Reverberation of Law

Brother, you have a big problem. Who taught you to name your book like this? Have you ever understood the market before writing online articles? The title of your book is a dead giveaway. It's hard for anyone to click on it. The biggest problem is that the title of the book is not attractive enough. Then there is your main text. Your paragraphing is absolutely not good. I have never seen online articles that you divide into paragraphs like this. There is too much content in one paragraph, and a lot of content is piled together, which makes the reading experience very bad. I saw that you recommended the book in the July book review. Didn't you see how others divided it into paragraphs? There is also some nonsense. It feels like reading a manual, and it is also mixed with meaningless descriptions of the environment and appearance. The sentences are okay, but readers like you can't relate to it. It's an invalid description. Finally, there are a lot of setting issues. I'm looking for something. I'm so fascinated by the writing and I'm also fascinated by what I'm reading. I don't know what to do, all kinds of quotation marks, folding, interfaces, and echoes. What are you going to do? All kinds of words with unclear meanings did not play an attractive role at all, but made me more and more uncomfortable as I read.,,,, Finally, I would like to suggest that you first understand the market, starting with the book title, and then research your subject matter and see how others write about your subject matter. To be honest, if I had not quit and looked at your subject matter, I would not have known what type of article you wrote. Fantasy is not fantasy, and fantasy has no flavor of fantasy. Long review only represents my personal opinion. It is recommended that the author delete the review after reading it and leave it in the book review area for fear of affecting other people's judgment.

No title? I suggest you add a title

I can only comment for myself 😭. It's too tiring for others to recommend their new books and post them one by one 😭

Everyone speaks freely, and I accept it with all humility. If you have any abilities or rules you would like to recommend, please leave a message. After all, what I can come up with alone is limited.

The title of your book is a bit unattractive, and the cover should be changed.

It's so well written, keep it up, keep it up

After reading a chapter, I realized that most of what you use is AI, but it was not written by humans.