Even the Witch Taoist Master Will Become an Immortal

I feel that the protagonist has no personality at all. The joy and arrogance of the 80-year journey through Hanxin and his enlightenment at the beginning can't even be sustained for one chapter. To be honest, being killed by a drop of blood from a family is nothing. After all, to be honest, the protagonist is just a golden elixir, but how come you are lucky to survive and don't show anything at all? Where was your previous arrogance? Why are you so different from the one who was killed before, who was just passing by and had nothing to do with you? If you don't say that you are not a gentleman and you don't want to retaliate, and you don't say that the enemy is powerful and dormant for the time being, how can you thank the other party? Someone killed you and turned you into a woman, and you still thanked them

The book is okay, but there are two problems that always feel wrong when I read it. One is that as the witch is the overlord of all realms, the immortal cultivation techniques of the lower realms such as Qingyang Realm should not be particularly prominent (especially the storage bag has never appeared in Germany, and the space prop market is monopolized by one family). Gloria occasionally exclaims in ignorance. At least there are records in the witch realm of immortal attributes, so the protagonist should not be the first to combine immortal cultivation techniques with witches. The other is that the protagonist has always claimed that she is the Witch of the East without being suspected. The Western Witch in the Witch World seems to know very little about the Witch of the East. However, there is no geographical isolation between the East and the West in the Witch World. Given the technical level of the Witch World, there should not be such a lack of information. These two questions always make me feel stuck in my throat when reading the book. I hope the author can improve the setting and explain it more.

I haven't felt anything after reading the last few pictures. How can I put it? It seems that in order to show the protagonist, the witch society was written with low-level characters and stereotyped characters, and then there was a lot of writing about making money. At the beginning, I still need to spread out the world and write it more interestingly. The focus is on witches and immortals. Of course, the most important issue is the update. Now, why is it getting less and less and later? The more you see, the more problems you see.

There is something wrong with her. She keeps talking about the character of her 80-year-old golden elixir Taoist master all day long. She looks down on this one and that one. Brother, are you a golden elixir and have you become an immortal? Your golden elixir is so awesome. How did you turn into a witch with a drop of blood in the first place? There is obviously something wrong with my mentality, especially in the bar. Let me say something like 80-year-old mentality that ignores the charm of others. Funny? You have been cultivating for 80 years, not 8,000 years. You will be invincible in your mind after 80 years. Those angels and demons may not be enough for you to sleep for 80 years.

Only the first ten chapters can be read, and it becomes unsightly from the eleventh chapter The style of painting has collapsed (a bunch of settings have been added, and the world view is a mess) The character design has collapsed (it is set that the Taoist wants to cultivate immortality, but in fact the Taoist does not want to work hard, wants to enjoy, and wants to make money while lying down) The combat power has collapsed (the system of cultivating immortals has been completely reduced to rubbish in seconds, I don't even know what the main character is doing to cultivate the golden elixir. Can you read the title of your book?) The plot is broken (in order to avoid being drafted, you decided to tear apart a piece of the city and take it away?? You can just declare war faster) It is reasonable to guess that the author came up with an idea and wrote the book. Let alone the outline, he probably didn't even think about the main body of the story. I don't understand how the protagonist could change from determined to sell luxury goods to selling arms, then to minting money, and finally be arrested and sent to a labor camp within twenty chapters. Others have a constant ambition, but this protagonist has a constant ambition, right?

What I wrote in the front is okay, but what is written in the back? I feel like they are either witches or sluts, with no personality at all.

The author honestly didn't offend anyone in the witch novel. Isn't that what witches are like? The witches all have a good relationship with each other and don't kill each other. The other one I read went straight into the palace to wait for the old man to fight in the womb, but there was still a group of people protecting him.

The traces of AI are a bit obvious. To be honest, people who often use AI don't want to laugh when they see a bunch of incomprehensible metaphors and inexplicable double quotes and dashes?

So the body was picked up by that dwarf witch for no reason, and it was the first time that he gave it to a passerby NPC 🤔🤔🤔

There has been no update for two days, and there is no excuse note or explanation of the situation.

The layout is small, and the writing is petty. If we collect taxes so harshly, we shouldn't fight.

It's okay, but the protagonist's style needs to be more unique. Sometimes it's deliberately written to be too witchy. Generally speaking, just being a witch inside is fine. Then your selling point is the style of a witch plus a fairy. The oriental elements look more interesting. The beginning of the scene when you first become a witch is good. Later, when you wear Lolita or Western clothes, there is no uniqueness. It feels not as good as the "ohoh~" fairy suit.

The most interesting parts of "Witch for All" are the protagonist's process of learning magic and playing competitions, such as Marit racing and cat-to-cat fighting.

Not bad, maybe the title of the book "Becoming an Immortal" attracted some readers who like to read normal fantasy and immortality books? However, the author did strengthen the protagonist's system of cultivating immortals before becoming a witch, so that it feels a bit like the early "immortal cultivators picking up mistakes and pretending to be awesome on a Western fantasy set"

It's quite a witch. The author writes it very well.

Woohoo, the author doesn't want to be like that.

Like the title, author, why don't you update it? Just wait and see.

Starting point: The beginning of witch literature is politics and satire. If the author knew this, it would be a traitorous story

Immortal caressed my head, tied my hair and received eternal life