The Legend of Shushan in Red Mansion in the Forest
林中红楼蜀山传
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 500k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Alternate History
- Updated
- 4mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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167Chapters
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Too slow to heat up
And I'm curious as to why you don't even have an official advertisement.
Practice writing, right? Training AI? You can learn from copying official documents, and don't rush to write your own characteristics. You have too many loopholes. The first three chapters are written with a county magistrate who died in office three years ago and his wife also died. He only has a loyal old servant as the eye of the storm. There are many loopholes in the writing and the logic is confusing. How many maids does Jia Baoyu have in the Red Mansion? The protagonist is from an official family, a big house. It is written later that his family even has an elder who is a prefect.
In the middle chapters where Lin Ruhai returns to Suzhou, the content is a bit confusing and some of the plots don't add up.