Zhongshan Shenzhuchi

The writing style is on the high side, the plot drags, and there are too few exciting points. I wanted to create a peaceful atmosphere, but the writing style is not good enough. It is tentatively rated as a high-quality product.

I just said that this introduction was familiar, but it turned out to be a porcelain candle and nine yin

I've read one about Zhulong too. It's a pity that it's a eunuch.

I would like to ask, why did the author basically write all the people around the protagonist to be women? That tiger, I thought he was a man at first, but after he transformed, I found out that he was a woman. But the protagonist cannot write a good female supporting role at all. I feel that every female supporting role makes me upset when they see it.

Shen Nong's evaluation, tentatively decided on Xiancao 😄

The beginning of the chapter is at the bottom, and it ends at the bottom.

It's very well written, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch 😡

Author, you can go to other books to cheer people up, don't be shy 😆

How do you feel that the Black Snake God wants to deal with Zhao Ying and her son...

It's actually okay, but there are too few updates.

When I was a child, I had no money, so I read pirated copies of books. Now that I have grown up and worked, the books I admired are also bad. After all, we are not the author, and we cannot teach. We can only encourage. Nothing in life will go as planned. Just like Fang Yuan in Gu Zhenren, persevere, persevere. Only perseverance is the last word in the countercurrent river.

It's so fast. I've written about a hundred chapters to the incarnation, and I feel like the seven hundred chapter ending is the best. The pavement is too big to stop the car.

There are a lot of supporting characters, which tests the author's control ability, and each one is an important supporting role. Each character must be described, which is very tiring to write. Like The Legend of Mortal Cultivation, there are only a few important supporting characters. Zhang Tie quickly left the production and became Qu Hun, and Chen Qiaoqian only played a few roles. Moreover, there are few descriptions of the BOSS in the early stage, and there are more fights with the BOSS. For example, the BOSS in this book was well prepared in the early stage, with warnings and hints from dreams, but in the end, the fight was devastating and the villain fell apart.

Is the author really not publishing Chapter 92?

I think it's okay after watching it, but I always feel like I'm being tricked.

The last one is The Eunuch of the Zhulong, but I decided not to write it even though it is almost over. I hope the author can finish the story.

The writing was okay, but it was a little too fast, which is how novels are written from a biological perspective. There is no cumbersome process of cultivating immortals from a human perspective. There is no need to refine elixirs, set up formations, kill people and seize treasures, and there is no need to fight for resources. Even the understanding of skills is covered in one go. The practice of cultivating monsters as immortals involves seclusion and enlightenment. They close and open their eyes, devour and evolve, and their bloodline returns to their ancestors. The 100 chapters have almost turned into a god, and so far Kyushu has only described three states. From time to time, some inexplicable settings pop up. Why does the landscape book suddenly turn into an arm? The medium has written more than 100 chapters, and then a plant is born. The one without the medium is more powerful than the one with the medium. After that synodic book was handed down to Xiao Ruyi, no other magical powers were given to it. The tigress was sent out to spread the faith, but it turned out to be a competition for some kind of crown. There was going to be a war in the Yongning Mountain Camp, and the tigress no longer practiced her military skills. Instead, she went to the ice field to play with the old, weak, sick and disabled. The treasure that the Black Dragon King was looking for to extend his life was forgotten. The Four Immortals Gate disappeared inexplicably after writing about it, and the only one Chi Xian Gate was describing was Chi Li. I probably forgot all about Dragon Slaying Technique after writing about it, so it would be nice to mention it. Where are the people at higher realms? Where have the people from the six realms and seven realms gone? Writing a novel has pulled out too many threads, and each thread is half unsolved.