Popularity Comes First, My Painting Style Is Too Unique!

The setting is good, but the plot makes up for the good setting.

It's quite interesting, but it's a bit too much to repeat the plot twice.

Water army, water, water, sea, you are all water.

The story is obviously modeled after One Punch Man. Why is Dior on the cover?

The first story is over. So far, it seems that the setting is very good and the writing is okay. The biggest problem is that the plot is too repetitive. To put it simply, the protagonist keeps on going every second, and the monsters come one after another, but there is nothing new. I hope the plot can be improved in the next part, otherwise readers will be lost. Sometimes after reading the latest chapter, I feel like "here we go again" and "I feel like I've seen this episode before". If you continue to do this after being put on the shelves, you will lose readers.

What does it mean to go the Saitama route and use Dio as the cover?

It basically feels like Fist Man

It was said at the beginning that the protagonist's body is very powerful, he can kill everyone with one punch, and his chest muscles can withstand all injuries. I have already imagined a macho man like Saba or Asura, but the description of the protagonist's appearance is sloppy and inconsistent. The villain's description of the protagonist's appearance is, strange?, What does it mean?

It's quite funny. Sure enough, the funny and hot-blooded series are the strongest, but can you only star in one anime at a time? Can I go back and forth to several sets and change roles? Hh

Compared with the previous pretentious protagonist of Gojo Satoru, this one chooses a funny protagonist similar to One Punch Man. At the same time, in order to avoid the collapse of the combat power of traditional dramas, we chose to use the infinite flow writing method. The protagonists continue to participate in different types of dramas Funny, interesting, and well-set, highly recommended

The author should write the drama first. The second game is said to be a card drawing game. It reads like an interactive movie, which is very incompatible. It reads like a game, and then there are too many famous scenes in the early stage without any foreshadowing. If the threshold is raised, it will be boring later. Let's see what happens next.

It's basically a localized punch.

The setting is okay, but the writing power is not enough to write interesting points.

As long as the writing of this setting is not too bad, it is good as a running account, but it is just a picky thing. I'm afraid not many people like to see this kind of thing.

In fact, you can also directly break the fourth wall by interacting with the audience, barraging, or making complaints. Even if you have no fighting power or average fighting power, which audience wouldn't like this?

I thought this name and this avatar said Dior, but it turned out that it said bald head

Interesting, I wonder if the author will write about whether Lando will go to heaven on a summer night? It's Destiny World. Will it evolve beyond Destiny World?

Why are people with psychic abilities always written as people with zero abilities? Please change it, thank you

It's best to add some settings, such as what benefits can be gained from playing the character. Otherwise, what's the point of playing the character?

What is reality for? It's always been in the comics

Three pictures a day is just right, two pictures are not enough👀

Is there anything wrong with this cover image? No infringement?

Dare to put it on the shelves today, dare to stop updating tomorrow

The author doesn't want every work to be called Summer Night, he can change it appropriately.

There are a lot of typos and omissions. I hope the author will check after finishing.

Record: It seems to be an imaginative article that throws out the settings at the beginning (0)

Abba Abba... Hehe...

One Punch Man and Genshin Impact, what's next?

What about bread stalks😆

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