From Immortality Kung Fu to Immortal Demon God

More than 40 chapters and not even a day has passed... But the combat power is not under pressure, and it has been upgraded rapidly.

Add some routine, like fuck off. The pace is too fast. You fight so many monsters in one night. The same goes for the previous one. The protagonist has just solved the ghost that haunts him, and immediately goes to solve the ghosts in his classmates' house. After solving the problem, new events happen at night, which lacks routine.

This is Changchun Kung Fu, it would be more appropriate to call it Blood Demon Kung Fu.

There's nothing wrong with the plot concept, but... If it really doesn't work, use AI to beautify it after you've written it. You must not be very good at Chinese. Use AI to beautify it after you've written it, and then check to see if it's been changed before you change it back. Don't post it after you've finished writing it. This choice of words and sentences is too painful to watch.

In fact, I never understand why we go to temples and Taoist temples when something goes wrong. If temples and Taoist temples are really useful, they should dominate the world. The correct approach should be to find the official. If the official does not have extraordinary factors, how did he become the official?

I still need to practice sentence segmentation. They are all wrong sentences and look uncomfortable.

Wait until you gain weight before reading. Each of the author's books is too short and weak.

Is it annoying to stress that Immortality Kung Fu cannot strengthen your strength every day?

It's too much to say that it's been over 40 chapters and not even a day has passed. That's not to say that a year has not passed since I wrote it.

The writing is good, but the author did not use AI to expand the text. It reads a bit too strange.

There are many repetitive and long-winded paragraphs, are they hydrology or AI?

This is essentially a kind of pressure, it's too traditional

Too many messy abilities, too messy, unnecessary

It's like playing a stand-alone game, just keep playing by yourself.

Summarize the current advantages and disadvantages (Chapter 1-92). The disadvantage is that. That's right, just like, I, this text, are the same. There are a lot of punctuation marks, and I may be exaggerating. The advantage is that the combat power increases very quickly. About 2 or 3 days have passed in the timeline of the book (Chapter 1-92). The combat effectiveness is equivalent to a nuclear explosion (Eye of the Sun skill, in the real world, when there is no lack of sunlight), the survivability ignores nuclear explosions, can absorb water, sunlight, etc. To survive, and the life span is theoretically unlimited. The skills are also very rich. That's it.

Let's learn the method of turning things around and become an emperor from the heart and things.

Still ok. It's just a little bit plainer, just write some group portraits! I can't write for reference! There are so many routines to write!

It's on the shelves. Why don't you add two more chapters to celebrate?

Author, do you have any other accounts?

This sentence fragment is so disgusting, the same word is repeated over and over 😰

Give me your thoughts. Have you ever been in contact with Chaofan? You will have some ideas.

This is how Shuangwen should be, suppressing combat power? Does not exist🙂

This book and I are on the airwaves, it's so cool to read it to me