What? They All Really Exist?

I don't know what will happen next. I was a monk in my second life, just like a monk chanting sutras. With modern memories, time is fragmented. It's too bland. I can tolerate this and that. I know it's a setting, but it's too routine. There are almost 50 chapters in one life. With a sweet beginning and a tragic ending, the story of this second life is almost 100 chapters. There are not many chapters in modern times. After hundreds of years here, can there be a seamless connection back to modern times? Impossible. Memory affects people a lot.

How did Sanguan Zheng and Duo heroine appear at the same time😄

Can you write a book? I haven't seen the male protagonist menstruate until now. What, is the male protagonist menopausal? Have you ever been a male protagonist? I took some things for granted and wrote them randomly.

It's very well written, and I'll give you the monthly pass. The narrative pace is just right, the character interactions are not awkward, and there's no sense of pretense. The best thing about it is the character of the male protagonist. He's calm, gentle, and moral. It's not very common at the beginning. Just write at your own pace.

I have read more than 40 chapters of the light novel. The flavor is too strong. All the people are very nice. The good ones are unreasonable, such as Uncle Zhao. How can you be given land in a real rural area? People also have wives and children. How can there be so many good people in daily life. Also, Taishang Qingqing has been written badly in many works since I was a child. I feel that the Immortal Sect here has nothing new and is too bad. I hope there will be some foreshadowing to round it out. Give me a good idea

It's really good (´∀｀*), but the introduction is a bit low. If I hadn't read the comment section, I wouldn't have clicked in. The main reason is that the plot is relatively novel and the characters are very clear.

For example, it's a dream. Can you endure the days when you are young and strong? I really can't help it, I want to fuck a girl when I see her

Personal opinion, don't criticize if you like it or hate it Advantages and disadvantages coexist First of all, I only saw the end of the copy of Cowherd and Weaver Girl. Immortal Sect disciples came to Blue Star to find Cowherd and said they would kill him. I didn't see much content Advantages 1. The writing is very good, especially the love between men and women. It is very good. The author must have written light novels before. Speaking of romance novels 2. The setting is pretty good. I have seen similar settings in other novels, but it is normal. After all, there are only a few settings. It is normal to use them back and forth There are so many shortcomings, or points that need improvement 1. There are too many riddle points, not The riddles are not good, but they are too dense. It's like reading a detective novel, flipping back and forth. It's interesting at first, but then you get tired 2. The first copy ends a little hastily, but it's actually not bad. 3. There are some problems with the details. The subject matter of the novel is different, and the point of view is naturally different. It's a light novel. It focuses on characters, romance, etc., While dungeon novels focus on compact plots. This book should be regarded as a type of fantasy novel plus light novel. I feel that the author should divide it regularly. For example, the light novel theme should be the main theme, and the imaginary novel is supplemented. The plot should be softer, and the female protagonist and the male protagonist interact with each other, and what is the experience of dungeon after dungeon. Or if it is mainly about fantasy novels, supplemented by light novels, and focuses on the rhythm of the plot, then the emotional plot must be ignored. It has to have a focus. At present, I feel that the focus of this book is not clear. I like to read light novels and imaginative essays. I read copies one by one. I will find this book interesting at first glance, but I will feel tired after reading it for a long time. You can't satisfy the preferences of two different groups at the same time. My suggestion is to focus on the light novels you are good at. Write less foreshadowing, riddles and so on, so that it will be better. Finally, a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it. I am purely speaking from my feelings, just read it for fun

What a treasure, this book is so delicate

I originally read it with the intention of reading it for fun, but I didn't expect that so far I have a good grasp of the pacing and the writing is not bad. It's very comfortable to read along the way. However, there are many cases in this type of articles that are strong in the early stage, but soon start to weaken in the early and middle stages. I think this is mainly due to four reasons: the type of dungeon is single, the power is increased too quickly, and the dungeon is seriously disconnected from the main world. The dungeon is just for finding a new heroine or gaining connections (you can add some dungeons that only enhance yourself for a short period of time). Finally, I hope the author will have a good grasp of the number of female protagonists. I think 2 to 3 is enough. If there are more other situations, it will not end well. It can be said to be a classic lesson for this type of writing. It's a good book so far, good luck to the author.

The writing is okay. There was this type before. But it all sucked. The reason is simple, those women came to reality too early. Pen and ink are limited, and if there are too many people, there won't be enough. Moreover, these women have distinct personalities and it is impossible for them to eat from the same pot. This resulted in the author having to force a harem into the harem by using a deity. Or there is another route, these women are all the same person, but they have been reincarnated and gone through tribulations, and finally become one.

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I was annoyed by the second copy. Just write in support of improvements, just watch and have fun. But the treatment of Ah Xing is really poor. Since we only plan to write about Yu, it is best that this character should not appear. She showed up but didn't give her any qualifications, and talked about longevity, but in the end, she even thought about preventing her from dying. I thought the ending would be wonderful, but it turned out that she was resurrected at the end, which was ridiculously late, and she even let Yu abandon her to others. Ah Xing did something wrong, her family was broken up, and she was adopted by the male protagonist. Even if there is no love, she is still a family member with the male protagonist and Yu. There were only the two of them in her little world, but she was pulled up and resurrected in a daze, and then abandoned away from them. I can't even imagine how desperate she was. Even just being alive is no comfort, because there is no guarantee that you will continue to live after you pull up, and then you will be left alone. It would be even more torture and despair to really keep living. A Xing is just a tool in the author's writing, a complete replica of Yu. Her childhood experience is almost exactly the same, except that the heroine is not treated well, which is simply hateful. The last person who wrote this and made me angry was called Himeno Hoshizou and Morino Essence. Is the author going to do the same thing as Niijima Yuu? I hope the author can give me a reply. Don't treat the characters so coldly. The character's happiness can only be solved by the author's pen. Even if we add a female protagonist, is it so difficult? Now I just want to end this role as soon as possible. It's really chilling to see this kind of arrangement in a novel that focuses on emotion.

I can barely read it, but if I read too many simulations, it will be average and it will easily make people want to skip reading.

If you are not the author, why should you charge money for the book you wrote? If it is not free, why should I read it? 🙂 If you want to earn income, I will give you my recommendation votes every month, so hurry up and give it to me for free 🙂

I have finished reading the first copy, and the first half conquered me. I have read so many simulations that I don't bother to read the simulations, but I can only say that this one is really different 😚, and I feel very comfortable reading it. The love story of the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl... The theme is quite unusual, and the emotions are written in a natural way. This is the best part. I can't read many similar articles as soon as they are awkward. The second half is quite unclear, and it depends on whether the main plot continues well or not. . I'm satisfied if I write normally and don't explode.

I'm speechless 😓 It's just the opposite of Tiangang 😡 After it's on the shelves, you actually have to pay to watch it 👀 and the money you spent will not be refunded! ! Authors should get royalties, but readers have to spend money after spending time. Doesn't your conscience hurt the author? Hurry up and share the royalties with readers! ! ! 🙂🙂🙂

The real plot is written in a mess. And the plot after the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl is a bit wrong. Isn't Yun a rare genius in a hundred thousand years? Nothing has changed after so long. You have done so many things. As expected, I still prefer something a little happier. The plot simulated in the real book is okay, but it's not to my liking.

With the tenth life setting, the author must have dug a hole for himself. Now it can be seen that the author is anxious, but he has ten lives to write and can't hurry up. The readers were anxious and thought it was too boring, so they just skipped reading.

I just read the first copy, and I feel that the author is someone who has seen the same type of book before and is ready to write it again in his own words to make some money. After reading it, I found that the author's level of handling the copy, including the ambush pen, is level 5, and the author is even at the same level as those great masters. There are currently two copies, the first one can be given to you, and the second one can be given to you. If the author doesn't collapse later, can connect each copy to the main world, and wrap up the previous foreshadowing, it is estimated that he can become a god in one book.

The author deserves to be a person who has written daily romance novels before. Among this type of books, he should be the best in writing about romance. I just feel that the title of the book is not very good and I was delayed by the introduction of the title.

This book is about experiencing life, fairy, how did it come true? The routine is like

You said you wanted to write about daily life and make it easy, but what I see is all bitterness and hatred. The male protagonist is so weak that someone far beyond his current stage will come after him at every turn.

Qidian has declined to the point where it can only release six books with limited exemption?

Judging from the first book, the author himself is not good at writing long + simulator articles and it is easy to collapse later. I'm not particularly optimistic about the later part of this book, I hope the author slaps me in the face

The writing is good, but the plot arrangement is unreasonable. I only saw the third life, what should I say? The Riddler, there is too much suspense, it's a bit uncomfortable. I wanted to give up the book a long time ago, because after seeing the end of the copy of Cowherd and Weaver Girl, I felt very sad. Let me talk about my first point of abandoning the book First of all, the protagonist deduces that there is a hidden monster in the Immortal Sect, and tells the heroine not to practice the Supreme Forgetting Art. This is a bit inexplicable. I don't know what clues were used to get that monster. Secondly, the first thing the person sent to Earth said was, kill him, which made the Riddler even more uncomfortable.

After watching The Fire Thief, I felt it wasn't as good as before. If you're not sure, you'd better finish it as soon as possible!

The level of writing fluctuates. The male and female protagonists are in love, and the story of Jiang Jiang Niang Niang is very well written. The male protagonist's own psychological activities, decisions and behaviors fluctuate greatly. Sometimes IQ is online, sometimes IQ is low. The battle sequences are very well written. But this is not important. There are not many readers who watch the battle. The focus is still on the male protagonist's own psychological activities, which I hope can be written with more effort.

To be honest, there are so many simulation novels out there, but why haven't I found a few anti-routine novels in which the protagonist knows the urine of the simulation as soon as he enters the simulation? If you have any, recommend it.

Why is there no one reading such a beautiful book