Wild! Across the Galaxy

Many years later, when clicking on Jin Feng'er's latest critical review video, Cookie will think of him reading "Wild!" That afternoon of "Across the Galaxy". I originally wanted to analyze it in detail, but I felt it was really unnecessary. To sum it up: the main plot in the early stage is unclear, the character creation is not there, the description of the environment is almost zero, I like to throw around nouns without explaining them, and the atmosphere creation is even more awkward. Oh, I wrote a few hundred words and then deleted them, I just want to rate it as history! In the end, luckily we didn't sign a contract.

Feng District will always be the passionate author. No matter how dissatisfied you are with the new book, no matter how many mistakes you make, the new book will always be full of energy and hard work. This kind of temperament is what the online literary circle needs most now. Feng District is the king who I learned to kill gods in the mental hospital, the all-star of the Lord of Mysteries, the savior of the king who spared his life, the top 75 who sells the carpet at the beginning, the transitional messenger who swallows the stars, and the lone hero of the nomenclature of the night. You are not wild! The scapegoat across the galaxy! !

I tried to follow the method mentioned by brother ybf in the video and imagine the picture while reading. It was indeed very comfortable to watch. If I just read the text, I always feel that the rhythm is out of sync. In addition, the title of the book is Maggot. If you don't know who the author is, you probably won't be interested in reading it. The update speed is also maggot. Normally, if it updates 3k a day, even the grass jelly can only eat dust on my bookshelf. However, I can feel that this book is still very different from ordinary novice works. If the author is Lao Feng, there should be no problem with the outline. If the story can be completed, it may also be a good online work.

I have written at least 500,000 to 1,000,000 words in this book, which is just like practicing writing online articles The next book will be about writing fan fiction and then reverse it! Oh, by the way, you can attack the plot, but don't attack the author.

A masterpiece, a blast

Do you need me to give you a chapter recommendation? There is no charge, but when readers scold me, I will let them read what you have written.

Come on, the toilet at the entrance of the village is almost out of paper

Publish the physical book. The toilet paper at the entrance of the village is running out.

It's not that I won't update it anymore. I'll sort out my thoughts before writing.

I worked hard through the new book storage and new book lists in various categories, and finally I found it😡 I didn't expect it, Teacher Dafeng! Even if you don't tell me the title of the book, I can still explode it in front of my powerful economic investigation box-opening ability! 😈 Jiejiejiejie, start tasting, start criticizing! ~(¯▽¯~)~

It's fair to say in the comment section, but in reality, who doesn't want to sell their RV, and then rush to book "Wild and Across the Galaxy!" 😄

Do you know which chapter your first chapter will usually appear in Master Platinum? At least Chapter 10 to Chapter 15. Why? Because you have a vague worldview, which means you created it yourself. You didn't even introduce the worldview clearly, and just wrote a lot of incomprehensible terms. It's really like reading a bible. Don't talk about learning from great gods or platinum. Even if you learn from Lu Xun, Yu Hua, and Mo Yan, no one can write like this. Do you understand? Have you really read the online article?

Brother Feng, although you really write like a district, don't give up, at least you dare to publish the title of the book. This behavior has surpassed 99% of Internet writers, although what you write is still a district.

Lao Feng, how many words did you write? Clean up, find a building and jump off.

I criticize this and that all day long. ,, Open your mouth for a literary masterpiece, shut up! Connotation, value, take a look at what you wrote, right? Take a look at what you have written, and give it your own critical review and rank it. , This fun is so funny.

Whether it looks good or not is subjective, but the data is objective. This time I was really beaten by Douluo colleagues. 🙂

Specifically downloaded from the starting point, Lao Feng is quite pitiful, giving people a bitter feeling of desperately trying to make people laugh but not being able to make people laugh 😭

I hope to see this one in Akaashi's novel inventory in the future 😍

This is a common problem in literature and art: aesthetics and output are completely unequal. Every day I read too much, and if I start writing by myself, I will directly write the construction, and then I will know that my writing is very formal, and the output will become a kind of torture. The enthusiasm will inevitably fade, and the output will become more formal, and this is a vicious circle. But I still don't understand why this article was classified as a light novel. If you're talking about urban or science fiction, the readers there are probably more venomous than those who read light novels. Except for the single literary works on the Internet, your article is far from good. Dune, Game of Thrones, including Cyberpunk 2077, which one started like this? Completed the desire to read no more I said I read four hours a day, but I really read it. What did I learn? I cover my face with the book before going to bed every day. Have I read for 12 hours?

Why not re-open a book called "Wild, Shocking Asia" and write about sports and basketball. I feel that the traffic will be very high. If you don't sign at Qidian, you can bring your talent to Tomatoes.

After finishing this mess, I will go back and watch the Japanese chapter of God Slayer, and I will look pretty.

Uh...

Perfect interpretation of the saying "high ambition but low power"

Thanks for the monthly votes of "Until I Wake Up", "Long Gone After Death", and "Book Friends 3197"

I wonder if I laughed when I finished writing this book. It's really not a district. The rhythm and writing of the online article are all wrong. It turns out that a good reader and a good writer are two different things.

After reading Chapter 15, I will tell you my thoughts for the author's reference. (I am a reader of Leziren Internet articles who have gained fame from the book recommendation video. I think I have read a lot of Internet articles and have a relatively high intensity of Internet surfing.) First of all, the blogger said in the short video that the first three chapters are seriously funny, or the protagonist makes serious complaints. In fact, in my opinion, the look and feel is actually pretty good, and it is more suitable for people like me who have fun. But as the plot progresses, perhaps because the blogger listened to other people's opinions, this taste gradually faded away, and then the protagonist's indifferent character looked a bit flat after losing the point of complaining, like a cold robot without its own emotions and purposes, and was completely pushed down by the plot. Secondly, there is no hook in the plot to make readers want to read further. For example, why does the protagonist go undercover in Kowloon District? This plot may gradually unfold in the future, but in the early stage, it has been foreshadowed, what is the purpose of the undercover mission, or what is special about Kowloon District. In addition, the protagonist has not entered the main story in ten chapters, so I can only endure it and read it, so the viewing experience is not very good. In addition, this is the first time for the blogger to write an online article, and the latest chapter is relatively far back, which makes readers feel very unsure, as if there is no outline and they have to think about it one by one. The blogger is just for reference, I still hope that this book can be written smoothly

I'm so angry. I read the comment section and it said that the masterpiece was deceived into a mess. Now I need to ask the author for mental damages 😭

I apologize, Lao Jin, I made a mistake when I read what you wrote, Lao Jin. It showed me that I am confident, and I have a big problem myself.

In the novel, the characters are scaled and half-clawed, green and childish. The video gives pointers to Jiangshan and scolds Fang Qiu! All I can say is, wild! Zonghengwangwen! 😆

It doesn't feel as good as Douluo Dalu: The Story of Xiaowu**