
Mortal: I Am Wen Tianren, in Charge of the Ancestral Stone
凡人:在下温天仁,执掌祖石
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 56k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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27Chapters
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Timeline
Wen Tianren's initial strength was written low, which was wrong with the timeline. It is impossible for Han Laomo and Wen Tianren to form elixirs at the same time. Wen Tianren formed elixirs much earlier than Han Laomo. It seems that you followed the animation. Han Laomo first met Wen Tianren when he came out of Xutian Palace when he was about 150 years old, and Wen Tianren was in the later stage of pill formation. Han Laomo formed elixirs when he was more than 120 years old.
Wu Chou is already in the middle stage of elixir formation, and Wen Tianren is still building the foundation. Why is Wen Tianren's talent not even as good as the Five Friends of Mengshan?
Damn it, when I saw the third chapter, it was over. Yuan Yao had already practiced Taoism, and Wen was the one who established the foundation?
TMD, Wu's qualifications aren't too bad, they should be average, so if you try to level up like this at the beginning, bugs will appear. Wen is a master of dual cultivation, and his peer Gao Hanli has two or three normal realms. Wu shu's qualifications are average, but the Jiyin Island family has a great cause. Even in the animation, the Maid of Double Swords is a young elixir-former, which shows that the logic of the animation is to [warm the fake baby] and then help [Shuangjian (beginning of the elixir). But you, who warms the fake elixir in the first chapter, don't have to build the foundation for the two swords in the first chapter? Your brain is numb, and you are so stressed because you are not familiar with the level. [Although there are some problems with the logic of the animation, it unintentionally improves the realm of the original characters, causing the original pill-forming queen to run out on the street in the later stage, but there is no big problem.] [Also, the world of immortality is very realistic. It is normal for Wen Tianren to be so arrogant in the original work, because he is a young fake baby + a treasure boy + a suspected parent of the Six Paths... But you, the animated version of Wen is a fake descendant. If you go out to build foundation pills, it is simply a way to die. ] [The little Foundation Establishment Pill is in trouble at the beginning. If you dare to do business at this stage, are you really afraid that someone will kneel down on your scalp with their divine consciousness, or kill a fake heir of the Six Paths like you in a flash of enthusiasm?
The word "author's furnace" should not be used indiscriminately.
"Double cultivation is dual cultivation." I don't know which work or classic the word "furnace" was originally written in, but its subsequent usage is generally regarded as - The person who makes the furnace is also a tool person. Most fantasy texts use the term "furnace" as a more elegant tool person (paru), and in a literal sense. So don't use the term "furnace cauldron" casually on concubines.
Come on, author, please clamp down
Qidian There are too many authors now, and many old authors have turned away. New authors should calm down and just write first. Isn't it normal to have poor grades? How can there be so many talented newcomers who become gods in one book? Just work hard to finish the book smoothly and slowly find your own rhythm. Newcomers have nothing, no fame, and no experience. They are like barefoot. The most important thing is to keep working hard. Those old authors have already put on vests, and the great master Bai Jin has lived a decent life. You are a newcomer and have just started. You have your shortcomings and advantages. If a newcomer dares to write anything, his liver will be ruined. Come on author! Just calm down, believe in yourself, and just stick to it! It is recommended that you increase your concentration and take a look at it if your mentality becomes bad in the future.
The magic weapon is armor, haha, I don't see it, so I'll give it up.
The writing is quite good. I was still fattening, so why did I cut it off?
Isn't the Six Saints Heavenly Demon Skill a food skill? Once you reach the devil world, you will be gone in one bite 🤭
There are so many mortals in this group, there are already more than two hundred books waiting to be read