A Young Adventurer Comes to Faerûn

The protagonist's name, Kane, reminds me of Aenodia 4, the first Western fantasy game I came into contact with when I was in elementary school. I thought that Western fantasy games were all like this, but I didn't expect that I would be disappointed from the beginning.

The idea is good, but the plot is too childish. It follows the plot of an orthodox DND, but adds a bit of light novel style. I guess both readers will be a little uncomfortable with it. In addition, if the protagonist takes the mage route, the design should be smarter. It's too stupid and will cause you to lose track of it.

Recently, I have received many comments from book friends. Some said it was boring, some said it was cliche, and some said the logic was a bit confusing and the plot was a bit childish. I am very sorry to bring a bad reading experience to book lovers. This is the first time for a newcomer to write a book, and it is also the first time that I have so many words. Even after reading so many lightning protection guides, I still encountered many pitfalls. For example, Hartman's plot and Freya's background story have lost many collections and readings. It is said that the style is a bit fragmented and the plot is a bit abrupt. Learn a lesson, at least make sure your style is consistent, and then try to write as relaxed as possible. After all, this is the first book, so some problems are more or less unavoidable. I have read everyone's opinions and made adjustments to what can be corrected (without affecting the plot). There are a few parts that are completely contrary to my ideas. I can only say I'm sorry for not living up to your expectations. Because it is my first book, I have also thought about the outline of a million words. No matter what the result is in the end, I want to complete it well. I can't guarantee that the quality is too high. The only thing I can guarantee is that I won't be a eunuch, although I don't have the trust level yet. I am really grateful to the book friends who continue to read, your support is my motivation! When I didn't sign a contract, I was always obsessed with suspense. Then I played Baldur's Gate and Crossroads Traveler, and I felt that fantasy stories seemed more fun, so I started writing fantasy. When I was writing fantasy, I had been thinking about why the protagonist would take risks. After thinking about it for a long time, I couldn't find a suitable reason. But then I finally thought about it. There are so many reasons. He is a living person. He decides for himself what he wants to do. He is free and he can take risks if he wants to! Some things have to be done by someone. And I don't know if you have seen that about the protagonist, I gave his alignment. It was because of what he did later that his alignment appeared, which is [Chaotic Good]. How to understand it? He is kind in nature. He will do what he thinks is right. Just like what is written in the book, his pursuit is peace of mind. And regarding DND, I think there are some numerical things that cannot be reflected in reality, such as the D die damage of spells and skills, and there is no life value in reality. Some readers also said that I have too many private settings. I have added these in the relevant works, but many of them are not written in the text, mainly because I am afraid that a bunch of panels will appear. It will look very watery. Tomorrow, the third update tomorrow, I will make up for the missing chapters of the extra chapter. Finally, thank you to all the book friends who are still reading, thank you for your support!

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The author said there are multiple professions, but there are differences between professions. After all, the main attributes are different. It is best not to have both at the beginning, such as Mage + Warlock. In the early stage, just use the same main attribute, such as mages + arcane warriors to add points to intellectual people, or focus on peacemaking between charming people, such as classic magic handkerchiefs or locking handkerchiefs, or even magic locking handkerchiefs that can turn three clears into one.

This book mainly revolves around fantasy adventures. The so-called Kingdom of White Dragon Mist is a long-term plot that will appear very slowly. The early and middle stages are adventure, adventure, and adventure! Therefore, book friends who want to read adventures can feel free to apply. I will also try my best to improve my writing skills to give everyone a comfortable reading experience. In addition, regarding additional updates, they will be added when the busy year is over and there is more time. Especially the big guys who voted for the monthly votes will remember it. In addition, I will not enter the palace.

There is a question. The protagonist is a mage. How can he withstand an ax from a barbarian? Especially when this barbarian is more than two meters tall and the protagonist only holds a sword.

Introduction: Why is it 0/7 after applying oil on the soles of my feet for ten consecutive days?

It's a pity that the setting is too old and the qualifications are too young

When I saw the protagonist's name, my first reaction was to pull out the sword of Kane. I was hopeless.

Ignore the experience value, no experience value is set

Some feeling

Name: Shana Race: Undead Gender: Female Age: 18 Belief: Suellen, Goddess of the Moon Status: Princess Occupation: Lich/Bard Talent: Summoning (summon various ghosts and ghoul zombies) Weapon: Forgotten Tears (harp) Skills: Undead Magic Image: Wearing a rose Crown, a female skeleton wearing a luxurious princess dress and holding a harp Introduction: A certain dead princess became obsessed with death and turned into a lich. She wanted to live and regain her appearance. She made a contract with the male protagonist and became a subordinate and advisor {"NickName":" Lead-filled Dice","UserId":484120975}

The author can take a look at "Travel Through Faerûn". This DND novel is very well written and contains many adventures. The author can learn from it.

Are young people coming one after another? 🤔

Can I have the holy avenger in my left hand and the pale justice in my right hand, and then collect all the flails of time by the way?

There are some plots that I find somewhat disappointing, such as Chapter 63 just now, but I'm still not satisfied after a long time of revision, so I'll just update it on the 16th. I hope everyone will not abandon the book after seeing Water and Poison. It will be changed and added, and everything will get better. (ps: The following is the actual image of the author's copy under the swamps of Faerûn, rest assured that the author is certified)

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