A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I Have a Jade Cultivation Manual in My Sea of Consciousness!

Should I keep the Barbarian Beard and the Jiyin Patriarch?

Author, please don't accept Nangong Wan, Zi Ling Yuanyao, these belong to Han Li, just look for others.

It's not strong enough, it's just a little bit arrogant. Mysterious instructions on how to use the millennium elixir to exchange for a refining weapon, regardless of whether it is worth the risk or not, do you need a refining tool? Can you use the Bloody Forbidden Land? If you want to open it, press it; if you want it, don't use it. There are many general directions for writing fan fiction, so you have to choose the same one.

Putting aside the fairy tale, if the protagonist knowingly knows that Nangong Wan is an alchemy monk and deliberately provokes her before he develops, it means that he does not take his own life seriously at all. It was mentioned in the original work that she also hesitated whether to kill Han Li. In addition, her role is not even as good as a supporting role, and her background is very troublesome.

After reading a few chapters, I can't stand it anymore. With this kind of mentality and IQ, are you still hanging around in the mortal world? The hook is too high, so why are you still selling exercises? The mortal world is what you call a typical dark world of immortal cultivation. Even if you are in the same sect, if you are a helpless person and practice a little faster according to your qualifications, some people will suspect that you have some treasures. If you are polite, they will force you to confess. If you are not polite, they will directly plot to kill people and seize the treasure. If your cultivation speed is very abnormal or you reveal your wealth, then you are not of the same level, but a foundation-building monk who wants to talk to you. Let's talk about it. The protagonist has the mentality of Xian Ni Wang Lin. He behaves like an idiot and does things as he thinks of them. He never considers the consequences. It's ridiculous to be able to live in the mortal world. It's too dramatic. Go and write a fairy Ni fanfic. Really, mortals are not suitable for you. You don't have a truly mature mentality. You can't be cautious and always have unruly people who want to hurt me!

If you don't accept Nangong Wan, it will be troublesome to reincarnate, and because after reincarnation, it will be considered poisonous to some people.

When I read your introduction, I knew that this was my favorite book. This is the way to read it.

It's too poisonous 😡 and the author is also a bombastic person

Animation plots written about mortals will not end well. Sit back and wait to be cut

The writing is very good, I hope I can stick to it. You can use AI to find inspiration, but it is not recommended to use it directly, even if it is modified. The chapter on the fairyland must be written in a high way