Ji Dao Guizun

Can't you name each chapter properly? It's a mess.

It's readable, but it's not great. Many parts are incomprehensible. How could you, a time traveler, have so many emotions? Since there are so many bonds, it's better to write it as a father and son. This book feels like it's copied here and there.

Not enough! ! ! Author, I think your work is very interesting, but the weather has started to cool down recently. You should pay more attention to updating on time and don't worry about your health. [Doge]

Don't be impressed by yourself, you pure idiot. You are still playing substitution. Don't you want to die? You have traveled through time, so don't play with empathy. Don't play with the Holy Mother these days, because it is too fake.

Alas, the setting of the cultivation system is very nice, but why is it the world of the Republic of China? I really hate the extraordinary Republic of China. It looks better if I replace it with the ancient one. There are too many pressing matters and the social environment is too oppressive.

What rubbish, such a big guy and yet so weak

Without the logical thinking and vision of a time traveler, he is more like a native leopard coming out of the mountains.

Just put half of the ability to write chapter names into the article

Apart from anything else, the most disgusting thing is that the protagonist saves the woman, and the woman helps the protagonist practice. It is obviously a very simple matter, but the protagonist insists on explaining to this woman that he can induce the talent to transform into spiritual dust 😅😅😅

Why do you call yourself a slave after becoming a disciple?

The plot is very brainless. The protagonists have gone out for those troublemakers several times, but the trigger of the incident still keeps triggering on them. Are all the gangs fools? Several supporting characters are poorly arranged, and the protagonist looks even stupider

Come on, I have a big secret, do you know?

The core question is, obviously the protagonist's profession is to bring infinite power to oneself, but you can't describe his characteristics. What do you think is the difference between physical training and internal strength? Just like the Zhetian system to the Xiuxian system, no matter how powerful your spells are, you can't even break through his defenses and you can be beaten into a blood mist with just one slap. The internal strength system mobilizes the energy in the body to refine the body. It lies in its own strength. It is like this and the resources and breakthroughs required are completely different from the internal strength system. It is on one's own. When fighting in the internal strength system, at least there are weights and training. If one does not pay attention to the opponent, he will directly become a tofu dregs.

Today's authors always like to confront readers. The less they like the plot, the more they write about it. As soon as the woman appeared, she knew that the protagonist would save him. The protagonist didn't even have the ability to protect himself. He insisted on getting involved and exposed his talent. As a result, the female master came to the door and forced him to be a spy. He would definitely be entangled later. A lot of people saw it if it was written differently. A woman transforms into a man. She is masked and takes the exercises first before saving her. Then she directly kills and grabs the exercises.

Update quickly, update quickly, update quickly

The setting and writing are really good, but I read the free chapter and opened the book, and found that the first exciting point of the plot was in chapter 30. The first twenty chapters were all suffocating. Goldfinger did not change the protagonist in any way except to survive. If you write like this, you will finish the first twenty chapters.

What kind of brain circuit is this? How do you write the name of the protagonist in front of the enemy?

Has it been overhauled? It feels like a lot of bugs in the comments have been fixed. Comments are out of date

Okay, it's time to leave (sad)

It can be considered an end. I finished being a eunuch in June. .

Written by a braided person with a heart as high as the sky

There are too many details about cultivation and too little storyline.

Do you have a large number of various professions in your body?

Can you let me know when the author has published a new book?🙂

Great writing! Come on! Looking forward to more 😆