Back to 84, Starting with Fishing and Hunting

The writing is quite good, relatively fluent, food + level, small opinion: Dogs don't fall in love too often.

Dialect is a special feature of this book. The author must not change it, otherwise the book will be over. It is also recommended that the author pays attention to the authenticity of the countryside of that era and the rationality of the characters and plots. For example, when a young rural woman is given a choice between a disabled person in an urban area and a handsome young man in the countryside, she will choose the former without hesitation. Therefore, the chapter about Wang Wenwen in this book is too protracted.

Not bad, but it looks a bit laborious

In each chapter, the object of the show appears several times without even talking about it. It makes me tired of watching it. It is repeated and emphasized over and over again. Now that I have read Chapter 18, it has appeared almost a hundred times. If it continues to be like this, I really can't read it.

Why do you think everyone is speaking in dialects, but I don't think there are any dialects? The data should be more rigorous? Is pheasant worth 2 yuan per pound or 1 yuan per pound? The prices are different, so please pay attention.

In addition, it is not popular nowadays to write plots about negative characters that disgust readers. The author of the plot about Wu Yang's family should weigh it himself! To be honest, it's not very pleasant, it just makes me feel uncomfortable when I see it.