Doomsday Convoy: Starting as a Preaching Berserker

The protagonist's golden finger is creative, but only the golden finger is creative. It's a pity that the writing is so bad. It feels like the ancient dragon Aotian.

Really convinced. A woman you just met can't stop crying when she sees you covered in blood. Have you ever seen a woman? If you can write about demeanor, just write. If you don't know how to write, just write with a solemn expression. A similar experience is better than your awkward writing. The conversation doesn't have to be so intimate. How can we still retain truth, goodness and beauty in this apocalyptic world? Go read more books written by others. Let's write to enrich our knowledge.

The protagonist is too immature. As for the protagonist's ability to recruit a cow, I feel like he was written like a primary school student.

Copying is not a crime, the key is to create new ideas. The job transfer sequence is indeed good, but the writing skills are too poor, and the protagonist's writing is the same as the second one.

There are too many flaws in this apocalyptic writing! The strongest member of the Star Train team has a physical constitution of 60 points with full firepower. It is estimated that the strength is tens of thousands of kilograms, and the rest are hundreds of thousands of kilograms in strength. Hundreds of people ran in the wild for more than half a month before encountering a few monsters, and most of them can be solved with physical attacks. But you tell me that such a garbage monster can bring about the end of the world? Do you think the country's artillery, explosives, and missiles are just toys? Those first-level monsters can just get a few drones carrying a few kilograms of explosives and blow them up, and the second-level monsters can kill them with just a few cannons. Are you telling me this is the end of the world?

Well written before putting it on the shelves. After it was put on the shelves, it became pure weeds. But let's talk about the plot before and after it was released. The selection for listing is to connect with the official base. It turns out that this official base is worse than the protagonist's shabby convoy. It is purely used as a cushion for the protagonist, delivers supplies, and then inexplicably inserts a plot of a public servant father and an aggrieved son. The apocalyptic atmosphere created before it was put on the shelves was completely destroyed, leaving only a garbage plot that was just like playing house. There is no battle between humans and ghosts, no conflict breaks out, and there is not even enough description. Just pick up a spy in the wilderness, and then get on the line. To save someone, you need an official base to consume 35% of the food reserves, and then the protagonist's shabby convoy can actually pull them away. The evaluation is that it deserves to be called the official base? Even excluding this nonsense setting, the entire plot is a piece of shit. It was said that coming to Rongcheng would bring huge risks and rewards, but that's it? Just this watery plot? Normal authors know that when the protagonist group has just stabilized, it should be a good time to further expand the worldview and scenes. It was like the brave team had gone through so much trouble to kill the mini-boss monster for the first time, and entered the main human city from the initial town for the first time. The comprehensive upgrade in intensity, power, appearance, and money brings a sense of shock to the protagonist team. It also further reveals the upper limit of power in the entire apocalypse and the long and grand struggle between humans and ghosts. It was as if the guerrillas had seen the regular army for the first time, the emotion of looking up but longing, longing but not admitting defeat. Unfortunately, in your case, the guerrillas are the saviors of mankind. There is no stronger tall man to place our expectations for the world and mankind. The job transfer system is also extremely rough. Crazy warrior, healer, magician... Is your job change still a Western fantasy version? And what's the benefit of switching to a profession that has nothing new and you don't plan to write something new between the old and the new? Is it convenient for everyone to feel bored and give up? I can only say that after the first big plot after it was released, this book was basically ruined. It completely exposed the author's shortcomings in writing, layout, and characterization. Write a post-apocalyptic survival story as a savior plot for primary school students. Why primary school students? Because in the composition, he didn't know at all that junior high school students actually need to attend evening self-study. Don't think that you can be naive or naive before it goes on the shelves, because after it goes on the shelves, people will ask you for the requirements of real products.

Crazy pressure on combat power, profession can be recycled, facing a group of base people who don't want to transform, insist on collecting the number of people with material cards, it's boring

The protagonist's character is too poorly written.

One look at this holy master will lead to failure, so be a eunuch as soon as possible

What contact does your golden finger have with the team?