There Is No God Here, Only the North Sea

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The winter solstice is here again, and blessings are indispensable. I wish you: a good winter, good health for the whole winter, warmth for the winter, and comfort for the winter. Work hard for a winter, and have a wonderful winter. I wish you a good winter!

The title of the book has been changed, and the introduction has been changed. The writing style has been changed. Go through the outline carefully to know what story you want to tell. Who is this person, what does he want to do, what obstacles do he encounter, how do he overcome it, what are the gains, and what is the ending of the story. How many stages is the whole story divided into? What is the core emotion and core selling point of the story? What is the core loop? As for the opening story, at your current level, you cannot do complex operations. Just go into the main plot from the beginning and give the camera to the protagonist. Don't give the shot to other characters casually. Even if there are scenes with other characters, they are all seen from the protagonist's camera. Stand up the protagonist. The role should be streamlined. If it cannot serve the main line and core cycle, the role can be deleted or merged. What problem does the protagonist face, why can't it be solved, and why can Golden Finger help him solve it? What is the first loop? The event is introduced, the event develops, and the event ends. How development develops, how emotions rise and fall. Find a good entry point as the starting point for writing. Even if you have written the opening story, it is also the beginning of a big story. To write a story, there is still a lot to know... Read more, write more, summarize more, think more and analyze more. Take it slow... The passion for writing is the only motivation that can keep you going, and it is also the ultimate motivation. Come on, boy

Come on brother, the beginning is very attractive. This is very rare. Come on come on! !

I came to visit today. After reading the three chapters, it is indeed quite attractive. For longer paragraphs of text, divide it into two or three paragraphs, or between three and a half paragraphs, and the reading experience will be better. It is a good fantasy work and has been added to the bookshelf. Please keep updated 🙂