Curse of Revenge: Understanding the World from the Judgment Hall

Current plot: It's hard to tell about the foreshadowing of the plot. The writing is only for the wise. It only focuses on the plot development and background framework of the current ten chapters, as well as the male protagonist's characterization and other characters. Don't read if you don't like it In a world where divine power and technology coexist, the opening chapter says that after Ragnarok, the gods were destroyed by technological humans, so how about ten years? What kind of little Karami are the gods? Not to mention that according to human history, the gods and humans coexisted peacefully until they started a war because of greed for land? There is little description of technology, but there are detailed settings regarding the power of God's curse. There is very little information about the Golden Eyed Demon in ten chapters. It was transformed by humans due to the curse, but humans can suppress the curse and make the power controllable. Although it is a big foreshadowing, it is all up to the male protagonist to see and think. An empire with a technological front-end is still too rubbish. There are gods, beliefs, curses, Ragnarok, a lot of ancient buildings, technology, armies, science fiction weapons, empires, and assassins. This world is too strange. The plot trend is that the ordinary protagonist goes to visit the instructor because he is worried about the instructor, and discovers that the instructor has accidentally become a golden demon. When escaping, he relies on the tacit understanding with his teammates and the instructor's few emotional moments to escape quickly until he encounters the law enforcement agency who secretly solves the golden demon and is forced to join. During this period, he was attacked by a golden demon and the eldest lady took action. He survived and became the eldest lady's trade partner and entered the Law Enforcement Agency (finally entering the Law Enforcement Agency of the title). The main theme is an accidental collision + the help of noble people to ascend. The unlocking of the plot relies entirely on accidental encounters and missions given by noble people, which is barely reasonable and logical. I beg you, don't replace the description of events, people, places, items, and time with a lot of character dialogue. The first few chapters are particularly serious. I often can't tell who is talking to whom, why the place and time suddenly changed. After reading ten chapters, there is no timeline at all from Jianguo to the protagonist's appearance. Is it the same year or 109 years apart? The protagonist only clicks on the skill of seeing and thinking, and with the author's writing, why can he conclude that the mutant coach is the same type of mutant as himself? Why did the curse suddenly break out? The protagonist only has a conclusion but no process. Who knows except the author and the protagonist whether the reader can be treated as a fool. I have to mention that when the protagonist teamed up with his friends to fight the instructor, he calmly faced the enemy and did not consider that he was the instructor. When the NPC was about to shoot, he remembered that this was his instructor and became angry. The psychological journey and emotional description were written out of dreams. At first, he agreed to Gray, but later he added that he had concerns but still believed it, but he was still deceived all the way to lure out the eldest lady. Later, thanks to the fact that the eldest lady was a sweet-tongued, hard-hearted and kind-hearted person, and she gave out things and information in exchange for the help of two smart people. In the main line, simply and crudely cut off the era introduction and world view background. Even if the protagonist wants to understand the unknown world, he must add time changes and era introduction! ! ! ! Then what does it mean to write the fish catching scene in the forest? The fish catching is written in such detail without any changes in the previous era and background. It is up to the readers to guess. In terms of combat, it all depends on the protagonist's emotional explosion. He couldn't break Gray's defense in the front, but suddenly he got the idea behind him. By increasing his speed and attack power, he can break Gray's defense. Gray's trump card only blocked the attack of the male protagonist. After he counterattacked and was dodged, the male protagonist just put away his contempt and became more vigilant. Then he was blocked by Luther who suddenly came out. Both were counter-killed (Luther suddenly appeared, but even more). There was also a sudden change in the appearance of the protagonist, and the appearance of the protagonist has not been described before. : Although it is a combination of idealism + materialistic world background that is worth complaining, it is a good point if it is written well; I feel that I want to create an image of the male protagonist who values friendship and is rich in emotions.

The reader is not the author. The author has the pen of God. The reader can only look at the content given by the author to find the amount of information and settings. I thought that the newly updated chapter 11, the noble master, could introduce to the ignorant civilians how awesome the technology points controlled by the nobles can be to destroy gods, and how the curse came about in the xx years since the war between gods. Unexpectedly, I talked about exploitation and oppression for a long time. Contradictory settings and backgrounds, write what you dream about? The reader is more confused than the protagonist. The protagonist is at least prepared by the author. The reader relies entirely on guessing 😄 Would you like to take a look at the setting? 1. High technology and divine power. High technology defeated God. I haven't said how. How God died is not said. After not knowing the specific time, it may be one day or 109 years later, humans actually have to rely on God's curse to gain strength and obtain awakening drugs from humans. ? ? ? ? ? Where is the high tech? It is better to say that humans have awakened to something else and killed all the gods 2. High technology But with the medieval background, it is difficult for me to imagine a high-tech world where civilians live in earthen houses. Question: Where is the high technology? In terms of displays, guns, and human extraction experiments, that's very high-tech. 3. Human extraction experiments are actually carried out by the state. This is unreasonable and cannot be tolerated by nature. Is such a crotchless country going to start a rebellion in the future? 4. Curse: Everyone has it, but when it happens, they become crazy. So in order to control and master the power of the curse, human extraction experiments were carried out, and humans were strengthened with humans. It's a bit of a joke from hell. About the trial: Everyone has this curse, but the country has to wait 4 years to start a trial. The purpose is to consume known intelligence personnel, innocent people who run into it, and capable personnel to use it as consumables, becoming one of the main sources of materials. The problem is that people on the train are consumables, and those who succeed in the trial are consumables. The country wants to kill capable consumables, so it holds a trial every four years. Then the nobles should really be afraid of being rebelled and revolutionized. Question: What are the technological manifestations of high technology? Destroy the gods but use the power of gods to form an important combat force in high-tech countries? Please explain.