart out for the evil people to see. The author is writing an inspirational story, not like a novel. He is praising suffering, which shows that the writer's mind has been washed.

Doesn't the protagonist need to eat enough to practice Zhuang Kung Fu? The author once wrote that the protagonist can practice all the time after drinking half a bowl of broth. It feels incredible. Doesn't practicing consume more energy? If you can't eat enough, what's the point of practicing more? After all, energy is conserved. The more you eat, the more strength you can develop!

Hello everyone, I am a newbie author. When I typed these words, I felt a little uneasy, but more importantly, I felt the solemnity and expectation of finally being able to meet you here. For me, storytelling is a very serious and happy thing. I will do my best to clearly present the world in my heart and the joys and sorrows of the characters before your eyes. My primary goal is to tell a story that has a beginning and an end, is logically consistent, and is as complete as possible. Within the framework of the plot, characters are developed differently from person to person, growing or changing as they go through their experiences. This may mean that not every character's personality or choice can meet the preferences of all readers, but I hope that at least everyone can see the reasonable motivations and context behind their actions. Writing is a long journey, and I know that I am still on the road of learning and exploration. Although there have been some small achievements on other platforms in the past, those are the footprints of the past. Standing here today, my wish is very simple: to get rid of distracting thoughts at the starting point, and write a story that belongs to this new place in a down-to-earth manner, and draw a complete ending for it and for you who have always been with me. Everyone's support is the most precious light on my way forward. Whether it is enthusiastic encouragement, sharp criticism, or casual complaints, I will read it carefully and think carefully. Every feedback is a mirror for me to review the story and improve my writing skills. I will treat this first work on Qidian with the most attentive attitude, and I will live up to every click and every moment of your time. Stories are the echo of life and the invisible link between me and you. I sincerely ask for your advice and support. If you find this story readable, please give it a little attention. Your reading and collecting will be the biggest motivation to support me to complete the journey. New people are on the road, please take care of us. Let us enter this new world together. Bow and thank you.

The useless protagonist + the panel attribute is a poisonous novel, and he is also a fighter among the garbage.

Li Wanwan is coming out, the storyline of female master and male apprentice. Readers who like it can follow it, hahaha

You guys who copy books just copy, why the hell do you even want to copy a sister? I don't even need to look. If you can write sister well, you don't need to copy books.

What do you say? A bit like a child who has not grown up. He is ruthless and patient in doing things, but has no depth and low profile. It is obvious that he is a time traveler, he has a golden finger, he is in the late stage, he can solve the food problem, and he has money, but he lacks insight into future planning, and rushing to do eye-catching things will only attract the attention of interested people. There is no hiding when learning martial arts secretly, and there is no plan or preparation for encountering villains. There is no trace of the calmness of the Shilipo Sword God. Although the setting is good, it feels very urgent, and everything is done in a hurry. Making the whole story lack depth.

There is no problem with the plot, and there is no problem with the substitution, but I do feel that the original mother and sister are a bit redundant. It would be better if the time travel was a setting where both parents died. Automatically forgetting the existence of these two useless people is still a novel that is quite tempting for me to read. I hope that the mother and sister in the follow-up can have some relationship with the main plot, just like Benson and Melissa in Lord of Mysteries, so that readers will also like it.

At present, the logic is rigorous, the world view is real, and the male protagonist is firmly established. He doesn't talk much, he knows how to do things, he is careful and careful, he doesn't act recklessly, and he doesn't deliberately make mistakes. The plot advances in depth and in an orderly manner. I hope the plot will be more in-depth later. Collect first, then fatten and slaughter!

It is indeed very different and unique from other martial arts texts. Today, when follow-up works are so popular, I thought this work would be like that, but when I saw the latest chapter, it was indeed different and more and more beautiful. Every decision made by the protagonist is made with brains, not the kind of mindless killing, nor the kind of work where all the characters are villains, and the thinking is organized. I have read too many novels of this kind, and many of them are so confusing that I don't even know what the protagonist is going to do! Continue to support!

The beginning was so bloody and rubbish. Now I can hardly stand this kind of rubbish plot.

There are too many minor problems, and the protagonist would probably be embarrassed to be a moral role model in a world of cannibalism.

The back part is quite nice and interesting. It seems that it really only becomes better after walking out of the Novice Village. I really don't like the frustration of the protagonist and the environmental background. I really can't stand hunting wild dogs and killing wild boars! Starting from Zhenxiulou and Hairpin Ceremony, I feel that it is very exciting. I hope that the subsequent plots will be more exciting...

I can't accept the Hail Mary! It doesn't matter if the author wants to write about the Virgin, then please mark it in the introduction! This way, you don't have to waste everyone's time, and you can continue being hypocritical with those who like to watch!

I don't understand why in this kind of novel, the main character has a younger sister

It's quite nice to watch. Although the world is not good, there are still many good people around. Don't be the kind of person who crosses several realms in a year, just catch up with others in more than 10 years of effort.

The author's idea is good, the story is told eloquently, and the characters are vivid and unique. It is a relatively good fairy tale. Readers who like it must not miss it.

The concept is good, good books are rare, support, support, support!

There is no logic in this book. Who in the right mind would write a diary when they can't even afford to eat?

The saint's whole family is about to starve to death, but no one is watching to give you a bowl of rice. Are you fighting with a scumbag? When the male protagonist sees that others can't pay, he wants to take care of it. What's the point of my mind? ? ? I feel like the author's male protagonist might still be alive 20 years ago after reading the novel

Although the story is lackluster, for a new author, he can tell the story in an orderly manner, and the character growth and plot advancement are dynamic. There is no sense of hydrology, but the layout and planning are indeed a certain gap between the master author and the senior author, but as long as he persists to one million words, I think the work will become more and more mature. I feel that the later chapters are much better than the previous ones, and the author's progress is visible.

I want to ask how you can practice martial arts without eating. If you practice martial arts on an empty stomach, I'm convinced.

Congratulations on the launch! The beginning is a little dull, but later on it becomes more and more exciting, and by the time it's released, it's actually going to be a brain-burning experience. Fortunately, the amount is large and the food is full.

It's not a relative or a relationship, the Holy Mother's heart is overflowing, standing up for a gambler, is it really passed by someone on the scene? The Holy Mother's heart is overflowing, it's not like this, and it took two years of life 😰😰😰

If pig's feet are normal, there will be a lot of people saying they are poisonous, in this world.

You can't open Mr. Storyteller or listen to books.