
Soar, on the Green Rubber Field
翱翔吧,在绿胶场上
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 77k Words
- Genre
- Sports
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Sporting Events
- Updated
- 7mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It's not well written, so let's just read it
I have read a lot of sports novels, but not many about badminton, so I will write one myself. Hahaha, the product of self-"yy". Rebirth? System? It's like I don't have the brainpower. Evaluation of this book: It feels good, but not enough. The story develops, just like that. The content and plot should be written wherever dreams occur.
The magic sword has a thousand blades, it only kills but never kills
As an amateur badminton enthusiast and a senior reader of online articles, the first ten chapters of this book pass the test. After all, it is an unpopular category of unpopular topics. This book is ready to be read. (Well, we badminton people also have our own online articles. It can only be said that badminton is not low in popularity, but writing novels is still not as good as football and basketball, especially football. The system is too mature and there is too much to write about.) A few suggestions: 1. Find the characteristics of the protagonist. It is boring for a protagonist who is only more mature in tactics and more solid in basics to win all the time. Either write that the protagonist has obvious shortcomings and use hard work and brains to make up for them, or write about the trump cards of the protagonist that can achieve a success rate of greater than 80% (in other words, either the average level is weak but has flaws that need to be made up for, or the average level is average but has unique skills and potential) Writing like this is okay, but it is not enough and will not attract people. 2. Pay attention to characterization and never allow a character that can appear more than five times in the article without an image that can be remembered by readers. You can either brush him/her off as a mere tool, or you can carefully consider what he/she says and what he/she does, including his/her appearance and psychology. It doesn't matter if you write about sports, because if a novel doesn't have a protagonist that readers like, readers may not want to read the book, but if there aren't any memorable supporting characters, readers won't be able to read the book. Your supporting characters appear a lot but have few details. I can't even remember their names now, and the ambush is not buried like this. If it doesn't work, you can write more about the playing scenes, maybe two or three hundred words in one round, which can also have a good effect (of course, I don't mean to write five or six thousand words in one round, but there must be a truly exciting turning point and game effect)