As an NPC, Having More Than 100 Million Skill Points Is Reasonable, Right?

No matter how good the author's painting skills are, how desperate his plot settings are. It is a very pure classical style of play without any unnecessary design. It is all a tribute to the classical Western fantasy game genre_(´ཀ`‖ ∠)__ But if this is the author's comic script, it will be a surefire success. I will upgrade the like form alone to enjoy the novel.

After the story was written, there was a problem with the plot connection. The writing was not clear, as if I was writing somewhere in a dream. It's not a derogatory meaning, just an analogy.

It seems that a lot of details have been missed - such as what world view is in the beginning, why is the protagonist in the wild, why are there weapons, and why do you encounter giant lizards? Why do various animals cooperate with each other to form a beast tide? Why don't they attack each other but instead stare at human gathering places to death?

The author said that he is a newbie. If true, he has the qualifications to prove the truth. The small details are not particularly good at the moment. The first one is the mammoth boss. Some people say why the materials are only enough to make one piece of equipment. (I think I can reply to this, such as the game equipment creation settings. This needs to be done at present. A clear setting, otherwise the equipment system will easily collapse), the second detail is to use too much force, although I know you want to express that some people have two minds about God, but it seems a bit like the church in the protagonist's area has completely rebelled against God. Come on 😡 I hope it gets better and better (ps: The illustrations are very good 😆

Everything else is fine, but there is an embarrassing little problem. Some skills are introduced in quite detail when selecting them, but after selecting them, they are not used at all, so they are melted. To be honest, it is a bit redundant. If they are not used, just give them a brief summary. It is a bit confusing to write them in such detail. It can be fully introduced in the later stage. If it is given to the players, it will be introduced in detail.

The plot is average, the writing is average, and the creativity is average to excellent. Some minor restrictions were added later and it didn't develop as smoothly as I expected. It's probably an advanced version of the previous online game novels. At present, the team is still a small stronghold.

It's so hard, there's no plot at the beginning, so I just started jabbering about the word count of skill introductions and crazy world view. I don't even dare to think about how complicated it will be later 😥

There is too little paving for the connection of the plot. It has just settled down for a while and it is now at the forefront. It is suggested that it would be better to add event tasks to give hints and rewards. Remarks: If you have a phobia of insufficient firepower, you can also add some trump cards to the protagonist

It feels okay, but the number of words is a bit short

The author actually drew the illustrations himself, which is pretty cool

Great, great, great! ! ! The storylines are intertwined and make people want to keep reading. Please update more soon! ! ! 🥺🥺🥺

It feels like reading an online game novel from 10 years ago.

It's very well written, please encourage us and recommend yourself (Goblin is obsessed with the heart)

A bit incoherent, European and American style of play

The previous plot was okay, but I didn't like the sudden connection to players and forums. Apart from anything else, the introduction didn't mention the players at all, and the protagonist felt a bit too smooth and deliberate.

It's very strange to call a young player I didn't even understand what it meant after reading it.

Come on, keep an eye on you. You will be the next, this game is too real; you will be the next popular fourth natural disaster article.

The writing is quite good, but the popularity is too low, don't be tj. In addition, the author made reference to Super God Mechanic