I'm Becoming the Ultimate Demon

The ones that are easier to imitate are those written by Xu Xian. Gou has been fighting in the ring and competing in the world of martial arts, and the Holy Fist, starting from the breathing method to become stronger. I think the real writing is quite similar to the Jidao Demon. You will know after watching Go Away. The first small dungeon of Jiulian City was written for a long time when the demons and ghosts appeared for the first time. At the beginning, there were rumors of water ghosts, then the second time Xu Jiaquan died, and the third time the supernatural beings in Shuifen Street. The incident was also mixed with the panic that the father was called to work by the county magistrate. The fourth time the protagonist's servant died, the fifth time the protagonist failed to squat, and the sixth time the demon finally appeared and the protagonist started to attack. It is really difficult to write this kind of foreshadowing. If you don't pay attention, all the tension in the previous scene will be gone. . .

The plot is thin and the writing has a lot of room for improvement.

The writing is messy, the plot is too dense, and there is no rhythm at all, but the plot is there, and I need to learn more skills.

Especially the writing in many places is inexplicable. I thought I was digging a hole, but in the end I buried myself directly.

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What the hell is Lin Luo Purgatory in the introduction? Senluo Purgatory Bar

Not the kind of immortal demon? Otherwise, they don't deserve to be called demons, even the most powerful demon Buddha can do so, and they will commit genocide at every turn.

According to the way you write it, there is nothing to write in 100 chapters, it is too compact. Just one event in one or two chapters, with no breathing room at all. You can't write much exciting content in one or two chapters, which is a waste of plot.