Douluo Dalu: Spirit Hall Reborn After the Battle of the Three Gods

Who asked you to write a novel here? Do you dare to write it here after you have paid the money? Quickly transfer me two hundred yuan, or I will really find a trap to trap you

Can you become Futa like Ning Tian?

To be honest, there is no need to change the plot of Douluo Dalu 2. The genders of Huo Yuhao and the confidante around him are changed. There is no sense of disobedience at all in the female channel. It is a classic female channel that abuses the heroine, crazy cheating + no matter how you cheat, you will be abused + love brain, what is the heroine if it is not a female channel?

Female protagonist, slow pace, taking things for granted, character breakdown, conspiracy theories... In short, the author has a glassy heart and will become fluffy when attacked

The protagonist just suffers, you can see it from one to many

Although the idea of ​​connecting Tianmeng and the goddess butterfly is very good, I remember that silkworms can only turn into moths, and only caterpillars can turn into butterflies 😐 They are not the same species.

In the latest plot, Mr. Gu Yue finally started to steal the house. She turned into a biological suit and wrapped it around Qian Qiuyu. The tentacles under the clothes were crawling frequently Qian Qiuyu used a simulated cover to prevent Gu Ruiqiu and the others from noticing.

Well, it does feel like the writing has the temperament of a female video author. Readers who have too many male videos with nudity will naturally feel disgusted when they see this type of article. Although there are also reasons for different writing techniques and writing focuses. For example, the stereotype of female bloggers is that they like to make some very complicated character relationships, and then build characters within this character relationship. And the language style is more inclined to the various female TV dramas that were watched between 10 and 15 years ago. Maybe it is generally similar to Red Mansion (? It may also be similar to Qiong Yao). But in my opinion, most of the so-called self-internal conflict and delicate and twisted character relationships in this kind of style of writing can be modified to look very male. In the past, they could be modified into classic youth pain, such as Yang Zhi and Guo Jingming. In the future, although the romance in online articles is a bit different, they can be imitated by Japanese writers and have a light novel flavor, or they can be a little crazy, such as Taoism and so on.

It's tied, and it feels okay. I think this book can be divided into two parts based on 100 chapters. The first half is like reading a long article in lof. The writing is quite delicate. The emotional progression of the characters and the transformation of the image are also written clearly. The progress of Yuhao's character during this period is not too harsh, and the plot of Tianmeng is also written very naturally and comfortably Then According to the author's words, half of Yuhao has a pure heart, but according to my understanding, he is just a little lunatic who doesn't know what he wants to do. Moreover, the focus of this part of the plot has changed from Haozi traveling through the world to understanding the world to sadistic three-dimensional crosstalk. You sing and I appear on the stage. Each of them has a unique and ruthless act. It is also the group with the strongest attack power and the widest attack range among the fanfics I have read. It makes me feel a little uncomfortable. Finally, congratulations on the latest chapter, I finally plan to go to the far north. If you don't go to find Bingxue, I will really doubt whether you are Haozi or Qian Renxue One thing is that it really makes the protagonist move and do something, and his mentality has taken two steps forward. I read it in one breath and had to wonder what the protagonist was doing in the second half. In the end, I came to the conclusion that the second half is a three-part crosstalk, and the protagonist acts as a prop. I am determined to be numb when I read it.

@reader Call the observer, this is really good