
Hand It over to the Country, and the Country Will Help Me Reach the End of the World
上交国家,国家助我登顶末世
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 60k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Apocalypse
- Updated
- 7mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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What you wrote is too casual.
There are so many typos, grammatical errors, and unclear words in the first chapter. How can you keep readers from following your book? I really like this kind of apocalyptic article that relies on the country, and I hope the author can write it well.
Why are they all submitting documents like this? Have you received any instructions or tasks?
I can't help it, I really can't help it...
The introduction has a total of 6 paragraphs, including the square brackets, 7 paragraphs. The first paragraph is indistinguishable, and the subject is wrong; The second paragraph is missing words; The third paragraph has redundant quantifiers and unclear semantics; The fourth paragraph is "conquering territory" and is indistinguishable; The fifth paragraph is redundant about "seeing", not daring to "be", and redundant about "eating"; The sixth paragraph has improper punctuation. .