Naruto: the Life-Buyer of the Ninja World

I feel that this is really ordinary. After the protagonist arrives in Konoha, he has to get some holy water. He is short of money at the beginning. It is clear that the protagonist is a time traveler and he can easily get rich. He has to get this holy water. Not to mention the risks. What if he is coveted and kidnapped? The protagonist obviously has many things in his mind that can be done, such as novels or other business models that are at least ahead of the world, but he has to get holy water.

(Monthly votes have been cast, recommendation votes have been cast) The monthly votes for the work are low, and the recommendations are also low. An alternative behind-the-scenes mobile writing, which is an advanced version of the upgraded writing. Although the entire broad framework does not reasonably examine the specific core of Naruto, it is a second-generation conscience work under the Naruto worldview. Since QQ reading members read, the starting point is also for newcomers. Recommended number: ⭐️⭐️⭐️✨ Advantages: Continuous updates, large quantity, full supply, conscience Poisonous points: The transition characterization is relatively weak, and the original characters are more facially-shaped, resulting in a strong sense of separation between Yunhuoying and Yunhuoying. This is also the data of this book One of the reasons for the weakness Problem point: The grass-roots team of the Naruto worldview was redeveloped through secondary creation. There were big problems in the two lines of Uchiha-Danzo + Konoha F4-4 2. They tended to be short and fast, and lost a lot of sense of substitution. As of the current world disclosure, the current node has entered another type of linear development, which will make people feel that the original second creation will easily collapse Return to the essence: ① Excluding the original influence of Boruto anime, I still don't know how to deal with this point. My personal preference is that the author just abandons this aspect and writes the Naruto chapter directly. Let's be stable first ② Naruto has a disgusting theatrical plot. How to intersperse it, involving time travel, is also a difficulty. It depends on how the author's imagination handles it ③ Currently, natural energy is used to develop the development of chakra lines. In the end, there may be a planet earthbound spirit facing off against the Otsutsuki clan. In other words, it is the will of the planet Gaia to be colonized by the Earth-bound spirits. This is also a future possibility ④ In view of the current data, I am quite worried about the quality later. I hope that the author will generate electricity for love and finish it within 1.6 Million words, so as to accumulate popularity and follow-up reading. The creative quality of the full text is already above average among Naruto fans. If it can be implemented reasonably, it will be a good work. Whether it is Unhokage or not, in the final analysis, it is still a nostalgia for the Hokage complex. I look forward to a more reasonable development of the work. Since the plot should not be revealed in advance, I would like to make a simple recommendation and follow-up review. Contrast point: Maybe the reading of the work is indeed a bit different, and even after 200 chapters, the contrast between the original characters is obvious. However, in this rhythm of daily updates, if you like Naruto and think it is a good second creation, you might as well try more. In World Online, the author has really stepped out of his own second creation, which is worthy of recognition.

I just can't understand the whole text that keeps talking about storing chakra. In the manga, it's always been said that it can be used for cash withdrawal, but now it's become internal energy. I won't make a pill in the future.

It feels so fake. . He died of poison in the first few chapters. There are gangs in a military organization like Konoha? There are only ninjas and their families here, there is no place for gangs.

How can I put it, the protagonist is directly invincible 😅 There is no limit to the size of the metal that can be transformed. That is purely a conceptual ability. The protagonist can directly destroy the entire ninja world, whether it is economic destruction or physical destruction. Economic destruction can turn all precious metals into scrap metal, and physical destruction can directly create a piece of metal the size of the entire ninja world.

Is this a Naruto fanfic? It feels like I'm writing a martial arts novel. Also, is there any quality limit on the protagonist's character? Can it be infinite?

Up to now, the protagonist has changed from taking the initiative at the beginning to being passive now. At least for me, the original focus has completely changed, from the original fairy grass to grain. It seems that there will be no change in the short term. I have turned off automatic subscription. If it is still like this, it at least means that this book is not suitable for me to read.

... I don't want to say more, but the resurrected Rinnegan Eyespot was just killed by five daimyo.

The writing is getting worse and worse. Uchiha Madara with the Samsara Eye can still be killed by the daimyo. If the daimyo is so fierce, what's the matter with Kaguya?

It feels like a hodgepodge of martial arts covered in skin

In summary, there are gangs in Konoha Village, and Uchiha is greedy for money. One last sentence, he deserves to be exempted and no one will watch.

Everything written is good, but it is not suitable for being incorporated into the world of Naruto. It would be better if you directly insert it into Jin Yong.

A completely different perspective deconstructing the world of Naruto, I quite like it

The further you get to the back, the less interesting it becomes. The front can suppress Danzo's strength to death. After his strength continued to increase... He began to be cautious when facing the guardian twelve ninja. His opponent, the Riddler, was led by the Riddler. To deal with daimyo, they even play marriage...

Fans of Naruto who are tired of plot-oriented stories, this book is actually very interesting, the pace is relatively slow, but the narration is pretty good. Grain +

With 1.55 Million words and only 5,000 collected, you label yourself a group portrait?

Although the way to become stronger is nonsense, the plot is okay and counts as food and fodder.

The writing is good, but the plot is too vicious. Minato's death was really shocking 😰

The writing style is similar to the one I read before, which started with the plot of Rain Ninja. Starting from the low level without chakra, watching the protagonist step by step become a qualified ninja. The sentence that impressed me the most is that the life of a ninja is a deception. He deceives himself in life and deceives the enemy in battle. The deception begins when out of sight of the enemy. Another saying is, draw the sword silently.

? ? ? Where are the men? ? ? , If you have to do anything, you have to do it yourself and be the hook'

What the hell, why is there a medieval magical world? I can't stand it anymore. In fact, it should be over after more than 400 chapters. Writing about the magical world without writing about Otsutsuki seems to me to be a continuation of the story. This is not an infinite stream.

How can I put it, the idea of ​​golden finger and unlimited money is quite good, but after entering Konoha, it felt average and a bit unbearable. I feel that if I were in the Land of Rain, hanging out with the three little ones, meeting them in the early stage, wandering with them, etc., It would feel much better 🙂

Very exciting. Different from other Naruto stories. Everything is traceable, the plug-in is very weak, and after reading too many system articles, this one looks great. I watched it after the limited exemption. Why did you change the map? X

I don't understand... What does it mean to turn to the west? Not to mention that the planet that is about to collide with the ninja world does not exist in the original work. First of all, this is very unphysical. If there is civilization on this planet, it should have its corresponding star. Otherwise, how could civilization arise without the sun? So is this the star system where the Western Fantasy planet is located and the star system where the Ninja World planet is located? It's not just two planets colliding. If the Western Fantasy planet is in the star system where the Ninja World planet is located, then different planets should have stable orbits, how could they collide? The ninja world is not a three-body world. If the Xihuan Planet is just a comet, an asteroid or something, then its revolution period and orbit will be very different from the Ninja Planet. This means that the aphelion of the Xihuan Planet may be quite far, and it may have temperatures as cold as Jupiter and Saturn for several years during each revolution period. How could human civilization arise? Even if you ignore physics at all and use chakra and natural energy to explain everything, why was this western fantasy planet so close to the ninja world planet not discovered by Otsutsuki? Is there anything special about this fantasy planet? Nothing makes sense. It's understandable that the author wants to open up a new map, but the story must be reasonable. The protagonist was killed just a few days ago, and the situation in the Chamber of Commerce was unstable. Now that the new structure has just been established, why does the protagonist not worry about anything happening for twenty years after going to a new planet? Is Black Zetsu still there? Don't you care about your family and children? Moreover, according to the author's writing, as long as the power system is restrained, the resurrected Madara can be killed by the five great names. Now that there is no information about the new planet, why does the protagonist dare to go to the new planet alone? The protagonist's life-saving methods are not as good as Orochimaru's. There are many ways to get the protagonist to go to a new map, including Dragon Vein Rampage, etc., But I chose the most outrageous planet collision. From the existence of the Western Fantasy Planet to the protagonist's behavior, everything is unreasonable. And as a Naruto fanfic, one of the core selling points is Naruto's IP. Of course, it's best to change to a map related to Naruto. If it's not possible, you can also use another Japanese comic. Why is it a purely original Western fantasy map? If you think you are good at writing Western fantasy, wouldn't you just write Western fantasy? Can't we write from the beginning that ninjas are in a Western fantasy world, or that the protagonist travels between the ninja world and the Western fantasy world? Suddenly changing to such an original map when the story is getting closer and closer to the finale? It's understandable that you don't want to follow Boruto and write about Otsutsuki, but if you write this original Western fantasy map that has no interactive effect with the ninja world, what does it have to do with the previous article after you write it? It can be regarded as two stories. And you won't get any IP bonuses or IP interactive effects. Let me give an analogy, even if you create a specious Douluo-like planet, but there is no divine world, and then use soul beasts to represent natural energy and human soul power to correspond to chakra, to connect it with your previous ninja world stories, you can still get some IP effects, which is better than using a purely original western fantasy world to make a new map.

I just want to know, how could Orochimaru single-handedly kill Sarutobi Hiruzen during the three battles? Even many years later, when Sarutobi Hiruzen was old and frail, Orochimaru and him faced off against each other in the Four Purple Flame Formation, calling the first and second generation, but they almost failed to defeat him. The strongest ninja in the early days is not fake. During the third war, Orochimaru singled out Sarutobi Hiruzen. If he could escape, it would be considered that Sarutobi Hiruzen was released.

It takes more than 400 cards to kill Danzo, and then more than 400 cards travel to a different world with gods. This development is too big!

The author has created too many second creations, and the writing doesn't even look like Naruto. It's really not possible to create an original world.

I have always wanted to praise the author of this book. There are enough updates and the plot is not bad. It can be called fairy grass. Please continue to update vigorously.

The front part is pretty good, but the back part where the Daimyo side is strengthened is too exaggerated and I'm not interested in watching it.

Is this protagonist the reincarnation of Cao Cao? After reading so many fan stories, this is the first time I see Minato written to death in order to take in Kyuuna... It's not that he can't die, but it feels a bit hasty. And if the daimyo is so powerful, why do they still allow a military organization like the Tolero Village to break up the country and create feudal lords?