
I Just Wanted to Retire, but I Became a Very Popular Character
只想隐退的我却成了超高人气角色
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 358k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Mystic Fantasy
- Updated
- 4mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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146Chapters
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Anyone who has watched it tell me, is the protagonist a classic, slender, powerless man? If so, there is no need to watch it.
Are you serious? The struggle between princes is greater than anything else?
The emperor has no sense of existence. From the previous emperor's initiative to give up power, to chapter 77, there is no support. It gives me a sense that the right to be the emperor is limited for a limited period. When the princes start to fight, the emperor does not consider whether his own territory is stable or not, but only considers which prince can win.
We need the power of McZod!
Did the protagonist later become loyal to some prince because he was kind, and then support him in becoming emperor? And the enemy is all bad, but our empire is righteous? It's too old-fashioned. Let's do something progressive.
How come this beginning seems to have been seen somewhere The protagonist traveled to another world and became an officer. He deliberately messed up in order not to go to the battlefield, but he always got it right by mistake, and he also changed into Di.
Can't understand
What does it mean to write about so many audience perspectives?
It's good-looking. Although it's the kind of subject where you go against the system and don't want to succeed but succeed with the intervention of the author, it does not overwhelm the protagonist's combat power. The first two events established the protagonist's personality, but they were not abrupt and did not emphasize his personality many times in the wrong situations. The third incident of charging was even a bit passionate. In general, the protagonist does not overpower the combat power. It's cool. The plot is compact and reasonable. It's cool and cool.
The audience's perspective can be placed in the extras, but it must not be placed in the main text. If you do this, you will turn off a lot of people. What I want to watch is the main plot line, not the plot sub-line.
There are too many problems with this subject matter. During the war, are there still people who try to become "passers-by" who have no ability to resist? The end game will not be that you sit comfortably in the rear drinking tea, it will only be that the rear becomes the front line/forced recruitment, goes to the battlefield as a roadside soldier, and then becomes a number among the "XX died in XX battle" in a certain character's lens.
Well enough
Including combining two innovative points together I have always felt that the biggest problem with popularity is that the protagonist is a badass, and it is too embarrassing to deliberately pretend to be awesome. This problem does not exist
It was so urgent that he was rushed to his death without even receiving legion training. The protagonist has never done such a job, right?
It's okay. After all, it's a war. It's impossible to defeat the army head-on even if you upgrade the points or something. Normal people would want to run away. It's just that the plot is too deliberate and luck is the same as cheating. It's just that the individual abilities in the novel are a bit too strong. It's too fake that the elite troops lose morale and collapse when their leader dies.
Don't really go to the battlefield and fight with all your might.
The happy contrast of the backstabbing article adds a desperate plot. It is recommended that veterans just skip the clock tower plot, as it will not affect the subsequent fun.
The inner drama of the protagonist is not rich enough. In this kind of article that needs to be enlightened, the protagonist's inner confusion, confusion, surprise, unimaginable, and small details such as the helplessness to improve his strength must be richer. However, the general framework of the article is still there, but why do you have to kill the opponent when the subordinate gets the map? It is completely possible to face the suspicion of the subordinate, and then the protagonist's quibble, but the subordinate does not believe it, and then secretly observes and discovers that it is exactly what the protagonist said, and then jumps out to help the protagonist face the imperial agent. The plot will be ups and downs, and there will be a lot of drama. Another point is that the protagonist did not say that he prepared peasant clothes at the beginning, and then changed into military uniforms and accepted it. To sum up, the setting is okay, but the writing power is insufficient, and the world view has not been developed yet. What is the protagonist group like in the setting, but it can be used as general food.
Epitaph (as of Chapter 100) is a hit-and-miss story, with a classic start that's amazing, but the more you write, the less effective it becomes.
Traveling into a (virtual) popular drama, gaining points to improve yourself based on popularity + The protagonist wanted to run away from the beginning, but ended up not running away but getting promoted A major feature of this article is that the protagonist does not force popularity + there is a delay between the drama and the main plot of the protagonist (the protagonist cannot check his own plot) The good thing is that it has a strong sense of substitution, but the bad thing is that the fun points of the drama are few and not timely. At the same time, the enhancement of popularity points seems a bit abrupt Breaking point: The protagonist fights fiercely, with almost no time to rest, and basically the protagonist fights to the death without any fun points. At the same time, there is little foreshadowing of the worldview. This kind of routine will definitely change later in the story, saying that the protagonist gives up escaping. Then naturally you have to write about the situation of the protagonist's camp and the local camp Depending on which camp the protagonist chooses in the later period, it will be foreshadowed in advance, but the actual situation becomes more and more difficult to write. According to the author, the protagonist should be in the empire, and then the author wrote the empire as militarism + indulging in internal strife + the emperor's tyranny, allowing Kowloon to seize the throne, and the negative buffs are full Moreover, the author also played a trick. He once stopped updating for a long time and then resumed updating and then wrote about realistic young people. He said that pursuing dreams in novels is not easy. +Confusing writing style. When it's time to write a follow-up barrage and complain, the protagonist is inserted into the battle and gets beaten. It's very confusing for people watching.
Those pictures on the shelves are really cool 😴
In the early stage, you desperately escape from fate, in the middle stage, you are teased by fate and begin to awaken, in the later stage, you charge towards fate and fight and burn, the ending can be any one.
It's okay, but I think the other book "I Wanted to Retire and Become an Imperial Admiral" is also very interesting. It starts with the main character fighting normally in the middle of Dihua. It's quite well written.
Come on
Love updated baby, I love you (doge)
I looked at my notifications today and found that the author Jun gave me a like, and then I discovered that Tangtang was resurrected, so I had to read it. After being here for so long, I must have sorted out the context and plot. Come on.
Hey, updated?
I just found out that it has been updated. Please give me a monthly pass first and write more. Speaking of which, what is your relationship with French fries?
Oh, it's Zod. I thought it was Superman's Zod 🙂🙂🙂
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