Gundam Eternum

I have seen 147 so far. As a Gundam fan, the quality is unexpected, and there is no subject confusion that is common in fan genres. Although I have not watched Gundam, the description is attractive enough, and the special setting is actually reasonable. It has the flavor of early science fiction that imagination flies in the sky. However, the theme should be because of the original Gundam. There is no problem with the anti-war theme, but it only stops at anti-war for the sake of anti-war. This is very abstract, like a A frightened child, crying and unable to explain. Besides, what age is it now? Anti-war is not against all confrontation, but to get to the bottom of things and bring things right. Morality is the criterion. Otherwise, if someone despises you personally, exploits you economically, oppresses you with power, isolates you socially, and in short, carries out all-round persecution in addition to force, do you want to support this kind of persecution just to ban war? Are you cheap?

The main story is abusive, but at the same time, you have to wait for the protagonist to save the world. The protagonist is a time traveler but not a Jiao guy. I don't know the plot. I can only say that it is too depressing.

Come on, come on, come on 😍

Come on, come on, come on 😆

I'm wondering if seed has a love line?

I wonder if the fate of Lacus Klein's father, being sent by Sarah to be assassinated by the assassination team, will change? I remember that the original plot was to help Kira Yamato steal the Freedom Gundam.

I don't understand why you wrote that the main character got Kira and Freedom Gundam, forget it.

Ahhhh, why don't you let me finish it and finish it again!!!

Let me go, the plot of Seed has not been written for a long time and the world has changed. Aren't you confused?

I remember that the male protagonist took Lux Klein back to reality, and then returned to the seed world. Not long ago

The world passes through each other, and the war burns all over the world

I suggest you write almost the same plot in each world before traveling back in time, because you only write a few chapters in each world before traveling back and forth. There is not much characterization, characterization, and interaction, let alone emotional communication. Also, I still don't understand what's so special about the protagonist you set. The only difference is that you can travel across the world.

I want to know what kind of variables will happen if there are more external transcendents in the seed world.

What can you say about your book? It has no characteristics of its own. Some novels focus on character descriptions and emotional dramas, while others focus on logical frameworks. What about your book? It goes by too fast, and the following chapters have no names. Not to mention that readers will be confused by what you wrote. Readers, what is the Gundam frame that you designed yourself? The only thing I feel about this novel is that the protagonist's characteristic is the instinctive battle to survive. In what aspect do you mean the improvement is reflected?

Kira Yamato drives the Freedom Group to destroy the Yakin Guards. The protagonist you set drives the Freedom and needs reinforcements. Hey, you set the protagonist to be unsuitable for the Freedom. I feel that your driving skills are not as good as Kira Yamato.

To tell the truth, if you traveled back in time in the seed plot, there was very little description of the interaction with Lux and the development of the seed plot. You just brushed it off in one stroke, and you took the Gundam and traveled back to another timeline. Then it would be very strange for you to write about worrying about the Archangel people in Alaska.

There are very few emotional interactions in your 00 Gundam world. From the first glance, it looks like fighting all the time.

It won't take much time to rescue the Archangel, and the plot of Seed doesn't develop much, so forget it and you can do it yourself.

There is very little plot development in your book Seed, and the character interaction is also very little. The plot participation in the world is almost the same. You do it a little bit here and there, and the readers are confused.

Earth version of Gundam seed?

Just like the title, if there is anything wrong, such as settings, etc., Or if you have any criticisms of me, you can say it here.