My Organs Are Too Abstract

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The first few chapters were good, but suddenly it became a daily article for college students, so I gave it up.

6 I thought it was writing experience, but upon closer inspection, it's reading.

Is the author depressed? Go find some porn to read. You have to do something about crotch pulling in every chapter. I really don't understand. Isn't it because the protagonist has nothing to do? There are all weird things and strange objects. Chapter ten is still about college students' life and city galore. Why don't you stop writing these and just call me all my organs.

It was normal at the beginning, and I had enough food and grass in the beginning, but as I continued to write, I became wiser. No, will the awakening of your organs take away the intelligence of your brain? It probably became a no-brainer after it was put on the shelves. Alas, it was like a different person. It was hard not to wonder if someone had bought the book.

The connection between the previous text and the following text feels very AI-like. It feels like saying it at the end of the previous chapter and repeating it at the beginning of the next chapter.

It feels like being a eunuch... Updating the law like this. .

It's quite fun, but the updates are unstable. Stop being a eunuch, brother. I can't let go of the unfinished group 🙂

The idea is good, but the writing style doesn't feel right. It's just my personal opinion.

Introduction Sexual repression is too serious, I guess the author is a little virgin

Have you ever hung yourself? Hang yourself at the beginning, bad review

The back is getting more and more watery and I can't see. .

Updates are getting slower and slower. Are you going to be a eunuch? 🙂

Not bad, weird but the characters' psychology is abstract, giving people a psychological experience that is always beating.

The protagonist has not appeared in the last 10 chapters, what happened

I've seen the same thing before, the organs can cultivate themselves

The author might as well change the plot line to be more exciting and exciting, maybe the results will be better

Reminds me of a previous novel in which the protagonist has the ability to consecrate objects.

The first chapter is pretty good, but I started writing it in the second and third chapters. There is an underground organization that can make people disappear at will.

The writing is becoming more and more illogical. Starting from opening copies one by one, the logic becomes more and more confusing. From the beginning, the protagonist's level as a normal person was directly reduced to the level of Luo Zhi. I suggest you cut it.

I just read the latest chapter. It's very interesting and the author is very imaginative.

In the latest chapter, the protagonist is still slowly awakening his heart on that broken theater stage. In this case, do you want to think about what you are here to do? You are here to help others solve their problems, but your teammates are almost gone. Is this a human mentality? Originally, I was already overwhelmed when I entered this drama copy. How many chapters do you plan to write before you can finish it? The first copies are well written, the plot has ups and downs, and there are not too many ink stains and there are laughs, but the second part is really drunk. Do you still remember the goal of this operation in the later plot? Remember your teammates? A stage play that breaks the strange world, and a play by Long Aotian is performed slowly and I don't know what to say. If you like writing, keep writing more. Don't think about your teammates. Just finish conquering your girl. After finishing conquering, don't think about going back to reality. Just play slowly in the weird world.