Douluo Dalu: The Unrivaled Tang Sect: Flame Martial God, Partnered with Dali Gu

I heard that if you slander Ma Xiaotao in the author's book review section, you will be chased and scolded.

I kind of forgot about the setting of Dou Er, but wouldn't Dou Yi, a civilian, be able to awaken his martial spirit when he reaches an age? Why has the popularity rate declined after so many years? Is the Wuhun Palace responsible for awakening Wuhun gone?

Does the heroine only have those character cards? I felt like it was too little, so I asked if it was true. If so, I stopped watching it. I didn't like watching so little of the Douluo heroine.

Author, you have a big problem with your current plot. First, the biggest problem is your heroine. You have only created Xiao Xiao, who can barely be seen as the heroine. Ning Tian, you have very little portrayal. There is nothing outstanding about your character. The character list says she is a supporting actress. I don't know if she can become a heroine. If If you want to turn her martial soul into the Nine Treasure Glazed Sect, your description is too thin. I originally thought that after the emotion was reached, she would evolve the Nine Treasure Glazed Pagoda and master the Nine Treasure Glazed Sect. In fact, the protagonist had no emotional interaction with her. They were all helping and being helped, giving and receiving money. In the end, it was Meng Hongchen. The female protagonist has even fewer scenes. I really wonder why the author didn't do much to shape the relationship between her and the protagonist for a character with such high praise on the character list. And your plot part. I have seen more than 150 chapters. The part where the protagonist decides to go on a three-year journey on his own should be because you think the protagonist's character is too It's too thin. I want to portray his spirit as a dragon warrior. That's okay, but when I saw this paragraph, I felt that the protagonist's personality was a bit biased toward a bad guy. It felt like his strength and temperament were not in line. It's time to give the protagonist a bit of his own personality, and stop acting like a housewife.

Give the protagonist a panel. If there are any omissions, you can help to add them 😁 Chen Yuan God position: God of War (fusion of Fire Dragon King and God of Fire) Plug-ins: Column of Courage, Daligu (Ultimate God of War Dragon), Electrolux, Son of Nature, Vulcan Heritage Equipment: Yang Shen Bow, Pegasus Double-barreled Cannon, Lion Fire Axe, Heart of Creature, Great Sword, Arrows (Super Artifact) Tribulation Flame (Big sword, super artifact, forged with the fusion of the Fire God Sword and the Dragon-Slaying Knife), the water-fire dragon king's bone and blood and the sky-burning god's pestle plus the protagonist's god-level essence and blood to forge super artifact arrows Skills: Ligu Fireball, Eighteen Arhat Fist, Hip-Hop Light Saber, Batty's Holy Flame, Ligu Aperture, Dragon Flame Ball, Brilliant Flame Strike, Sky-Wing Lion King's Demon-breaking Fist! (From Daligu) Undead magic, soul explosion, overlapping strength, soul spell (from Electrolux) Rule the world, lion's teeth (adapted from Moon's inheritance) Triple martial soul fusion skills (Xiao Xiao) Fire Sun Break Coron of Light All ashes return to silence Condensing flames Burning the sky and boiling the sea Qianyuan Fire Domain Flame Wings, Sky Dance Sky Winged Lion King Spiritual Domain: Space Soul Bone (transformed into a divine outfit): Head: Skull of the Bright Dragon King Torso: Torso bone of Mountain Dragon King Right hand: Right arm bone of Fire Dragon King (Fire Dragon Claw), Right metacarpal bone of Blond Lion Mastiff (Dominator Domain), Left hand: Left arm bone of Light (Dark) Dragon King, Left metacarpal bone of Titan Ape (Titan Sky Cannon (Die Jin·Meteor), Power of the Earth ) Legs: Blazing Pegasus right leg bone (Tianma Xingkong realm), Liehuo Xingjiaoshu left leg bone (Tianyan Yangquan realm, burning fire to rejuvenate) The evil eye tyrant dominates the external soul bone to swallow the 50,000-year-old phantom flying Luan skull, and then attaches it to the skull of the Bright Dragon King as a component (No loss) The left arm bone of the light (dark) Dragon King was transformed by Yi Lao using the left arm bone of the Dark Dragon King plus absorbing the energy of the dragon cloud and the black dragon soul bone Feo Ji Tai Martial Spirit: Blazing Gloves (six reds, three divine rings) First soul skill: flame pattern Second Soul Skill: Blazing Third Soul Skill: Heart of Flame Fourth Soul Skill: Burning Sky Concentration Fifth Soul Skill: Ember-Destroying Fury Sixth Soul Skill: Dragon Armor Fire Core, Flame Yuan Seventh Soul Skill: Martial Soul True Body Eighth Soul Skill: Dragon Prison Flame Ninth Soul Skill: Golden Flame Burning Sky Items: Water and Fire Dragon King Essence and Parts, Thousand-Year Dark Gold Terror Claw Left Metacarpal Bone, Dragon Zhi Leaf, Ten Thousand Years Black Ice Marrow, Ice Divine Crystal, Snow Emperor Origin, Evil Emperor Origin, Evil Eye with Soul Bones attached outside, several Soul Bones, Holy Spirit Cult Heritage, The right to use the demiplane of the undead, the right to use the Ice and Fire Eyes, and the Seven Kills Sword Manual Industry: Spirit Transferring Tower (retired as the first generation tower master) Soul: Fire Dragon King (God King level, evolving, big stomach bag, red gold Xuanyan) Fire Apricot Jiaoshu

This is the first Douluo fanfic I have finished reading. Part of the reason is that I was almost finished when I read it, and part of the reason is that the book is really good-looking, and overall it is indeed excellent. There are no particularly embarrassing operations or plots that reduce intelligence. The plot writing is also relatively smooth. Let me talk about the reasons why I think this book can be successful compared with other Douluo fans. (First: the protagonist's growth and ability settings. The protagonist's growth curve is very smooth, without deliberate leveling or bursts of combat power. It is a very standard cool text template. This allows me to smoothly read more than one million words and start to catch up on updates and build expectations for the subsequent plot. Compared with most Douluo fans, this book abandons the setting of dual martial arts. Instead, it is The focus is on Daligu, the protagonist of the childhood masterpiece. Dragon Fighter and Douluo Continent seem to have nothing to do with each other, but one thing is very important, that is, they are both memories of the post-00s generation's childhood and growth. How many of the readers of this book shouted "Tianyi Lion King Demon Breaking Fist" in front of the TV when they were young? Only the overlap of the audience can make me and most passers-by avoid reading this book. Luo Dalu itself has a lot of demand for skill naming and design. It only has two martial souls and a bunch of soul rings and soul bones, but only those few can be remembered and used in actual combat. At the same time, it also avoids the hydrology generated by a large number of texts (this is very important) (Second: the character's personality and emotional line. The heroine Xiao Xiao's performance in the early stage is really amazing. Although there are fewer appearances in the middle and later stages, there is no doubt. This is something that attracts me very much. The arrogance and human-machine sense of the Snow Emperor are also very interesting to me. Compared with most other Douluo fans, this book has very few female protagonists, and the emotional interactions in the whole book are not frequent. This may not be the best design for readers who particularly like Douluo and those who are not very interested in Douluo. This is actually an advantage. Looking at the entire category of Douluo fanfics, the majority are poor writing and awkward emotional dramas, so that when I browsed Douluo fanfics, the first thing I saw was not the introduction but the character card. The stereotyped heroine and the awkward and homogeneous and boring character are the big ones that I can't avoid. The above is what I think. This is part of the reason why this book has achieved good results. If you have different ideas, please comment but don't attack. As for the shortcomings, I will make it short here, because it is too obvious: the fighting scenes are really messy. This is also an important reason why the author's writing style can only be limited to writing fan fiction. There is not a single eye-catching fight in the whole article, and the author even has a lack of attention to the fighting scenes themselves. I want to reduce the description, but if you don't write more and practice more for the already bad batch, will it help you? Finally, I want to talk about the new books prepared by the author. It is best to reduce the skill text and streamline the article to reduce redundancy. This is my suggestion for Dual Martial Soul. As mentioned above, the author's portrayal of the characters in this book is also very demanding. There is a certain level of skill, but it can still be seen that the emotional interaction in the middle and later stages is deliberately reduced due to lack of proficiency! Also, if you can't fight well with swords, why are you still playing with a shitty sword?

It's okay. I'd say it looks much more comfortable than the one about Dou Yihai Shenlong. Although it's a bit bland, it's the best if it doesn't make any mistakes. As long as I keep it up, I feel that the results won't be bad. It's just the heroine problem. I can't tell at the moment whether it's more or less. Xiaoxiao should be the heroine. After all, it's like this. Ning Tian can't tell. I have to look behind.

The pace is too fast. When watching, it feels like you are in a hurry. There is no time to rest. You finish one thing today and do another thing immediately tomorrow There is no emotional development in leisure time. The alternative branch line makes people look like a robot that only completes the task. The emotional line or some private exchanges are to say a few words to people and then drive them away. It seems that there is no time to breathe and then immediately do the next thing. There is no sense of relaxation when watching the protagonist, and the original timeline is followed step by step.

The plot and setting are quite good and quite normal, but the author's writing style needs to be improved. I have read too many works by great masters, and I always feel a very awkward feeling when reading this. It makes me want to read it but not want to read it. The book has been on the bookshelf for a long time. Every time I read one or two chapters, I don't want to read it. I read it again after a while, and it keeps looping and uncomfortable😔

It developed faster than I imagined, and it ended a little earlier. It's not the kind of crazy water injection in the later stage. It's good to finish it early. It has been completed successfully for more than a month. Let's start a new book as soon as possible.