There Are Too Many Losing Teammates

I came here on a daily basis and saw the latest chapter 144, which is about the same as food and grass. It mainly depends on whether it can withstand the following thunder. 1. The title of this book is taken from the Japanese comic "There are Too Many Lost Dog Heroines", and the three main female protagonists are all loser female protagonists: the male protagonist liked other men before coming out, and the man he liked before he confessed his love ended up with another woman. This setting is the core poison of the book, and the former sweethearts of the first two female protagonists are positive images, there are a lot of descriptions, and they will be brothers with the male protagonist. The third heroine's former sweetheart is even with a female partner called Ishihara Satomi. After the third heroine met the male protagonist, she directly told everyone in front of her that she wanted her former sweetheart to break up and be with her. The problem with the setting of the defeated dog heroine was not resolved until Chapter 144. The heroines would still talk about their former sweethearts from time to time. The author is stuck here due to this meaningless and unoriginal setting: mentioning the former sweetheart feels that the heroine is pulling on the male protagonist, hanging on to the male protagonist. If not mentioned, it seems that the heroine is unfeeling. If he says that he is in love with someone else, he will be in love with someone else. If you don't mind this setting, please don't read it. 2. The male protagonist is very awkwardly written. The male protagonist's ability will have strong side effects, which led to the early writing of the male protagonist being like the fat male counterpart in other books. Later, he awakened the talent of residual blood and rage. When he was still alive, he was written like a super hero. It combines the social animal who raised four or five children in his forties in the past life with the seventeen-year-old boy in this life, but the writing is neither mature nor mature. When I shouldn't be mature, I feel that the heroines are all children, and I just want to raise them. When it's time to mature, coupled with the super hero debuff attack in front, it will directly hit the teammates hard, and the left and right brains will fight each other. 3. The plot is still the same, familiar with I am my own ancestor and the bucket upgrade flow If you can accept the above points, this book is really worth reading. In the latest chapter, the male protagonist has to eat the master. The author also promises that there will be three loser female protagonists in the following. You can read it after you have fattened up 🤭

It is now fifth on the new book list. But the guy above you is a banned guy, so you are fourth.

Have you ever been a loser? Just write it all out, take it for granted

The long-legged female surveillance lady with golden hair is a slutty and slutty The magician only knows one trick and can be eaten all over the place The eldest lady is a bitch who knows healing magic.

It turns out that he became a loser just because he didn't want to serve the same husband. Then he met the male lead later and was able to do it. Why?

I can already imagine how controversial this book will be.

These childhood sweethearts of the heroine are really good, unlike the disgusting childhood sweethearts of the heroine in the novels I read in the past. Moreover, these female protagonists only have unrequited love, and there is no result. Why do some people say that this is considered a second-hand shabby shoe? I have a crush on a girl, but my confession failed. Am I considered second-hand?

To be honest, your grades are not that good, so there is no need to feel uncomfortable just because you fell asleep. You can't make much money anyway. The plot is okay recently, but the most annoying thing is that you have too few updates. And actually I still feel so-so about adventures, and I really want to watch it now. Lu Ren refused their confession. I want to see those three become losers again, and then know that Lu Ren has a girl he likes and the kind of twisted emotions. There is no need to do it every day because of individual reviews. Affect yourself. To be honest, if you can keep writing this grade, I think you are pretty good. If you can write now, you are already very good. , Because you can't make much money, and you have to be told that it's unnecessary. Stick to your own ideas and write.

How will the emotional line be written later? After all, the female protagonists are almost all losers. After more than ten years of relationships, the similar ones I have read before either the first love is actually a bad B, or a waste. It is normal to fall in love with the male protagonist, but this is not the case. First loves are either strong or good people. If you follow the direction of this book, it will take a lot of writing to deal with first love. But at that time, the pace was big, and this book is a harem novel. Will the loser accept a shared partner? The first lovers don't have any love feelings for the defeated dogs, and the plot of them giving up this relationship must be there. Subjectively speaking, I personally don't like to write down the past events of the defeated dogs and their first loves. For example, there are too many female protagonists of the defeated dogs, and there are many ambiguous plots about the defeated dogs' first love, even in the latest volume. When I found out about this, I was very depressed, and I was worried that Lao Da would write it like this. After all, I can see that Lao Da loves this novel

The ability system of this novel is that people can only specialize in one thing, and are basically weak in other aspects, so geniuses are actually numerical monsters. Passers-by only need to defeat the Void Beast to obtain its skills. Although its value is low, it is the only mechanical monster under this ability system. First, it is very rare. You can basically open a harem if you want. Even if other people in this novel (maybe) do not support a harem in their world view, Lu Ren can still open it. The second is that when faced with people who don't know Lu Ren, they will instinctively regard him as the most common numerical monster in this world. No one would have thought that he is a mechanical monster, and he can also hit an information gap and kill him at first sight. The social team in recent chapters have misjudged Lu Ren, and Lu Ren can also maintain their impression of Lu Ren's spiritual system (forgot what it is) using illusions. Although falling into a negative state triggered the sin of anger, he still clearly knew that he had an information gap and took advantage of it. Lu Ren is not bad, and the author's writing is not bad either. Then apply.

Ah! It's this kind of sweet fantasy, imagining that the other person has all the good things in the world. It's so right that it makes me twist like a maggot. I think only the author Xiaochu, who has never even held a girl's hand, can do it😋

After watching Lost Dog, the female protagonist's setting is obviously based on Lao Ba. What's strange is that some of Lao Ba's settings are based on the male protagonist. The author's world view is clear and classic, and the language is humorous. I found it early and finished reading it in about 2 hours.

Getting married in your forties, still waiting for the birth of your child in the hospital, and then suddenly dying and traveling through time is really hard to evaluate.

It's well written, but a bit uncomfortable to watch. First, the sense of déjà vu is a little strong, and second, the character design is not very good. A character like Jiang Yueying is too troublesome and not likable at all. I have always felt that this kind of unenlightened troll should not appear in any novel as a protagonist. The one in The Lost Dog at least has a side that can take care of his younger brothers and sisters. And the protagonist, byd, is arrogant and gluttonous. This character is too soft. There is also a 40-year-old social worker + a wife who is expecting to give birth. According to the normal routine, shouldn't it be a way to find a way back after going dark? This makes me feel a sense of immorality whenever I see some romantic elements of the male protagonist.

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun. I have heard that calves born in sheep pens do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are in Qidian. You use your computer keyboard frequently, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? Qidian is strong because it has inherited the etiquette and skills of its ancestors. Stop breaking the news, the pressure has nowhere to release, and you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If it goes on like this, great disaster will definitely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can have tens of thousands of royalties and not be hurt by villains is because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! But Pujie can't get royalties, and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who rarely updated, delayed updates, or missed updates were drowned in the vast torrent of works before they had time to feel sad about themselves, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it!

I just read Chapter 10 and already liked my sister's character. But when I saw that my sister was a female supporting character, my expectations dropped by half. Maybe I'm an old sp., But I really shouldn't write about my sister all the time.

It's not bad, the writing is smooth and the plot is interesting. You can tell at a glance that he is either the reincarnation of the old man on the site, or he came to preach from other places.

I feel that the style of recent articles has changed a lot. The protagonist revealed his identity as Tianzun. I feel that the style of the article has changed a lot. It's like switching from a comedy article to an invincible article. The perception is different. Moreover, the psychological description of the master's forced sexual intercourse feels very disconnected. I don't know why it gives people an unacceptable feeling. The protagonist unknowingly thinks that the master is deeply in love with his ex-husband and intends to keep a distance. Li, maybe I subconsciously put the master into the identity of a proud lost dog. I really didn't expect that the master's way to solve the problem was to forcefully sacrifice his body, and now he wants to focus on describing the love of the lost dogs for the protagonist. I don't know what the author's positioning is for these lost dogs? Is it a story about a lost dog having fun from beginning to end or a love story about a lost dog turning into a girlfriend? I think the trend at the beginning is still all lost dogs. I want to know how the author plans to deal with it.

The name of your book should be "Autobiography of the Bull-headed King" 🤭

Based on my many years of galgame experience, teams that make this kind of oath will always be able to fly in the end...

The early story starts with a cool story, awakening a powerful profession + meeting the runaway eldest daughter + other special female characters, it's a very classic adventurer team plot But as the eldest daughter returns to the family, the plot begins to falter. There are also some very interesting characters and plots during this period, so overall it is acceptable But the downhill experience chapter is disgusting to death. The plot direction is unclear + the villain does evil + the protagonist is defeated, and there are many inexplicable developments, which is very strange to watch Everyone expects it to be academic, improve their strength + meet new female characters. But the author chose to open up the world view, saying that the world will end in the next second, the pressure is very low, and the protagonist's combat power does not increase When meeting the villain, he thought the protagonist could fight, but in the end he set up a very disgusting ability that disgusted the protagonist, and in the end he won inexplicably through cheating

In today's environment, only authors with a big heart can write books. The general environment is that most of the comments are abusive and fault-finding. If you want to finish writing, you can't take the comments too seriously.

Like the title, if the setting in the book is a game world, I think there is no problem, since it is all data anyway, but if it is a real world, take Xiao Jiang's extreme point addition as an example, her spell power is 10,000 points, but her physiological tolerance is only 1 point (the strength of an ordinary person), then how can she fight? Wouldn't it kill someone with a thousand-point physique to sneeze next to her? Of course, you can say that a person with this position during battle will not let others get close to her, but what about in daily life? While sleeping on the same bed, the protagonist rolled over and crushed her to death...

The early stage is quite good, and the main character is interesting. You need to fill up the update first. The plot is a bit rough. For details, go search Gaowu Shenren The new book is filled with water as soon as it is released. It has a monthly subscription of 2.3K a month. You can definitely subscribe to both and then slowly modify the text. Who will search for your book now You don't work hard just after being off the new book list. You deserve to be scolded.

These dozen monthly passes will be used as support for the author. If I cut them off, I will not pursue any more books in the future.

Be alert and don't lose your points

😠 First of all, I have only seen 56 chapters, and I can't post with 0 book friend points, so I specifically clicked on the first subscription. I didn't suddenly read the post and found out that I was going to cut it, but it's not unexpected. To be honest, the early stage of this book, I personally think it is well written, but it is only for the early stage, and the later chapters If you point out the problem directly, it will start with a sense of imprecision ①The first poisonous point (in my personal opinion) is that the personal panel can be viewed by others. When the panel can be actively viewed by third parties, there are actually many hidden dangers. However, if you look closely, they are all pitfalls ②Family power, it feels like playing house, without any rigor ③Professional level, the early level jump is too fast and the later level does not feel rigorous and progressive enough (it was like this in the early stage, and there is a high probability of being cheated in the later stage) 😒 What else have I forgotten? In short, the previous writing is indeed good, but the background level design is too problematic and lacks rigor. I don't want to be okay, it is all empty. When I saw Chapter 56 of Taming the Beast, I felt like I couldn't stand it. I guess the author didn't write an outline and just wrote it on a whim? As for the special post about this, I mainly think that the author's writing style is really good in the early stage, and the background design is more realistic and rigorous, and he can write a good article. As for this book, it is probably difficult to push it over again 😠 I can only say that I learned a lesson from each step. I hope that the author may become a great god one day The above are all personal opinions

Well, this is a real plane crash.

I really think it's okay, and there's nothing I can do about it if my grades aren't good. What a pity

Can I ask who the author is?