Jingtian's Experience

Those who came from the wall must be humanities students. They wanted to write online articles, and they had the tenacity to write hundreds of thousands of words, but they did have many obvious flaws. I took a rough look at the first two chapters, but I didn't read them word for word. From a reader's perspective, the biggest problem is that the plot is unclear and difficult to read, and the text does not conform to the entire online literature market. It is a long paragraph of wordy words, complex settings, official positions, and complicated character relationships. This narrative is flawed. Sorry, it's not as simple and clear as a web text. After reading a long paragraph, I don't know what the meaning of this text is. It's not that the complex official system is not good. There are also more serious web texts, such as Shao Song, which are also very complicated and sophisticated, but his words and characters are much clearer than yours. From the perspective of a desperate author (although I have no achievements, I still have some research), there are problems with your narrative and obstacles in your reading. On the one hand, this obstacle comes from your fiction, which prevents readers from referring to dynasties, and your official system is also too complicated. You lay out a large section of setting and background at the beginning, which directly dissuades readers. You also have many characters, and their relationships are confusing. After reading it, I feel like I can't remember anything except the few specific nouns you wrote. Internet writing is a commodity, and it depends on the market. Your narrative and your starting point are not enough to support what you want to write. Learning relevant business logic is the first step for you to start writing a book. It is not just to throw out what you want to write when your brain is hot, to show how much you know and how clever your settings are. The expression of online writing requires skills. Even if what you want to express is very advanced, but your method is wrong, it will be in vain. If you have the idea of ​​​​signing a contract to make money, then to be honest, it is difficult to have a chance to sign a contract with the way you write. You have to understand that a product needs to have a selling point, which can be your writing style or your wild imagination, but these all require corresponding skills. Reading more popular online articles and summarizing their characteristics is the first step for you to start writing online articles. Your writing still has a certain skill, but it is indeed too cute. If you learn professional skills, you will still be very talented in the field of online writing. You can read more online articles of the same type. I don't know much about historical classification. I only know that the books about Shao and Song Dynasty are relatively good. You can read more, but you don't have to read the whole text. The main thing is to look at their narrative method, character creation and control of the rhythm of the plot. (The above comments are not meant to teach you how to behave, but are just the simplest opinions of a street-fighting author, which may not be completely correct. Use what you think is useful, and just listen to what is not useful for fun) In addition, if you don't know about Qidian signing, you can try to send it directly to the relevant editor by email. Generally, some better editors will attach relevant suggestions to you. The editor's contact information should be found in the background of the assistant, otherwise you can go to Longkong to check

The writing is very detailed. The first chapter is so detailed that everyone's clothes are written in a long paragraph. I wish I had such a descriptive ability. The author has a wide range of knowledge and is very talented. If he learns the routines of learning online articles, he will have a lot of potential in the future.