The Missing Carriage
消失的车厢
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 235k Words
- Genre
- Realistic Fiction
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Human Condition
- Updated
- 5mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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0Monthly votes
324Recommends
33Fans
47Chapters
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I haven't read the text yet, but your introduction needs to be changed.
Nowadays, readers prefer cool articles. You have to untie the knots in the hearts of the people in the carriage. After reading it, many readers will only think, "Why?" Although you set that you can only leave after solving the knots in your heart, the reasons for doing things are not sufficient for readers. They will abandon the book after reading the introduction. You change it to, "Until the soul of the deceased begs me xxx", I untie their heart knot and harvest their property at the same time. You can also make an article about the identity of the supplicant to increase the readability. It is easier to find some famous characters, or characters that are special enough It will be much better. I am not really asking you to search every soul, just giving an example.
"Night in the Sky" is really well written and vividly depicts the oppression in the workplace. It is a true portrayal of the internal atmosphere of a foreign company!
Chapter 34 was so heart-wrenching to read, and I felt sorry for Xu Wan.
I have read Chapter 35, and I didn't expect such a reversal. It's terrifying to think about it, terrifying to think about it... I'm kind of looking forward to the final ending. According to the current logic, Lin Wang would not be able to get off the car alive. Be curious
Seeing the final ending was so shocking!
The author put in a lot of ingenuity and twists, and the last scene made me cry. So well written!
It's a bit exciting. The author will continue to update!
It feels like there is a twist later. One of Lin Wang and Xu Wan must be the murderer, and the fire must not have started accidentally. I bet five bucks that Lin Wang is actually the real murderer.
🙂The author's level is so high
A profound horror novel
The first half is dark, the second half is a twist and reveal, and the ending is warm and full of meaning.
Introduction recommendation
The G404 train started The carriages in front were disappearing one by one The sounds in the carriage died out in an instant It was my turn soon I looked at the people's panic and felt noisy Finally... "Train G405 has arrived at the station. Passengers please get off in an orderly manner, thank you!"
The plot is extremely compact and heart-wrenching. I can't control it at all from the beginning. I have to read it in one go. A platform like Qidian is not worthy of this book!
Good writing, but the pacing is too right and too tight.