Dad, You Stay with the Rich Woman, I Will Take Care of Her Daughter

Master UP, if you can do as well as the book next door, you will be awesome. I will ensure that you will have no worries about food and drink in the future. I will give you a look at my bookshelf

The emotional drama written by the author is very good. At first glance, it looks like a little virgin who has never been in love. Only children who are stuck in fantasy about love can be so beautiful. Come on 👍 Don't fall in love, otherwise you won't be able to write anymore.

Why is the male protagonist a male? I'm really convinced. If you write like this again, I will vote for someone else.

Maybe it's because the author said that he is not Xiao Chunan, and the sweet feeling of love disappeared immediately. Looking at the story again, it is full of greasy plots, the male protagonist is dirty and the female protagonist is kitsch. Alas, I can never go back to the pure past

Is this considered a desperate act?

Change the main character to a female channel. The more I watch it, the weirder it becomes until the male protagonist's father undergoes chemotherapy. This kind of literary and youthful writing style should be easier for female channels

It's been a long time since I've seen such an interesting rebirth story. The female protagonists have cute and unique designs, and the interaction with the male protagonist is also very interesting. Although the general setting of the male protagonist is still the same as that of a reborn person, it also has unique highlights. Except for the fact that there are a lot of typos in the last ten or so chapters, which somewhat affects the reading experience, overall it can be regarded as a recent urban rebirth novel. I hope it doesn't have tj, and I will definitely order it when it is released.

Why didn't the protagonist take down Aunt Zhao himself?

Why can't the male protagonist get the rich woman, and the male protagonist's father get her daughter?

The routine of writing a book is a bit like that of authors from more than ten years ago, those authors who constantly put the heroine at risk of being raped and seduced. Of course, there are just some traces

The first part is well written, but the second part is a little too awkward. The piano teacher Li Zixuan, who plays a very important role in the first part, and the smart and playful Wu Siyu are completely invisible. In the recently updated chapter, Wu Siyu is completely designed to be a fool, which is completely different from what was originally written. Li Zixuan is even more like a deleted person. The front is very interesting, but the back is completely updated for the sake of updating. Has the author changed?😥

Do you know why your grades are poor? Isn't it bad to be with a rich woman? If you are with a rich woman, she can spend her money on you, but if you are with her daughter, her money may not be spent on you.

I seem to see the shadow of Chen Gou😡,

I am waiting for the author's next book. I am very interested in this book in the early stage. Each heroine has her own characteristics and only has some minor flaws, but the flaws are not concealed. But I can't stand it anymore when Father Lu comes out later. Every heroine is a girl from a rich family. I can't accept this kind of setting where it's just a waste of money. Xiaolu was originally a character who was self-reliant and persistent. The protagonist gave her so much help and made her follow him wholeheartedly. This should be a back-up effort. Even if the other heroines were in the Shura field, she was just looking for opportunities to steal chickens. The setting should be a woman behind Chen, and she should be able to sign up for a class and become a capable secretary. I think this is the direction. But when Father Lu comes out, everyone is a rich girl, and everyone can eat soft rice, then this Shura field will definitely explode, and this will make Chen's help look very weak. You can say how miserable the deer was before he came, and how important his help was, but now, even without him, the deer's life will become very good and exciting when the deer father comes back, turning this kindness from a life-saving kindness that cannot be repaid to a very simple act of kindness. That Xiaolu can still hold on to this relationship and calmly accept becoming a member of the harem. I feel ridiculous.

After reading the first three chapters, I felt that the author did not make the protagonist feel confident about eating soft food, but made the protagonist feel confident about asking for money.

The title of the book looks like a desperate person. Why can't Qidian block the author?

I love watching it, I just like this kind of youthful feeling where I start to fantasize again, but the key plot is awkwardly skipped because I haven't seen it before and can't exaggerate it.

An ancestral toad family? ! ! 🙄

Not much to say, the male protagonist is gay

I just watched it, why are there so many poisonous points😦

I originally wanted to delete the book and leave immediately, but I really couldn't help it. I was so disgusted that I had to come to the comment section to complain. The character and psychological activities of the protagonist described in the book are very childish and frivolous, and cannot be calm at all. Not to mention how to behave Then Wu Ruobing's mother appeared in more than 50 photos. She was brought to school by such an abnormal person to cause trouble. The protagonist had no way to do anything. Then the teacher has to use the protagonist's mother's words to find trouble, and then go and get the protagonist's grades to prove to him that the protagonist is not a bad student or something like that, it's just nonsense. According to reality, the high school gate is blocked and no one is allowed to enter, so these parents cannot enter at all. Not to mention that the mother of the heroine in the back was always sarcastic, and no one interrupted her and even reasoned with her. As far as literary works are concerned, the author has always used the heroine's mother to express negative emotions, ridicule and satire, but in the end the protagonist has no countermeasures. Isn't that poisoning?

Many people have talked about it, so I will talk about the issue of character design First of all, Chen Dahai is not the kind of person you think. I have already thought about his plot line, but I haven't described much about Chen Dahai in the early stage, so you don't have to make such casual conclusions and look at it later. Chen Dahai's plot has not been advanced very much, and his character design has not been fully fleshed out. The plot is only a hundred thousand words long, and there are already many female protagonists, so readers, please be patient. Anyway, Chen Dahai did not have much influence on the protagonist in the early stage, so there is no need to be so entangled. Finally, I feel that we may not be able to understand a person even after being together for several years or even more than ten years. I don't think it is necessary to judge a person in these ten lines. I have thought carefully about the characteristics and personality of each character, and each character will have unique memories. So instead of saying what Chen Dahai is like, maybe you can think about the reasons behind this. For example, what happened to the mother who never appeared. When I design characters, I adhere to the principle that "everything you do must have a reason." Everyone's behavior has a reason, so everyone can discuss the characteristics of each character and the reasons behind it.

This book is a dog-licking self-fantasy

I've almost caught up with the latest chapter, but I can't stand it anymore. There are too many poisonous points, unclear thinking, and I often miss the setting or forget about the other after writing one thing. The character of the protagonist is completely a private scumbag with no responsibility. Even if you directly say that you want to have a harem, I will say that you are a man. All the characters have amnesia and say and do things that are completely inappropriate. The author should think carefully about whether he is writing seriously. I heard that you also have two books, so you should finish writing one first and then talk about it.

The subject matter is good, but there are many nonsensical plots in the novel. Even the most casual readers can see that it is tasteless and a pity to discard.

This book is simply amazing. I thought the food and grass at the beginning were just rations, but I was able to chase after them fiercely. I thought I could see the emotions of father and son go hand in hand, clearing the emotional line for the father to protect him, but it turned out not to be the case. I thought I could see the time management master, the rain and the dew are both wet, the fish and the bear's paws are fighting, although the king does not see the king, but the battle in the Shura field requires blood, but the king appears, singing and dancing, the result is not. Well, let's look at the career line of the male protagonist, recruit a few female Zhuges and Sima, and then rely on the help of the stepmother to build a business empire. The result is no. What did I chase after in the end?

The early writing is really beautiful, funny and interesting. As the writing progresses, the author becomes less depressed and starts to let himself go.

Talented, but not so unsatisfactory. The lasting friendship at the end is something that many readers don't want to see. You can actually change the way of writing to avoid the censorship. You can't accept minors. Why can't you wait until they grow up? I have read so many novels. In fact, the censorship is very dull. Can it be a little more clever? Now save it and write a few extras. After three or five years, I still can't forget it, and then accept them all. Isn't that enough? Is it that complicated? I know you have a lot of concerns, but you can actually write better.

Why is the school beauty gone again? Can we still win the Easter match?

If you open a new book, can you please stop making plots where the protagonist is wearing a hat?